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say_the_name
#1
Chapter 6: Ahhh ty for choosing Jangmi!
Congrats to the other 3 girls too xx
Even from the start you can see there's doubt in the leader position
This is gonna be good XD
kaepjjang
#2
Chapter 6: Congrats to the chosen members!
aslyf_
#3
Chapter 6: Congrats to the chosen one, though my characters didn't get chosen, still can't wait for the beginning of the story
AngelovingU
#4
Chapter 5: Omg just read the dirst teaser today! <3 Their discussion seemed like a real life discussion <3 I love how they constructively argued a little about not wasting the girls' talents ;) Patiently waiting for my app's review and for the next teaser :)
say_the_name
#5
Chapter 5: Ooo there's disagreement in the meeting room ;)
You already know that I love your writing style so there isn't much to critique <3
daisyrune
#6
Chapter 5: The prologue sounds very interesting and I love how you portrayed the Shinwa members . You are really good at writing! <3
LostHeaven
#7
Chapter 5: omona~~~ the teaser is amazing authornim <3 i'm really looking forward for ethereal, i'm really hyped for this! I'll patiently wait for my app's review and the future teasers!!
guisukigwi
#8
Chapter 5: Omygaash the teaser is out >•< I'm totally hyped woohoo~~ awesome job --snowflakes :) and don't worry, I'll patiently wait for my app's review ^^
kaepjjang
#9
Chapter 5: im getting excited just reading this teaser!
I think your English is perfectly fine, so there really isn't anything you should be worrying about! :)
I like the teasers~ hehe
Hope to see more soon!!
joshuahonghae
#10
wasn't this stargazers before?
daisyrune
#11
This story seems really interesting!
I read that the deadline was september 30 but the apply is still open. How much time do I have?
guisukigwi
#12
Chapter 2: hi~~ what is the difference between suggestions and scene requests? thank you ^^
AngelovingU
#13
Hello ^^ I just applied :) I commented my link in the "Turn In"~ was that where I am supposed to place my app?
xINeedUx
#14
Chapter 4: I'll just be waiting for my review then.
megskworld
#15
Annyeong!
I'm not sure if i Will have time to apply even if it sounds really interesting :) but is the deadline really on september 30?
kaepjjang
#16
hey~ I just wanted to say i added some bits into my app~ so if you don't mind, please checking them out !
(ps: i made it blue so it's easier for you to find!

pps: i hope you don't mind me adding this to my app in the near future if i have anymore ideas etc >~<)
Sica_Sicachu
#17
Chapter 2: I'm interested in applying, and I want my character to have a girl as her love interest. Can my love interest be an OC?
LostHeaven
#18
Chapter 1: I kinda want to use Chenle as my love interest but 1) two years 2) I don't want to seem like a creep 3) My character would be taller than him 4) I DON'T WANNA SEEM LIKE A CREEP ;~;
I'll probably go with Renjun or Haechan then
WHY ARE THEY SO YOUNG OMG!
say_the_name
#19
Chapter 3: I can actually see it - it'll be pretty interesting if Jangmi ends up being leader because her best friend is telling her to break up with Taeyong and there's inner conflict since she shouldn't need to be ordered around because she's the leader but at the same time, she needs to do what's best for her Stargazers by setting a good example
jewbby #20
Chapter 3: Hello, I love the chinese line idea and Jiamin man... I wanted to used someone else but impossible, Yuge and Jiamin as fc is gonna be forever lol *~* Lay is my bias like hands down I really love him -cries- I imagine a one sided thing and Yuge is on the love spectrum xD

PS: I was editing my app like added things and stuffs when connection died on me and all the changes gone- so yeah... I'll leave my app just like what you reviewed until further ado!