Requirements Versus Desires

Cruel Magic
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The next few days passed in what seemed a whirlwind. Jeonghan had taken to searching him out each morning and they would sepnd the day together, talking of things that Jisoo had never spoken out loud about, afraid of people's judgement and the way that his wishes would interfere with his birthright. Around Jeonghan, though, he felt as if he could be himself, no judgement or feeling like he had to keep things hidden. He wasn't used to such an emotional freedom, and it made him wary, but he couldn't seem to stop the connection. He couldn't make sense of it either, and that was frightening.

Jeonghan seemed to be affected as well, speaking of his life and sharing his griefs with Jisoo. He had seemed surprised at it but when Jisoo commented on their newfound ease with one another, Jeonghan had merely shrugged. "I suppose maybe it's fate," he said slyly, his eyes glancing over toward Jisoo but stopping short of meeting his gaze. 

It was nearly evening of the fourth day since the immortals had arrived, and the two of then had made their escape to the garden. A small smile played on Jeonghan's thin lips as the wind whipped at his long hair, their perch atop the garden wall a perfect place to speak without fear of eavesdroppers.

Or fear of being watched, the secluded garden a perfect hiding spot for their budding friendship. Or at least, Jisoo had considered it friendship, but when Jeonghan leaned closer to press his lips ever so slightly to Jisoo's own, the human hadn't pulled away at all. It felt... right. Electric. Like everything in the world had pointed to this moment, this place, with Jeonghan. His eyes closed of their own accord and he lifted his left hand to cup Jeonghan's cheek, drawing the immortal closer to him and deepening the kiss.

"I shouldn't be doing this," he whispered when Jeonghan pulled back for breath. It was true, he had so much on his shoulders, so much expected of him; he was betrothed, for Light's sake! But Jeonghan only laughed softly and shook his head.

"Then don't," he teased, before leaning back in for another kiss.

And Jisoo ignored his command and kissed him back, their lips melding together perfectly in the cool evening air. He knew it couldn't last, knew that Jeonghan would be staying behind at the Keep to investigate the happenings with the sheep while Jisoo went to the wedding with his family. And beyond that, he knew he would have to marry Namjoo, would have to move forward in the demands of his mortal life, knew that Jeonghan would far outlive him. This was the only time that this could happen, the only time that he could do what he wanted, and it couldn't last. 

But for this moment, it was perfect.

At dinner that evening he felt Namjoo's gaze on him, but when he finally looked up at her, he realized that she was, instead, focused on Jeonghan. Her large eyes were studying the immortal sitting beside Jisoo, his long fingers wrapped around his spoon as he took delicate sips of his soup. Jisoo felt something inside him go cold at her close inspection, and he suddenly wondered how much she knew. Or at least, how much she suspected... she couldn't know anything unless she had been in the garden, and there was no way she had been. He didn't even thnk she knew it existed, it would require her to be adventurous to find it at all. She wouldn't risk ruining her dress to find something so precious as the garden. 

He was so ficsued on watchingg her that he jumped in surprise when Jeonghan elbowed him none too gently in the side. "What?" he said, turning to the immortal, then realized belatedly that everyone was looking at him. "I'm sorry..." he began, unsure what he was apologizing for, and his father shook his head with a derisive snort.

"Jisoo, try to pay attention for once," he snapped, his temper drawn tighter than usual as he glared at his youngest child. "I was explaining to Honored Heechul of how I have requested for a Mage of the Tower to come and help investigate this... well. And that since we will be gone at your sister's wedding when the Mage arrives, you will be staying behind to handle things."

Jisoo felt numb for a long moment as he digested his father's words, then he shook his head and clarified. "So you want me to miss Seungah's wedding? My only sister, marrying an immortal I have never met. My sister, who I will never see again. You want me to stay behind?" He hadn't realized his voice was raising until he was standing on his feet, shouting at his father where he sat three seats away. "I am not something to simply be thrown away or left behind! You can't do thi

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My Seventeen prequel now has a title... "Cruel Magic". I will be starting the story soon, I hope you all enjoy it!

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 6: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1082250/6'>Epilogue</a></span>
This ending was nice, but also a little sad. I hope that Jeonghan will be able to heal and trust Seungcheol enough to let him in. I look forward to continuing this in The Seal of Light.
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 5: I wasn't expecting this to happen, but I think Jisoo handled it as well as possible. He was also sweet to realize the way he had treated Namjoo. Now I'm so curious about who killed his family and also if he will be able to fix things with Jeonghan.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 1: I like the world you have created here, and I'm excited to read more as the story progresses. I feel bad for Jisoo, who seems to be very unhappy in his current situation. The squirrel nickname cracked me up, too.
Amalya
#4
Chapter 6: *wipes at tears in my eyes* Beautifully summed up indeed. And excellently explained. Oh the irony of how things ended up with Youngsaeng's relationship to Jisoo as well as Seungcheol. XD Great tie in for explaining a couple things from the end of TSoL as well. And I'm very glad to see what Jeonghan decided at the end here. I figured he would realize what Jisoo had done and why, and I'm happy to see that they were both able to come to terms with it.

I'm slightly upset over Heechul's role in all of that, and the result of his trial/sentencing, but that too was very believable. If disappointing and annoying. -_- But well done overall indeed. This was a joy to read and I'm quite pleased with how everything has ended, including the story of TSoL and all that. ;) Bravo lady! <3
Amalya
#5
Chapter 5: Oh, those cutting words. They were expected after everything that happened, but as Jisoo also realized, they still hurt very much. I know I expected something tragic to happen but that was not what I was anticipating, and I applaud you for that twist that wholly upset everything in the story. Cruel but believable, harsh but necessary for his character to remain, you pulled that off beautifully and redeemed Namjoo's character from everything else that we'd been led to believe about her from Jisoo. Nicely done, my dear. And after all his struggling against duty, I can only admire Jisoo as he has realized what he can and cannot do now that it has come to this. Even as you break my heart, you make me feel proud of him, even in this sorrowful time. Poor dears, all around. *sniffs*

This certainly helps me see how Jeonghan might have been changed by such an encounter and why he is such a vastly different character in the story that follows. Quite believable but oh so sad at the same time. I am curious to see how you will wrap everything up now though. As well as why the Immortals wouldn't allow Mages at the wedding. But that is a question for another time, and it may well have been answered in the SoL. Ah well. On to the final piece!
Amalya
#6
Chapter 4: Well then! Things are certainly progressing quickly. O.o I had not expected that development exactly. Their relationship feels like that of infatuated younglings discovering passion for the first time. And considering Jeonghan is 'only' forty, I'd believe it. There's no getting around that things between them have moved at a fast rate, but at the same time, they do seem rather meant for each other. The level of comfort and ease they experience around each other isn't something that usually happens so quickly, but I fear what it will also mean for them a bit later. Especially with that look from Namjoo...

And Jisoo's reaction in the dining hall was completely believable and understandable. I'd be pissed off too if I wouldn't be able to say farewell to a favored sibling of mine either. >.> I also liked that you only implied what happened after. It seems to fit things better in this instance. The knowing is all that is necessary and the showing I think could diminish the moment. Nicely done. But I still fear what may happen next. It is rare when things continue perfectly from this point in a story. haha

Onward to the next chapters! :D
Amalya
#7
Chapter 2: I know I didn't comment on the first chapter but you are off to a fantastic beginning. I'm thoroughly delighted that your characters live and breathe and, while Jeonghan could come off as slightly patronizing, he's also incredibly amusing and endearing in other ways. haha Jisoo is certainly a brat but he's also quite tolerable and has his own amusing moments as well. lol I do rather enjoy all the more up front characters at the moment, and while I feel bad for Namjoo and Jisoo in their arranged marriage positions, I don't think she deserves such disregard. Or course, it does go along with his character so far.

I'm far more curious about how Jisoo and Jeonghan are going to get along in the future. And I'm doubly intrigued about this slaughtered sheep business. Hmm. They sound like demons indeed. But time will tell. It was nice to see that even immortals can be surprised a bit by 'mere' humans and Jisoo's response about his father's reaction made me crack a smile.

As usual, your descriptions are lovely. I can see pretty much everything beautifully as I read along, and that scene with the lacquer in Jisoo's bedroom was a nice touch indeed. ;) I do find it ironic it took us to chapter 2 to learn Jeonghan's name but it also makes a certain kind of sense. I'm also delighted to see Heechul here. ^_^ You've got me curious so on to the next bit!
Sarissa
#8
Chapter 5: No. NO. NOOOOOOOO. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I CAN'T- I MEAN - NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. NOPE. I CAN'T. FIND ME IN FIFTY YEARS, BECAUSE I AM NOT OVER THIS.

...I'm just gonna go cry in a corner and wallow in my agonizing misery. Bye.
faithful-lie
#9
Chapter 6: Omg so I KNEW fròm the title I just knew it from the beginning that it couldn't end well I just had that sense of impending doom you know? When things just seem inevitable and you can just predict the drop off the cliff that is to come BUT I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT !
Honestly, the way you built them up was so skilled, with a delicate hand haha it didn't feel forced that they fell together like that so kudos! And omg those hinted scenes just saying that if you ever write those I'd totally be here for that *.* lol but per year me aside, let's go back to your writing. I expected to hate Namjoo but somehow you never quite made her the enemy and in the end she turn out okay *confused* But to me, the most important thing was that I liked this. So much so that I just couldn't put it down and I had to keep reading the next bit right up until I was done and the disappointment at having finished something awesome set in ;) the ending was so unexpected and the epilogue just felt kind of bleak and sad despite the hopes for Jeonghan set up at the end. It was heavy with loss I suppose... An awesome read thank you so much <3
Kara-Melodie
#10
Chapter 6: So I suppose the question is, why would that person order and orchestrate the wedding murder? Was that person after something or spurned and jealous? Curious minds want to know. *grins* (well, ok, I want to know... hehehe) *trying to avoid spoiling it for others*