BUUMEI: JA KITAE hello there immi and thank you for being the first to apply!! i'm still sitting here trying to figure out how you got this done so quickly lmao. the basics are all down pat, and i do find it a bit interesting that he learned italian to stand out. nice choice of face claim, by the way, i love ken a lot!!

the way you wrote his personality was so pretty ( for lack of a better word ) and elaborate, and all the details are finely written without any unnecesary ramblings ( unlike mE ). i do love his backstory but ye it would be cool if you could add more trivia l ol.

the whole interview was so captivating and gave me a really good sense of who he is while he talks and how he acts with the queen. i'm sure someone gentle would fit kitae really well, and if he's chosen i'll be sure to find someone perfect for him!!

ys i did check out that cards of life website it's really cool (i'm a 9 of diamonds wink); i was planning on having the consciences come in when they're in donghwa ( and if they leave donghwa, they can't hear their consciences anymore unless they're in the other realm ); contenue is pronounced kohn-tn-yu, if that helps in any way haha

okay i hope i don't sound biased for saying this but your writing is so beautiful?? i couldn't stop reading the interview ( and the whole app, really ). your writing is really satisfying and full of content; that's just all i could think about while reviewing. anyway, aside from that very important note that you absolutely needed to know, thank you so so much for applying, immi!! kitae was a really great character ♥

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OVERWRITE: HAN KIWOONG hi there lani and ty for almost being the first to apply :^) okay anyway, the basics are great and i like the fact that he learned german to understand red while she yells lol. i can definitely see hwanhee as a twenty-year-old, especially when you mention his height is 180cm, so i'll let you off on using a younger member of a rookie group :^)))

now that i see how you sorted the traits, it makes it a lot easier to read the personality because tbh there's not much room to expand when you write a paragraph of your neutral traits, your positive traits, your negative traits, etc. and it gets boring!! good idea lani!! but i almost cried bc the background!! thANKS

okay i'll just say after reading two interviews, i realized i should have written more in mine because tbh it sounds so much prettier when other people write theirs...............also.......red is so aggressive omg

( i'm gonna comment on details in the bg here too ) ok so kiwoong and taegyu just sound so good for each other even if their relationship doesn't end up officially together, i really liked this collab with dearie!! a lot!!

ok lani get out of here

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DEARIE: IM TAEGYU hello there kit, and thank you so much for taking your time to apply! ok ok i had been trying not to read this in full until i got to review it but i read it like twice already ( v sorry if i'm not detailed enough haha;; )

the basics were all very fine n dandy ( sry 4 that ), i just wanted to mention woozi is an a+ choice of face!! i also love the way you described his appearance, it seems everyones' writing is so elegant and neat?? anyhow, bye @ the first sentence of ur personality taegyu sounds so interesting ( for lack of a better word ) to write, especially after reading his background like man,,,,,taegyu can i hug u

i really really really like that his conscience is robin hood and the personality that you gave him ( & its ok about the parallels, robin's lack of pre-adventuring background could be considered flexible for the both of us hehe ), i can kinda hear his voice in taegyu's head, if that makes any sense haha; his & robin's arguing was quite entertaining as well!!

i really liked how you set up your apps for the collab because it seems like you guys really worked hard on incorporating each others' characters?? i know lani likes getting hers in first so their story really flows when i review both of your apps in a row; aside from those notes, i adore pretty much everything about their story ( & the height difference !!!!! ).

alright, thank you so much for applying, kit! taegyu was such a good character to review! ♥

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NEMNUONG: ANDY BENNETT heyo chen and thank you so much for applying!! i love his quote lmao; the basics are also quite loved, everything seems to be in order! im sry for that awkward sentence i'm so glad you used kim taehyung; he would fit andy's personality really well. pmsl his abnormal fashion is horrid ( i'll be sure to give him a pair of iconic transparent jyp pants if he's chosen )

speaking of his personality!! the traits compliment each other very well and he's be such a fun character to write about ?? but omg his early years :-((( can i just give everyone a hug ur all so sad,,, bUT now he has his friends and his auntie so it's all better :') ( "his lavender body wash" andy pls )

i'm so angry @ him for that tinker bell pun and his dumb shades i swear i'll be dead by the time i'm done reading this app; ok back to the actual content;;;;; the whole interview was quite nice and gave me a good taste of how he would be in the story itself ♥

im sad now andy deserves happiness his love story is my death— o kaY ur lil scene reqs box totally made me remember that i forgot that section ty darling!! and thank you so much for applying, chen, your app was v good and i could not find any errors!!!

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AIMASHOU: HANA JEON-ENGELS hello there, tilda!! isn't that this ~ thing thank you so much for taking your time to apply!! ♥ before we start, can i just say i love your username? it's really cute!! ok anyway the basics are all great so i don't have much to comment on here usually lol. i love suzy to death and she definitely fits hana's style and personality.

speaking of her personality, it was written very to-the-point, which i like a lot because it saves space haha. her background is quite interesting, and the romance bw her adoptive parents is really cute!! the trivia too!!

ok but clara is so cute in the interview, she's so polite and adds cute side comments to hana's thoughts; the interview itself was also quite enjoyable and gave me a good idea of how she speaks and acts while talking. ty for writing a bit on the l/i section, too, the plot is loose enough for me to make up my own story for her if she's chosen lol

i'm doing great thank you, darling ♥ thank you so much for applying, tilda, i couldn't find any errors in your app so you're accepted :-)

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EXPIRATION_DATE: MOON JAE i almost called u date because i didn't see the underscore hello there momo and thank you for applying (again)! i honestly wasn't expecting a change in gender but that's okay!! lmao let's get started on the review-
the basics are all fine, as well as his appearance and fashion; lee min ki does fit his personality as well.

everyone is so emo wow his background is nice and directly shows how his past shaped how he is now. it's quite sad how his adoptive parents lied about him being their bio child and helps me sympathize with jae a lot,,,,

i know i said this about iseul but having the sandman as his conscience is really interesting and i'd love to see their relationship / interactions. i felt his presence was missing from the interview, so you could add his words in somewhere and have jae interact with him!! refer to my app (or other applicants') for examples.

i know you were waiting for a while for this review and sry about holding off on it haha < / 3 thank you for applying, momo, just fix that one error and you'll be accepted!!

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JUMPIN4JOY: KALANI JUNG hello joy and thank you so much for applying! i adore her ethnicity!! thank you for this hawaiian barbie doll haha. btw the explanation for her nickname is a bit strange? i'm not sure that's how fat distribution works; your metabolism doesn't just break down your fat like that, fat is worked off with exercise or work and there's usually still residual fat left after doing so. it's not healthy to be super skinny around the age girls stop growing height-wise, so i'll advise you to give her a bit more weight since she's close to being underweight.

although she was born with light skin, it normally takes a few weeks or a month to regain light skin after a tan, not a few days. not to mention, gwangju is landlocked so surfing isn't an option; unless you were talking about her being in hawaii. what does having a "tumblr-like" style mean? be more specific. i didn't specify any means of "battle clothes", and since contenue is another realm, their fashion sense and general being is completely different from ours. i'll ask you to take that part out because i was planning on the gang to just go on with clothes from contenue.

she has too many traits, some are bound to contradict, such as easygoing and reckless. this amount doesn't give much room for me to expand on her personality. cut down the amount to only the ones that are vital to her personality. i wouldn't say her personality is cliché, more overemphasized than it should be— adventurous and daring are basically the same thing. the amount of her personality traits makes reading the elaboration confusing, which is why i'd like to say again that you should cut down on the amount. not to mention, i don't think there's a jungle around every corner in hawaii..... and i'm sure her adoptive parents would at least have an alarm system if they were in the military, especially if she were an only child. most of the trivia is not relevant to the story. does liking spam expand her personality? what does saving nadiya's name as "nadiya hoe" have to do with the story?

i'd say the best thing about the app is the interaction between kalani and jane, considering their personalities are a bit similar and the relationship between person and conscience is usually my favorite part.

in all honesty, your application lacks realism. i'd suggest you rewrite her completely and ask questions if you're unsure of anything.

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NEUKKIMII: KI YOOHWA hello myungie and thank you for applying!! i'm gonna start off by saying i love that the color palette of the app and photos (whether intentional or not) is so nice?? all the basics seem to be in order, so we'll just move on. i love seulgi!!!! she definitely suits yoohwa, who is a precious thing and must be protected.

her personality is detailed and definitely shows me what kind of person she is. i believe her background somewhat shaped how she is now, which is what i like to see. the interaction between yoohwa and kaguya is so cute; they seem so much like best friends.

i like that there's enough wiggle room for more interpretation in both her personality and love story, as well as letting me decide their ending. if she was chosen, i'd be able to expand her personality from beginning to end ♥

i'm so sorry if this review wasn't too in-depth, i couldn't find any errors in your app except a few typos, if that's any consolation! thank you so much for applying, myungie!!

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RAPMEME: LEONHARD YOUN hello my precious meme anh, and thank you for applying! and with min suga bye anyway let's go to the actual review; i'd say all his basics are definitely fine and are within reason (and realism). his appearance was described beautifully, and i can say the same for his style as well ("i am a walking piece of art, i can't look bad in anything" don't we all know that mr youn).

i'd say saying your writing is good is an understatement because wow your writing is elegant and so descriptive?? i'm so sorry if i sound biased but i can't help it i think i read this like 3 times ok back to the actual content— his personality is interesting, and he seems like a quiet guy until he opens his mouth. not to mention the background tugged at my heartstrings everyone is so sad,,,but that's ok his trivia is comforting

the connection between him and red is quite nice, i can tell the two are close even if they conflict a little. their interaction is well-displayed in the interview, as well! and the love interest section is so long i love it!! so just to clarify, he's bicurious but you'd prefer he'd end up with a guy right? either way i'm sure his love life would end beautifully if he's chosen ;;

 

there was overall nothing wrong with your app; thank you for applying, anh!

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IMADREAMER: JUDE BAE hello ray and thank you for applying! the basics seem fine but i'm not sure how learning mandarin and french would benefit her? i'm sure she wouldn't use them in the story if she were chosen since it's set in korea. i'd say her appearance and style are fine, so no need to fix anything in that section.

she has too many traits; it would be best to cut down the amount because they're bound to contradict and it makes reading the elaboration a lot more confusing than it should. also, if she learned mandarin at the same time as she did french, wouldn't she have the same amount of knowledge in both? please clarify. the rest of the bg was okay though!!

i love that her conscience is rafiki, i feel like they'd be an interesting pair. i think this is my fault for not elaborating on it in the app but can you change her token? it's supposed to be something handheld like a pocketwatch or something; it's not your fault, don't worry!! their interactions are quite cute, rafiki seems like a father-figure to jude. i think the relationship with her love interest would be really cute!!

thank you so much for applying, ray! just fix the errors and/or clarifications, and you'll be accepted!

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XXKPOPHOLIC: LEILANI KAWAI hey there jiayi (ooh pretty name) and thank you for applying! i love the concept of hyorin as a korean-hawaiian, and i can definitely see her as so. the basics are fine, so we'll just move on from there. i can tell her appearance shows what her personality is like, which is good!! i also like her fashion ♥

her personality is very sweet and would probably contrast among the others as the sunshine of the group. the elaboration definitely helped me get to know her so you did well in writing. i really liked her background, the fantasy element incorporated into her birth was very interesting and perfect for the story.

ponyo as a conscience is such a cute idea, and i feel like leilani could act as a mother figure to her haha. i feel like the interview was a bit short, so could you add a bit of ponyo's interactions with her? for an example, you could probably look at my app or other applicants' :-)

i can't answER UR QUESTION IM SORRY i really liked leilani and

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LION_HEART36: TAKURA KENTA hi there yinnie and thank you so much for applying! sorry for the long wait and lack of reply, i know you've been waiting for a while ;; the basics were fine (+ it's cute that they just designated him as leader bc he just seems like one-)

kenta's personality is very well-balanced and well-written; i'm glad you added contenue as well, it was a bit of a surprise bc i forgot about that- anyway his background is very detailed and sweet; i can see his relationship with the other saviors is an important part of his life. wow!! u even have relationships with people from contenue i love it

the relationship between kenta and hook is great, they seem like old friends. his token also seems very interesting, is there any use for the liquid universe? i'm just curious. omg captain swan ok i know i've probably said this a million times but i really do like his relationship with everyone, especially his love interest!! im just particular to rival-type relationships hehe.

that concludes this review; thank you so much for applying, yinnie, i enjoyed reading about kenta!

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BAEPSAE: LUCAS SEO haha scream at me alice thank you for applying dear!! ahh im so glad you used seokjin and peter pan (upon my suggestion wink wink)!! anyway let's start the review; the basics are all fine and reasonable so rly what's the point of reviewing that section we can move on from there

the appearance and style are also a+ and don't need any correcting. his personality is a great match for seokjin, as well. lucas is so sad omg why is everyone so sad,,,maybe it's bc korea is racist,,,hahab ye / ok his interaction with andy is really funny they're like bfs right?? best friends??

i know i've said this about pretty much everyone but i mean it and the relationship bw lucas and pan is so good!! it seems like all the peter pans like to fight with their humans don't they ??

alright this was a particularly short review
get out of my life
ily alice

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XRICHAN: BANG NORAE & NARAE yo sorry i only put one weapon / token down, it looks prettier with all of it just on one line lol // h EY HELLO HI THere ri!! sorry for the long wait, i was being v lazy :^) thank you for applying (and waiting haha by e) i have 2 tabs open so forgive me if i'm talking about the wrong twin!!

the basics for both apps seem fine (but u know what would have been cute,,,,if norae's nickname was noraebang), as well as the appearance and style; fashion does help distinguish the pair since i wasn't sure which pic to designate to which girl until i read it lol.

i can see norae and narae are opposites, no being the more boyish and playful one while na is sort of more straight-laced(?). the two create good contrast!!! though they're almost complete opposites, i can tell their bond is strong (it's probably a twin thing haha). wow bye i didn't even realize but her stage name is noraebang i love it ur a genius

hey i made the conscience pic as hansel and gretel because there were like zero gifs or pics of apollo & artemis but don't worry they're still the consciences haha. i can see their relationships are both very close to their consciences and pls it's very cute

i like that one of them would have a one-sided relationship and the other would have something special with her love interest (so there could be possible conflict!! exciting!!).

overall, there were no mistakes in either apps, thank you for applying, ri!!

THEAWKWARDONE: JACQUELINE SONG hello jade and thank you so much for applying! i love im yoona, thank you for using her as a face claim as well. the basics are fine, so we can just move on ♥ both the appearance and style were very well-written, and i do adore the quotes you used above them!

the written personality is great, but there were too many traits, so it was a bit tedious to make sure each was elaborated on; just for future reference, make sure you only cut down on the traits that are most important to your character's personality. :-) but tbh!! her background was an emotional roller coaster!! im so sad she and nadiya could have been the graceful buddies of this savior squad lmao but that's okay,,, whispers where did u get that pic above the #squad section it's perfect also all the trivia is so cute (and very relevant!!).

as you mentioned before, i do see them behaving as brother and sister, which makes up for the lack of attention her adpotive family gave her ♥ and argh the relationship b/w her and her love interest is so nice-

thank you so much for applying, jade, jaqueline was such a joy to read and review!

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JAESEONGGIE: SON MINA hello jae and thank you for applying! ahh i miss glam so much, thank you for using jinhee though ;; korean-romanian is such an interesting ethnicity and it relates to dracula since vampires r from romania lol. the whole basics, appearance, and style sections are fine, so we can move on.

her personality is great, well-balanced and leaves enough room for expansiom throughout the story. i love that in the background, mina's relationship with dracula is first explained and would probably be expanded on in the interview?? idk sorry for ramblling i just really like vlad as a conscience

her interaction with dracula is small but i know they're close based on the things he tells her, and they do seem like best friends. i'm sure if she's chosen, i'll find someone to fit her ideal type, or would at least good with her haha

thank you so much for applying, jae, mina was great to review and read over!

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RAIXLECH: HAYASHI AYANO thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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SUAU147: BIANCA JUNG thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application. except for the missing character quote under the header. please correct this and you'll be accepted!

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FIORITURE: ADDISON JANG thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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YOU-GAVE-US-A-GALAXY: MARIA TAYLOR thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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HORIYAH: HA AREUM thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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ASIANNOODLES: CHO JUNYEOL thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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TOONEAR: LIM SUNHWA thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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MESSEJI-HO: KANG YEEUN thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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URANGUTANG: AHN MALIK thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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BLINDED--: LEE WOONMYEONG thank you for applying! i did love the idea of woonmyeong, but (and i'm not sure whether i made this clear or not) your character has to have been born in this realm. the kids don't get to contenue (or even know about it) until they're twenty, and the only people that should know about the other realm as of now are only of my knowledge. please change her background (and ethnicity, as witch isn't exactly a race) and any other parts that mention her being any different from this world. the squad is supposed to be parading around rn as kids who like to hang out with their friends and be normal; everything else seems to be fine, her parallels just seem a little extreme. thank you for fixing your errors, may!

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-YINGHUA: SONG TAEIL thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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RORIHIME: PARK SOOYOUNG thank you for applying! there was nothing notably wrong with your application.

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