Chapter 31: The fandom name is so cute *o*
Esprits because the fans are the girls source of happiness and they are what kees thhem going
I like it too!
Had to search what amaranthine was, something along the lines of eternally beautiful, it is in a way similar to Ethereal's meaning but yeah, Esprits is better in my opinion
Chapter 28: This chapter is amazing like all of the updates you have been posting
I ship Meigi for sure ^^ it will be a very cute couple if they ever become real
I also like all the names you came with for Ethereal couples
Looking forward for next chapters
Chapter 28: Loved it how everyone was cautious about Jangmi's non existent cooking skills, the girls just don't want the dorm to burn down. Very understandable.
Tbh it is very realistic how only Saeron knows about Taeyong's cheating, i feel like Jangmi is simply scared of how her relationships will change when someone finds out but with Saeron she never had a deep connection like she had for example with Meilin same with Meilin being so comprehensive of Dajung's eating disorder, Meilin doesn't have any emotional attachment with her however she knows that what she doesn't need is a scolding.
ALSO, PARK HYUNGSIK <3 I loved him in Strong Woman Dong Bon Soon
Jangmi and Dajung interactions, where they at tho? like omg, people gotta ship them
That's what happens when you're tall Jangmi, dem legs are recognized everywhere, also like it how you made it realist. Idols do this a lot of times, which shows how ed up it really is because they have no freeedom at all and to get it they have to run away
Also, rather than finding it creepy (it kinda still is tho) i found it cute. How Yoongi was mesmerized by Meilin's beauty but the rest, it was like he was trying to force a connection between the two of them, that's no no Min Yoongi but I get it. THE TWO OF THEM ARE AWKWARD ANTI SOCIAL BALLS OF ANGER AND MUSIC
I liked this chappie very much overall
ps. that last part tho, all groups go through it as well, man --roseus back at it again with keeping things realistic
Chapter 28: LOL MAKNAE LINE LOW KET ROASTING JANGMI'S COOKING SKILLS
Oh I just remembered not all the members know about the whole Taeyong drama damn.
It's very realistic to see Meilin's point of views on such family traditions since some families don't have that bond.
YES PARK HYUNGSIK BOIIIII
Finally omg some one knows about Dajung. it's great that Meilin is so understanding.
LMAO GDI JANGMI YOUR LEGS ARE TOO OBVIOUS
MEIMI NO. 1 YESSS although I do hope to see more jnagmi x Dajung moments.
Yoongi stop being creepy omg haha
Chapter 27: Yaay for the update!
Oh my poor Jangmi, as a leader she will be the first member to wake up ahaha no wonder she has the morning grumpiness xD my school starts at 6.30 am so waking up at 5 is normal to me xD a few of my friends woke up and got ready for school at 3-4 am in the night xD but this is not about school asdfghjkl apologies for misdirecting the topic T_T anyways Jangmi is slowly changing, becoming a better person day by day ♡ bwahahaa oh lord i dropped my phone when i read about saeron sleeping with her eyes open bcs my mind immediately flashed to a picture of tzuyu doing super wide eyes and i kinda freaked out xD anyways wow Meilin + food = the world's 8th mystery ahaa its good to see Meilin coming back :"D. Recordings went smoothly i presume..and now I seem to see about Dajung, oh god her BMI scale is the lowest /cries/ pls eat a lot Dajungie T_T. The dance practice part was interesting. And hooooly *whistles lowly* darn is Meilin lowkey the long lost great granddaughter of Albert Einstein..Meilin for pringles' sake please sleep you are turning into a zombie T.T and yaaaas new dorm! Cannot wait for future interactions! Overall great chapter, as always
Chapter 27: omg, back at it again with the subtle mentions of dajung's eating disorder, i like how they are not so subtle anymore.
The members are now becoming more aware of her eating habits which is good as it may prevent her from getting worse!
5.30 tho like legit Seojun? I would slap the person that woke me up at those hours tbh, like sleep is precious
Jangmi waking up her fellow members was interesting, loved it how she deemed Meilin as her wife (I SHIP MEIMI)
URI DASI MANA~~~~ ONE OF THESE NIGHTS <3 (that song is very well made and deserved much more attention than it got)
Also, I like it how you changed the concept of the music video but it still fits with it.
The new dorm is very cute and I wouldn't mind living in it tbh
Rest authornim, don't overwork yourself
Love this part "Meilin + Social media = Confusion"
Chapter 27: Jesus christ 5:30 am, let them live Seojun.
It's funny reading about Jangmi waking up the other members when she's not a morning person herself.
Each way that the members react to waking really depicts their character.
I really do worry for Dajung but unfortunately, eating disorders are a real part of not just being an idol, but also life in general.
I hope to read about the members and their assistance with her disorder in the future.
MIC STANDS?? One of these nights I presume haha. That song is so flowy and calming.
That concept is actually so unique and empowering at the same time - it really educates the fans on real disorders that ppl have.
New dorm ayeee - it's cute to see the progress that Jangmi x Saeron are making tbh.
Yep the hair totally makes it one of these nights confirmed
Chapter 26: OMG, your updates never fail to impress me
I swear with each chapter you keep getting better and better, it really is amazing
I hope you are having /had a nice trip, update Ethereal when you can, don't overwork yourself
PS. Maybe using both would be the best opinion because the pictures give the chapters some color
Chapter 26: ok thanks for the tears that are now running down my face jesus.
For someone inexperienced in that sepcific department, I think you portrayed the break up scene exceptionally well.
Honestly, I miss the pictures - I feel like they added that little bit of colour into chapters.
Why not use bother titles and pictures?
Chapter 26: this chapter is very well written, don't hate on it authornim
now first of all. ALL THESE SAERON X JANGMI INTERACTIONS ARE WRECKING MY HEART, WHAT'S THEIR COUPLE NAME? SAEMI? i ship it very much
second of all, can i sailor moon punch taeyong? boy dude the hell (btw i think you wrote their break up scene extremely beautifully and uniquely because authors usually make the female character slap the male character and take everything out of proportion)
third of all, meilinie you gotta rest, making new songs isn't everything you have to focus on
BTS's POV THO! I LIKED IT SO MUCH TOO AUTHORNIM
Also, have a nice and safre trip ^^
Chapter 26: am sure that she will gain back her brightness..I noticed Saeron's little squeal :3 such a cutie ~
And its fine, please take care of yourself! I hope you have a safe trip! Tysm for updating, it means a lot <3 until then ~
Chapter 26: First of all..don't hate this chapter! <3 its beautifully written, I am in love and awe! And yes, I like this layout, especially the flower divider <3 it gives an elegant touch ~
I have never been in a breakup too but you offcially made my eyes go glassy T_T poor leader, ugh I am kicking Taeyong's all the way to the bermuda triangle..how dare he cheat..and yeri...zzz (whispers its okay jangmi you have us/me ~)
Very well written, the reference with snow and sadness. Its fun to see a side of Jangmi we haven't seen before, and yay for the Jangmi and Saeron interactions aka my new ship <3 tall leader and giant maknae xD Taeyong will look like an elf beside Jangmi if she were to wear high heels xD
Meilin gawd can this girl get anymore zombie-like? please rest ice queen, its not good to overwork your body. I guess now the recording studio is Meilin's temporary home? xD.
Yeees for BTS! I was not expecting that and I kinda screamed bcs...its BTS..and its Meilin..and it equals to interesting. I guess I will be expecting BTS and Meilin's interaction soon? ouo hehee
I salute to our dearest leader Jangmi! Its touching how she protect her members in a fatherly way, how she did not want Taeyong to have any bad intentions around her members. The little things she does, how she cares for her members, how she keeps in mind about Kyulbin. Great job <3
The last scene though ouo I love the way Saeron understands Jangmi and offered her the best medicine to a breakup. Saeron might not be herself right now, but I
Chapter 26: Asdfghjkl...when I read the first title I knew I was dead meat..holy sheep..lets get ready for a rollercoaster of emotion >u< *starts to read furiously*
Chapter 25: PS : Taeyong would you like me to do the honour of kicking your lame all the way to the moon? You are lucky to date the great pizza queen, I cant believe this *godzilla rampage mode on*. Great chapter, I ♡ the POVs. Goodluck --roseus! ^^ may you pass your exams with flying colours! Mine is also coming soon T-T
Chapter 25: Spring Day! Do I smell an interaction with a 7 membered boy group soon? *wiggles eyesbrows suggestively* ah nice deep reference to the cold beautiful snow..idk why but reading Meilin's part suddenly got me shivering (in a good way) like she is such an untouchable beauty *melts*. I am happy to know that Ethereal's members participated in making lyrics, they have a dungeon of talents ♡ my heart thumped really fast at Meilin's part..this snow queen asking about love :') and noo Saeron T_T please come back dont leave or else I will chain myself to you. And its finally happening! The girls' first 5 minute talk..well done! ♡ its refreshing, melancholy sweet to hear the inner conflict inside their deep hearts. I love how each character opens up. I hope that ethereal will continue to grow closer, albeit slowly but surely
Chapter 25: Like always authornim, this update was really well written
The change of pov's is very interesting and makes the story more interacting????????
Looking forward for new updates, good luck authornim
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