Chapter 30: OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I'M SO LAAAATE BUT I'M HERE NOW AUTHOR NIM <3
THE OFFICE PART IS SO WELL WRITTEN OMG I'M IN LOVE (the entire chapter is but dayum that part just really stands out!) Also, the girls got a new manager \o/ yayyy, manager oppa will finally be able to rest while manager unnie is working omo
Looking super forward to Ethereal TV!
The Itaewon part is also still so good *-*
And of course Christmas. I was wondering if you would alter Meilin finding out about Dajung's eating disorder, I'm so glad you didn't cus it show how much of a human Meilin actually is. She might be cold but she's still caring, most people would have probably expectec her to threaten Dajung with gainning weight or else she would tell their manager or her fellow members, instead she respected Dajung which is the main reason as to why I ship the 99 liners together, MeiDa for lyfe! xd
I just really wanted to say that Ethereal achievements are amazing tbh! ETHEREAL HWAITING!
Quite sad you erased the love story between Yoongi and Meilin ;; I was expecting some drama in the future between Yoongi and Youngmin and even Jaehyun, who's head over heels for our ice queen.
PS. Jisoo in those gifs tho TTwhy is she so pretty?
I really love the clothes you picked out and how they all belong or to Jessica or to Taeyeon haha. TaengSic have an amazing sense of fashion though, especially Jessica! Afterall, she does have a fashion line ^^
Thanks so much for updating, and sorry for the long comment!
Chapter 29: HOLY NUGGETS KJADNCKSJN AFF FINALLY LET ME CHANGED MY PASSWORD AND I THINK IM FINALLY SAFE OMG IM GONNA CRY AKJDNSJKN.
OK THE CHAPTER OH HOW I MISSED ETHEREAL, MY BABIES.
Don't ppl know by not to wake up Jangmi jesus christ, it's like yall want to get hurt.
5 AM PERFECT TIME MY LET MY CHILDREN SLEEP!
Jangmi honey why are you torturing yourself. Like we all know you have great legs but JUST WEAR SOME SWEATS IN WINTER OK?!
SAERON SLEEPS WITH HER EYES OPEN OMFG!! I honestly find that so creepy and don't understand how ppl can do it *shivers*.
It's honestly so entertaining to read scenes of Ethereal in the morning; the contrast between each member is hilarious and really shows what a close family they are.
YES YOU SLANDER MANAGEMENT JANGMI LEADER, YOU TELL 'EM.
Dajung sweetie, staying healthy and fit has an impact on how you sound. EAT MY CHILD - OR AT LEAST TRY! That's right, listen to Jangmi and Kyulbin.
One of These Nights is honestly such a beautiful song and dance to watch and listen too.
Yes it is jangmi, it is your fault. Stop corrupting the poor maknae with your sarcastic ways.
Meilin, can you sit next to me in exams so you can whisper the answers to me please? thanks bro.
YES THE FLASH BARRY IS SUCH A CUTIE PATOOTIE
The whole mental health thing is actually a very good idea. It brings awareness to the conditions and helps ppl to understand them more.
LOL DON'T TAKE THE GROCERY STORE AWAT FROM THE KIDS! THAT'S TORTURE!
oK THAT IOI JAB WAS SO UNNECCESSARY - I CAN FEEL MY TEARS BUILDING UP AGAIN FFS MAN
I'm honestly so happy I got my account back and I was smiling throughout this whole chapter tbh<3
Chapter 29: THE GIRLS WILL BE RELEASING A SPECIAL CHRISTMAS ALBUM! OMG YAAS
'Wish Tree' and 'The Carol' are so good! It would having been amazing if you could have included 'Wish List' by F(x) I truly love that song ;;
Chapter 6: Its okay roseus!! Really i dont mind, i hope your laptop will get better (???) soon!! Omg ethereal TV aaahhh im excited. I feel like a spoiled child whenever you do double updates :"D
Chapter 6: awww ;; i hope you can get your laptop asap and that you won't have any more problems with it
i'll patiently wait for the upcoming updates for ethereal ^^
Chapter 29: Wow 5am thats early :0 poor ethereal. 5am here is the usual time i wake up for school ahaa. Ahaha aw i spot dajung being a mom :") someone stop kyulbin from cursing xD and wow...how does saeron sleep with her eyes open? Thats wow...one of a kind :0
To stuff the girls with a large amount of food only to have them not eat again throughout the entire day...their energy will be drained, the food is not enough. I can see you subtly dropping hints of dajung's eating disorder. Uri dajungie ;_; i hope she eats well in the future. I like how jangmi and saeron's relationship gets better it makes me feel soft :") and YEEES one of these nights im pumped up!! The choreo is hard though no joke. Dajung -- please eat a lot moree T^T. On the other hand wow meilin be my tutor please im failing school :". Seriously if i have to choose between meilin's brains or beauty i'll choose brains, i wanna swap my brain with hers
Oh my i never knew red velvet's one of these nights mv is about a mental sickness...i am mindblown. I only see one of these nights mv as beautifully aesthetic. Lowkey excited bcs OFTN era is one of my faves ♡♡♡ ethereal fighting!!
NEW DORMS woohoo!! I guess this means more bonding moments ?? Hehehe :"D. Also imagine waking up from the ethereal's dorm one day, and as you went out of the door to go and buy some milk you bumped into chungha, the kim chungha. I'll do anything to be in ethereal's position right now
Note : Yaay im exciteed!! Wow to think that a year almost pass in the alternate universe of ethereal ~ im so proud. Im getting emotional aha :" yaas wannaone and weki meki debuted! I havent checked out their mvs yet though lel. Is weki meki's debut not good?
Chapter 29: I want to really say that you can really see the evolution of Dajung's eating disorder. It first started with subtle mentions of it and now they are becoming less subtle, it's so realistic. Her eating disorder is becoming such a big part of her life she can longer hide it from her fellow members because she just simply doesn't have the will to eat and wants to lose as much weight as possible.
Seojun is really a diligent manager! I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO ETHEREAL'S TV OMG! Will you do it similar to LOONA's? Because LOONA's TV is so good and amazing!
I'm honestly still in shock at how despite you changed the video's plot it still matches the mv! When you explained each mental disorder I rewatched the MV and couldn't help but feel like it actually is about mental disorders, especially Yeri and Irene's! It will be interesting to watch the fans reactions on this music video tbh, I feel like they will like it a lot or at least find it unique amongst other group's videos.
Oh my god, Meilin and Dajungie are roommates! Also, poor Jangmi that has to deal with the two maknaes.
Those Irene gifs btw, she's so bloody gorgeous! Too bad SM is now styling her so poorly with those bangs in Red Flavor.
WANNA ONE's debut was amazing however, I was expecting a much more energetic song (hahha get it? /bricked) and I agree with you on Weki Meki's debut, the song is very confusing...Also I could only see Doyeon and Yoojung, Fantagio is being too biased.
Great update, like always! <3
Chapter 28: Oh my goood yaaas another updaaaate!!
The first time i read this chapter before it was edited, i really wanted to bury lee taeyong alive. Now, that feeling is 2x stronger. Its not Jangmi's loss but Taeyong's. Im sorry Jangmi you have to go through this...but anyways woah how Jangmi handled her situation was very grown up and matured. Most girls would throw a bit*h fit or go on a hunt and murder the guy / ex-bf but Jangmi was calm (well not calm, but trying to stay calm) and thats just...wow I salute Jangmi.
Meilin sleep!!! What are you, a zombiee? :0 pls no matter how dedicated you are sleep is still important ;_; aaaahh. Woow im looking forward to BTS x Meilin interaction hehehe and omg DAJUNG AND MEILIN ARE SO TALENTED WOW i now feel so insecure aha :"D *joking. And throught Meilin's entire POV i only focused on the username of her email ahaaha its so like her :")
Honestly the last part, the Jangmi x Saeron's part, will always be one of my fave moments. I love dramas, fluff, comedy, but wall-breaking moments like this are my absolute fave. And with my comment, I am officially gonna ship jangmi x saeron :D and why is saeron so cute omg my heart ;_;
YAAAS SUPPORT SNSD my queens T^T and owow kim lip so precious. Thank you for the update and yaaay im excited for the girls' comeback ~
Chapter 28: ETHEREAL HAS BEEN UPDATED YAYYY!~
I really liked this update authornim, I think you have been improving a lot since you have decided to re-write Ethereal, the chapters all became more interesting because you also added in new bits of information and more interactions between the members.
Firstly, I really want to Sailor Moon Punch Taeyong to the moon and scream at it for cheating on someone like Jangmi and then preparing a speech, but Jangmi stayed in her ground and was very mature about their break up, I liked it. It's diffferent from most break up scenes because she wasn't angry, she was disappointed that he didn't break up with her first and then start seeing someone else, he just straight up cheated on her.
Second of all, do you know how hard I'm shipping Byeol and Meilin? This isn't healthy at all! Just like how Meilin overworking herself isn't healthy at all, she should take good care of her health.
Third of all, BTS pov is actually so good and I feel like you portrayed their personalities very well and I really like the fact that you mentioned both Byeol and Dajung having worked with them previously.
MEILIN WROTE 'LOSER' BY BIG BANG??? OMG, the song was released in 2015, Meilin was 15 years old yet she was already creating masterpieces, legends only.
THEM JANGMI X SAERON MOMENTS GOT MY HEART FLUTTERING SO GODDAMN MUCH I THOUGHT I WAS GOING TO HAVE A HEART ATTACK
Jangmi didn't want to convey her feelings to Saeron because she saw her as a stranger ;; But then the maknae reassured her it was okay and my heart just ing broke.
I loved this chapter overall, and I'm really looking forward for more updates!
PS. 'All Night' and 'Holiday' are so good and so is the entire album! It would be amazing if you could include one of those two in one of the girls' albums, like for a summer comeback ^^ Those Kim Lip gifs are so cute, Kim Lip is so lovable omg.
Chapter 27: Meilin shouldn't be working too hard ;_; props to meilin for never giving up when shes not satisfied. If i were meilin i would probably give up by the third or fourth try xD ahaha. Cold yet beautiful snow, this describes Meilin, in a way. Your way of writing has this touch of uniqueness that it makes it beautiful and i keep rereading the words again and again :"D. Dajung's eating disorder and Meilin's weight loss T^T i hope the two can eat more. Alsoo wooo spring day ~ one of my fave bts songs >u<
Saeron's current condition worries me, because now even byeol and minseo is worried of her :" 5 minutes talk -- another one of my fave parts in this story. It gives me so much feels and im crying on the inside ;_; here the distance between each girl is clear. They're all still foreign to each other (even Meilin and Jangmi but they're not far away from each other as the other girls) but im happy that they're optimistic one day the five of them will get closer. Also omg dajung being worried over kyulbin in her trainee days aaaaa <3 woaah eight monts since ethereal debuted? Thats - thats a lot, almost a year :0 wow time flew by so fast :")
Ah taeyong's part -- i have no words except i really want to kick taeyong all the way to mars. And kim yerim --- ughhh. Poor Jangmii :"(
Woohoo i cant wait for new upcoming chapters ♡♡♡
I understand and I am so sorry for commenting late. I have other things to do that makes me forget other things too, such as commenting. It sounds lame on my part for giving out excuses like this so I apologize. Thank you for the updates, its wonderful ♡ and im sorry
Chapter 26: Ah Saeron ;_; I hope she's okay. Days without food and complete isolation can take a toll on her both physically and mentally. Netizens shouldn't attack Saeron like that -- like do they even know the reason why Saeron declined the offers? No. The last line of Saeron's POV though - it gave me chills O_O. I like the way you portray Saeron in a different way and also how, even the most of the cheeriest happiest people, will break down one day, eventually....but im sure saeron will bounce back. She's after all, ethereal's precious maknae ~
ahaa kyulbin :"D i must admit, the drawings/portraits on her cast are unique! Aha courtesy to Dajung :") (aka kyulbin's wifeu ahaa :'D)
Oh noo wae Saeron quietly emails the CEOs about this :" im looking forward to the plan the CEOs put together. Through the 5 minute talk, ethereal gets to know each other closer, share / expose secrets, habits, likes, and dislikes and for me the readers are also able to get closer to the characters and get to know more about the other readers' characters. Ah also small trips -- the girls need a bonding small holidays here and there. From what I see usuall people who are distance with each other, to get closer and break down their walls, needs to be put together and experience a moment where they both felt strongly (?) something like that. And moving dorms --- hell yaas. Are you going to post the new dorms' layouts / pictures? If not then its completely fine dont worry! <3 and kakaotalk!! Aah i can imagine the story being told in a chat layout aha its gonna be so cutee >u< i wonder what display picture the girls will choose to set as their avatar :"D
Woohoo thanks for the update!! Im excited too ♡♡
Chapter 25: I AM HEREE oh my god pls save me from the dungeon called homeworks ;_; im so sorry i keep forgetting to comment -- i always read the latest updates but ah push me off a window if i forget to comment again :"
Anyways -- ah Meilin's smiling!! Omg thats unusually good - it caught me off guard because the day starts off with Meilin smiling, albeit a small smile. Ah I remembered this chapter -- one of my fave chapter bcs how different Meilin is to the other days :"D aw Jaehyun, that compliment though :3 scientific names are beautiful but if there was a biology test where everything is named scientifically im sure i would get a 0 xD. Exquisite idiot -- meilin's words are strikingly odd yet beautiful, rich vocab. Wow Meilin be my teacher pls :") i hope Meilin's okay being in the event by herself, with how she is. One question, will Meilin improve from her social anxiety? If not then its alright -- bcs ethereal will be there for Meilin. Hehe and knight Kyulbin shall save the ice queen ~
Ah the Mark x Dajung scene brings back bittersweet memories ;_; its beautiful but it hurts, in a way. This part seems like a movie with iconic lines :") and aw dajung's way of writing -- im too lazy to decorate my own writing hahaa. Omoo yees Saeron speaks i love it when Saeron tries to communicate ~ my ship!! Its sailing woohoo (and dear god pls dont let the kyulbin dajung ship sink). Jangmiii pleasee welcome Saeron, she's trying her best T^T and Saeron dont give up, ah I wanna hug Saeron. A long time ago I cannot wrap my mind around the idea of how Meilin fainted when people wished her a happy birthday, but now I understand because I have encountered a similar situation before -- except of fainting, i almost cried (and not crying happy tears, but really crying). Ohohohoo another iconic scene, Jangmi x Zuho. I really salute Jangmi on how she defends Taeyong (eventhough he turned out to be a baMUstard in the end :"). Cant wait for Jangmi's drama to start ~
Hohooo the v-app seems lighthearted and easygoing -- and kyulbin being bold haha ;D i like all the ship names of kyulbin x dajung though halp meh. A wild Jangmi xD aha Jangmi's me :") the girls' haircolor changed again, which means.....a comeback is neaaaar!! ♡ meilin's i love you made my day aaa also schedule-less ahaa xD
Overall its great chapter, yes i love it aha :"D thank you for the updates ~ ♡♡ and also yes i have seen dreamcatcher's comeback and i died on the inside
Chapter 27: omg another update, you're updating basically everyday now yayyy
I was highly looking forward to this chapter because Hwang Byeol and Kwon Minseo, I really like it when you write from a different point of view, it makes the applyfic more interesting??? I don't know the right word to describe it.
Hwang Byeol and Meilin, I ship it. I ship it a lot even though I shouldn't cause I assume Byeol is in mid 20's almost 30's and is dating/married to someone else. Either way, I think they would hit it off well with how you have Byeol so far.
Minseo, Minseo is like a mother, worried about Saeron. It would be cool if you could write about Minseo just being overly protective over Saeron, it would be super cute º^º
Also, everytime you mention Dajung's eating disorder, you do it so subtly just by mentioning her weight loss and loss of appetite, that's how you keep someone's attention because they are always for something else to be revealed.
Yay for Meilin for producing BTS' comeback, tbh "Spring Day" has to be one of my favorite songs this year, it's so sad but so pretty, I cry everytime I listen to it.
I'm so glad you still kept that history reference, I was worried you would delete it and replace it with something else.
All the songs will make sense once you're in love, no wonder I don't understand any of them lol
That 5 minute talk ;; I have no words for it, I liked it a lot and it was sad.
Now onto the cheater, Lee Taeyong. I don't like him, I want to hit his face. This line "Jangmi’s opened drawer is overflowing" in a way it made it seem like he still loves her but is replacing her because she's putting her dreams in front of their relationship, it seems like cheating on her is really just to hurt her, not because he needs someone else's love but because he wants her love to be given to him every single day. #needyashell
Thanks for this update authornim, I'll patiently wait for the upcoming updates.
I completely understand your choice by the way, you're putting your time into Ethereal and it seems like it isn't paying off, you must feel discouraged.
I hope more comments will come soon so Ethereal will be continued ^^
Chapter 26: Ethereal's comment section is filled with my comments hahaha
This chapter was previously one of my favorites already but it's even more now. I always liked it a lot because we had the chance of seeing different sides of the two youngest members of Ethereal and I always thought that was beyond interesting because in front of their unnies they are always like balls of energy.
Lee Minwoo and Eric Mun are actually pretty good CEO's, they are not perfect yeah but they are good and better than a lot of ceo's out there aka yg and sm
The plan is still soooooo goood, I really like it and I still think it's a smart idea especially the moving dorms part.
Looking forward to the upcoming updates and of course excited for Ethereal's first comeback yayyyy!
Haseul be looking beyond pretty in those two gifs btw, she really is one of the visuals of LOONA (all of them are visuals tho)
Chapter 25: YAYYY! BACK AT IT AGAIN WITH YET ANOTHER AMAZING UPDATE AUTHORNIM!
You're updating so fast I'm shook authornim, I like this but you don't have to overwork yourself in order to udate quickly, just do this calmly, I'll wait patiently for new updates.
ONTO THE CHAPTER!
This chapter was already so well written but you still found a way to improve it and becaus of that I'm legit shook, because this is actually so good authornim, I don't even know what to actually say!
I really like the way you potrayed Meilin here, I feel like her personality is conditioned by the environment that surronds her, when cameras are around she's cautious or even when there's a lot of people around because of her social anxiety, but when she's alone she can be slightly relaxed and with NCT members too because they practiced together and after all Taeyong is her best friend!
I'm so sad Jaehyun and Meilin's ship won't sail tho ;; They could be such a visual power couple if you went ahead with them but it's your decision, I think it would actually be awkward since Jaehyun and Taeyong are close and in the future Meilin will not be cool will Taeyong cus he a cheater.
Dajung and Mark ong! I don't even know anymore, like for a side I want them to be together and have the ship sailing but what if it ends up like Titanic sinking? I would rather have them as close friends rather than a couple cus dating is complicated and both of them are still fetuses either way lol
I'm still in love with the "Even commit murder?" "Depends on the circumstances"
Jangmi and Zuho yyyaaaas, another visual power couple if they were to ever date each other lol. I'm so happy over these Harry Potter references, Slytherin and Ravenclaws are my favorite houses despite being an Hufflepuff.
I am so sad over he conversation Jangmi and Saeron had tbh, like it felt so realistic. Saeron has never seen Taeyong has a romantic figure yet Jangmi thinks she has and that's honestly kinda messed up.
Also, I don't really think that V Live was messy, it was only different! I liked it a lot, and Meilin seems so awkward around cameras it's so cute considering she's the visual and has already recorded a drama, you would think by now she would comfortable around cameras, guess not!
"You look like you’re bleeding from your scalp" Kim Jangmi? Do you mean Savage as f? BECAUSE MAN, MAKE JANGMI DO A ROAST YOURSELF FOR THE LOVE OF GOD. She would slayyyyy!
Sua is indeed very pretty, everyone in Dreamcatcher is but Handong is just drop dead gorgeous and I can't really handle her beauty. The song sounds super good from what you can hear in the teaser, different from Chase Me or Good Night but it's still amazing!
Really liked this chappie ♡
PS. #shipkyulbinxdajung2k16
Chapter 24: Yooo ethereal's performance look so good and awesome *_* ah poor the girls i hope eventhough they have a hectic schedule they would still have a good rest. The waking up scene is so fluffy im gonna dieeee aaaah. I dont know why but somehow the mental image of kyulbin sleepily rubbing her eyes made me imagined that she's still a child aha :"D aw can you see the way dajung subtly acts and cares around kyulbin because i ship the two so hard oh gosh. Jangmi ahahahaha even thinks of pizza when she's asleep xD aw dajung issokay jangmi did not mean it. Meilin what are you? Ah Meilin should rest more and not do this to herself because its not good ;_; ahahaa of course snacks :"D tbh after I scrolled down and see Meilin's clothes I think Meilin's clothes are similar to my style --- and yes just like jangmi i get complaints on how boyish i look :") i dont think there's anything wrong with meilin's clothes because everyone dresses differently -- but then again its cute how jangmi wanted to match with meilin :3
"Kyulbin, me and you, what are we then?" bye im dead that line got me exploding. The 1st fansign and already they fans are a loooot :0 aw my the fans are too kind :") four flower crowns at the same time aaah meilin is so extra. Man the fans' gifts to Saeron are so wow the fans must have been ₩₩₩ ;) it makes sense for meilin and saeron to get a longer line and im still amazed at the number of fans that showed up.
Aaah nooo kyulbin aish aigoo why so clumsy tiny baby :" i hope shes okay -- ah, praises to shincom for immediately taking kyulbin to the hospital to get her knee checked out. A wheelchair -- and to think Kyulbin is still happy and positive despite the injury :" why is she so precious oh my. Again shincom should've informed the girls first before they announced the news.
Overall great chapter roseus and ah thank you for updating! <3 i love the clothes and please rest some more!
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