Chapter 9: This chapter is very good, Kyulbin is such an adorable character!
I'm excited to see what else the reboot will bring because till now everything that you have put out is really solid ^^
Chapter 9: That chapter was so good I love Kyulbin do much she is such a cute character and I identify to her so much keep going your story is so interesting i love it
Chapter 9: First of all I just really wanted to say that Ethereal's manager is very good looking hahaha, #managergoals. I feel like he sincerely cares for the four girls he has to take care of as if he's their father and that's honestly adorable because there seems to be this trend that managers don't like the idols they are supposed to take care of and it's honestly so sad and most of the times badly written so I'm deeply happy that you decided to let the two of them have a good relationship.
Also, daym Yebin (Kyulbin's faceclaim) is so goddam pretty in that photo, long hair really suits her much more than short hair I hope she will let it grow out it just makes her stand out, she looks somewhat purer with it (?)
Kyulbin is an angel that deserves all the love in the world and if netizens won't give it to her, Dajung and Saeron will give it to her! THAT'S FOR SURE! KyuDa for life, KyuRon for life as well!
GURL, I just also really want to say that if this is what you put out during a writer's block your writer block's are amazing because this chapter is very well written and I really liked it ^^
Looking forward to future updates!
Chapter 3: happy new year you too ^^ and for the changes honestly do it like you want, but i personnaly prefer their debut in January, but do as you want, and again happy new year ^^
Chapter 3: Happy new years too lena!! I hope you had a good time too and may 2018 be a better and more happier year for you! ♡
Im okay with the changing of the timeline ehee
Chapter 9: This chapter is tearing my heart apart,,, my heart cries for Dajung. It keeps reminding me how cruel the kpop industry can be. Like,,,its not easy to only rely on talents in the entertainment industry. Sometimes i dont like how an artist / idol must suffer just to look physically good on the outside by starving themselves. This can lead to other sickness or might cause lots of side effects in the future. And to lose 10 kg,,,man i cant even lose 0.5 kg let alone 10...i feel poor for dajung. I wanted her to just be herself but thats not enough for the entertainment world. I wanna give dajung a big hug and throw eric off a building asdfghjkl
Wow, are you okay now authornim? I personally never went through eating disorder,,,i literally eat 10000x a day and not care if i blew up like a hot air balloon xD the chapter is beautifully written and it touches me in the right places (wow now i sound creepy). You're uploading the chapters at a nice pace so dont worry about thinking that you're taking too long to update!
Chapter 9: CHAPTER THREE IS HERE OMG
I can't even stress how much I enjoyed this chapter enough. I agree that it's different from the previous two chapters but different doesn't mean that it's bad ^^ I really liked it!
I hope however one day Dajung will actually believe everyone's words, her three members truly care about her and I hope she will learn that as time goes by. I'm so curious to see what songs you have picked for the girls pre-debut videos especially because each one of them will have one *-*
The last part of the chapter was so well written, I'm shook. The first paragraph of Dajung roaming Seoul really touched my heart, because everyone sees things differently and I think that you portaryed that very correctly in this chapter and I sincerely hope that you're happy about that, not a lot of people can actually pass their own feelings to a sheet a paper.
The colors parts was also very good, it oddly reminded me of Love In Color by Taeyeon and they were so sad honestly. I guess that's what some people feel when they are depressed, the dullness of everything that surrounds them.
Also that last paragraph, damn. That was deep and depressing. I hope Dajung won't dull to the point of no return, because I want to see that girl shining as bright as the stars in sky.
And authornim, if you ever need anyone to talk with I'm here and I'll gladly listen to your feelings ^^ Don't suffer alone, that's not good! <3
Chapter 12: I ship it! Byeol x Meilin, gahhd I ship everything ByeolMei that's their couple name (Please have them have mnay moments together, I would love to see them have something between each other even if it's not romantic)
MEILIN MY SAVAGE QUEEN HIT EM GIRL! ERIC IS SHAKING AT THE SIGHT OF MEILIN (She's like Sunny but ShinCom version, it would be funny if you could have Shinhwa and Ethereal in the same show and a Shinhwa member is just like 'No one dares to fire Meilin' and then the mc could ask why and they are like 'Everyone's afraid of her'
Honestly I think Meilin is the type of friend everyone should have, Taeyong is lucky!
Loving the reboot so far, and for the colors I really like the pastel ones ^-^
Chapter 11: I just wanted to say first of all that I'm completely in love with the new cover, I love the gif of the pink ocean the most (snsd ;;)
This chapter is soooooooooooooo good, I really might be in love with Jangmi she's so amazing, I'm sure she will become a great leader despite not wanting to be the leader of Ethereal.
Her relationship with Taeyong is goals (up until he cheats on her that is) they look so good together! JangTae is sailing!
Chapter 12: I feel dumb for asking (im sorry i dont get metaphors T^T) but what does stood on a glass window mean? Asdfgh im sorry my iq isnt high enough
Ohooo when Meilin started pacing i knew something is up. An offer with Ji Chang Wook? Asdfghjkl i havent watched the K2 but it sounds like an interesting drama and man ji chang wook,,,but honestly im so touched that meilin put her group in front of her. One would probably immediately take the offer bcs of the thinking that drama=fame=attraction=ethereal going up on the search bar but meilin thought about how eventhough a drama might do ethereal good, it might also affect ethereal's debut. Im ;;; ily meilin
At first i was like who's this man giggling at meilin and i , for a second, turned into protective mother bear mode @ meilin for a second. And im disappointed at myself, as an ethereal enthusiast, that i forgot who hwang byeol was (me, a fake fan) and then i remember he was that deep love quote guy so its all gud!!
I honestly died and went to heaven and the kyulbin x meilin interaction im not kidding. Im soft er for fluff and any ethereal member x ethereal member interaction. The fact that its meilin and kyulbin, literally i go heart eyes at any of meilin x ethereal member interaction, i felt like i skyrocketed to space and burst into a million starts (ok im not even making sense right now) but i just wanna say i love this interaction so much i wanna cry and drown myself in my tears.
A lullaby's dream -- idk why but i imagined baekhyun x suzy's collab playing in the background. Oohh and the last sentence ended with a bang !! I think meilin and namjoon should get into a philosophical debate one day that would be interesting :"D
Regarding the author's note ; i too am deeply torn of jonghyun's passing. I do not know shinee that much but after hearing about jonghyun i feel,,,down. And yes, he's in a better place now. He worked hard and now he's shining more brightly than ever.
I do not mind meilin having a collab but same as @LostHeaven it might not sit well,,,with some but i fully support your decision regarding this matter.
I love blunt meilin shes my spirit animal #queen of roasting with scientific facts and smart witty comebacks. And noo dont be mad at yourself, i remember there are subtle meilin x kyulbin moments which i enjoyed (like the one where meilin had comments such as pretty face, ice princess etc thrown to her and kyulbin saved her in a way,,,i remenber meilin saying that kyulbin was the one who told her to be herself,etc)
Wohooo i like this change!! It might take a while for me to get used to it and i might accidentally refer meilin and dajung as alaska and harley ahaa. And i love the colours!! ♡
I dont think i have stressed it before but you're very good in writing drama-like lines...like wow at the part where "there's always gonna be someone who loves you more" that part, it got me. *clutches heart*
Chapter 11: Ah it feels different reading the first rebooted chapter -- but a good different!! I take that the part where the trainees are gathered and the members of Ethereal had already been announced? And i was wondering if the part where they switched dorms or Jangmi having a drama offer is still gonna be present in the story? I don't mind if they're not, i'll follow your choice of writing wholeheartedly because im already liking the flow of this chapter.
I get why Jangmi doesn't want to be leader -- if she does its basically like a friend ordering a friend in a way?? but a leader is still a vital role,,,and jangmi being the leader doesn't mean that all the weight of the ethereal falls on her shoulders!! She can share the burden. And it doesn't have to necessarily be the leader to solve every fight or problem. This is just a thought but what happens when netizens caught Jangmi not living up to her leader role? but again i don't mind with ethereal having an official leader like blackpink.. but in the future does jangmi naturally takes the leader role (without making it official in the websites) or is there really no leader? Im sorry if i offended you with my question ;_;
Dajung why did you get wet my poor bby T^T im sorry dajung is just a sweetheart such precious i wanna protect her from all the bad things in the world :"
O-oh run for your life kyulbin :"D Meilin's probably digging kyulbin's grave right now,,, and wow Meilin back at it again with the scientific datas!! Meilin is like a roast queen unintentionally :"D i wanna thank Meilin bcs i feel like i get smarter and learn a new thing every time she says a scientific fact. I hope the cats and kyulbin are okay and won't catch a cold T^T
Chapter 12: First of all, I just really wanted to say that Jisoo looks ethereally beautiful (see what I did there? xd) in that photo!
NOW THEE CHAPTER! The title dude, its so good I love it cus it already gives a slight hint of what the chapter will be about ^^ At first I was like, who's the guy that's talking with Meilin? A Shinhwa Company male trainee? Another Shinhwa member perhaps Minwoo? Or a friend who perhaps was part of H.O.T or Sechskies? And then it ended up being Hwang Byeol (which by the way, I love his name) I kinda ship it, Byeol x Meilin, their couple name could be LinByeol.
I just really want to say that I love how Meilin is so blunt, "the male ual organ produce's more money tha the female's" though, oh my god, she's my queen.
Also, loving those small yet precious moments between KyulMei, they are so freaking cute. I ship it, I ship everything though
I wouldn't mind you including Meilin collabing with Jonghyun but some readers might, but I feel like it will take some time for you to write about it? I don't know how to explain myself but, when you maybe write about it people won't be as in much pain as they're right now? And for the colors, I really like the pastel set!
Chapter 12: Wow i usually don’t comment but this reboot is fantastic !! Please keep going and I love Kyulbin so much like omg she is so cute ^^ and for the colors i like the pastels one too they correspond better at the image of etheral’s members
Chapter 7: please, i deeply hope you won't be discontinuing ethereal. i know apologizing won't do anything ;; but im sorry for the lack of activeness and comments. i do read your updates, i do stay updated with ethereal, but i forgot to give you feedback at your wonderful writing at times and its my fault. i apologize for not being as active as @LostHeaven.. but please, i really love ethereal ;_; please reconsider..
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