Clockwork

Description

People do incredibly foolish things sometimes. Others overcome themselves and are able to move mountains if needed. Minjun's goals for today are simple; shaving, cleaning house, and oh yes building a time machine.

 

 

Foreword

Every story starts with the first step into the unknown future or a look into the past.

In order to save someone Minjun tries to do the impossible.

 

 

First thing first: Merry Christmas everyone
I’m a little blank right now so I will keep it short and simple. Thank you for taking the time and read through this and of course comments and more then appreciated. But more than anything else I just hope you will enjoy it and have a great day ♥

 

 


Dear Amalya I’m sorry this story took me a while. I wished I had a month longer to work on it however it’s Christmas and I’m done and I hope you will like the outcome of the story even though be prepared it’s a little sad and melancholic, somehow. 

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2PM2PM2PM #1
Chapter 1: I really like the idea of Minjun time traveling :) It must be fun to visit a completely different time, but also difficult.
This story was so detailed! It must have been a lot of work to do the research and write everything out.
And Chansung was so intriguing and exciting in this story! I'm sure the two of them had so much fun in the past! I can picture it so :)
Amalya #2
Chapter 1: Interesting story. I'd half hoped for a bit of romance or something in there but it was certainly a detailed and unexpected story. I can see why the world kind of got away from you since there are quite a few questions in my head now too, but I think that's the nature of stories like this. Especially when time travel is involved. haha

I really enjoyed the way in which you had him prepare and all the memories he had with his father. It was also interesting in how he simply didn't feel for a while after the beginning and I have to wonder if a part of him wasn't just recognizing what his mind didn't realize yet. Though I will say that Chansung's part in this was fascinating. Why exactly was Minjun's blood foul to him? I was a bit confused about that part.

As for the rest, you obviously did your research or were just really good about making things make sense. I'm inclined to believe the former, all things considered. haha That whole vampire thing in the middle: the clues anyway, certainly caught me off guard but it helped me figure out what Chansung was pretty much immediately. lol I was just curious to see how that whole thing would play out. I also found it fascinating how his speech patterns changed halfway through them talking to each other. That was interesting too.

But the whole scene with Minjun and his brother later made me grin for sure. :D You're right about the ending being a little melancholic, since there isn't a whole lot of resolution and plenty of material to make a continuation, but it was quite the story in the end. Thank you for the lovely Christmas present! I can't imagine how much time it might have taken you to iron out and pull together so again, thank you. And I hope you had an absolutely lovely holiday yourself. :D
Amalya #3
Oh! I'm excited that you are the one that got my prompt, YuYuan! I'm very much looking forward to reading this and I definitely understand the wish for more time, but I'm sure I'll enjoy it all the same. Even if the ending does have a little bit of sadness or melancholy emotions. I should have some time to read it later today or tomorrow and I'll be sure to let you know what I think! Thank you in advance and a very Merry Christmas to you too! <3
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