Timetraveler! HoshixOC Short Story

Description

What would you do to save your family?

Hoshi's life had been a little less than unusal. 

I mean, he's a time travler, so that's about as unusual as it can get.

But what happens when his world starts to fall apart?

There's an evil force who is slowly draining Hoshi's father of his extraordinary traveling abilities, and it's up to Hoshi to stop it.

But, it's dangerous to go alone...so take a companion! 

 

Foreword

I know the first few chapters are going to be a tad short, but I just want to focus on establishhing characters before really driving the storyline through. I hope that makes sense. Also, this is really the first multi-chapter thing I've ever written, so I apologize in advance if it's a bit sloppy. I'll try my best to give good content! This is also the first time I've ever shared my writing publicly, only ever having my close friends read some one-shots in the past. Anyway, I hope everyone enjoys this story, and let me know what you all think. 

                                          -Happy reading!~

                                                            Victoriaisnothere

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NADAvheart #1
Chapter 5: omo omo this this BEAUTIFUL
Rivermi #2
Chapter 5: Wow, this just got even more interesting
anitzisawesome
#3
Chapter 5: The suspense good grief
anitzisawesome
#4
Chapter 3: AAAAAA WHAT HAPPENS
NADAvheart #5
Chapter 3: i am so looking forward to the next chapter ....... mmmm yess
anitzisawesome
#6
Chapter 2: NO DAD! PLEASE BE OK
anitzisawesome
#7
Chapter 1: I love the concept it's so cute I'm loving this story!
Rivermi #8
Chapter 2: Hmm this is pretty interesting. But wow I hope the dad's okay :o
Just a thing, but, the younger brothers should call the older brothers "hyung". "Oppa" is something younger girls say to older guys.
Looking forward to the next update ^^
NADAvheart #9
Chapter 2: oh my god what just happend i hope he's going to be okey .
NADAvheart #10
Chapter 1: Oh my god How come no one comment on this because its AMAZING
Please upload soon