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guisukigwi
#1
Chapter 12: Oh my gooosh my kitkat girl is finally having a chapter *heart attack* this chapter is so good. And lel Kyulbin why are you barefoot xD and aw she proposed to Dajung xD MeiMi is my no 1 ship, friendship over dating omg goals *they're too cute* and yaaas the 5th member will be revealed...can't wait! As always your writing is awesome ^^ ♡
bebeBaby
#2
Chapter 12: oh jangmi and your obsession with pizza ;; "friendship over dating" lmao "Oh No you didnt!" im laughing too hard on that part :D
HAPPY NEW YEAR AUTHOR NIM!
say_the_name
#3
Chapter 11: Damn jangmi gettting it with the advice
ngl i starting squealing over mark in this chap
now im not saying saying dajung but *cough* love mark mark *cough*
-flamingsun
#4
Chapter 11: Like always great update authornim
please take care ^^
LostHeaven
#5
Chapter 11: first of all that Rosé photo in the middle is literally gorgeous and so are the gifs!
I really liked this chapter and authornim please don't overwork yourself we will patiently wait for updates but please take it easy and take care of your health because that's what really matters.

PS: Jisoo's gifs on the author notes killed me, she's very pretty and a total bias wrecker
bebeBaby
#6
Chapter 11: sorry but jisoo at the author's note is-- OMG girl crush ;;
jangmi i being a love guru lmao and wow dahung is a north korean? never expect that tho anyways merry christmas and happy new year authornim!
guisukigwi
#7
Chapter 11: Woohoo chapter three was intriguing. I have better insights on each character ^^ Dajung is mysteriously beautiful, the words you put in fits well and it flows like poetry. Jangmi is as funny as always xD and yay she's becoming better in this leader thing (pizzas for everyone!~) and I suddenly choked when I saw my fave gurl yep aka window cleaning human Yeoreum >u< I hope you have fun in your holidays, take it easy ^^
-flamingsun
#8
Chapter 10: I know that I'm not part of the applyfic but maybe I can also give my opinion as a reader
Ji Chang Wook is very good looking but maybe it would be better to mantain Idol x Idol relationship because they can meet at Music Shows while actors can only meet once in a while and Chang Wook is going to serve the Army pretty soon (he's almost 30) and they would be two years without seeing each other but you're the one that makes the last call ^^
LostHeaven
#9
Chapter 10: Have I mentioned that I like this layout very much? It looks so classy hahaha
I like Meilin and how she only gets it she has hurten someone's feelings after seeing their reaction
I also don't mind the love interest, 12 years isn't that much, after all Tony An and Hyeri were 16 years apart and Changwook is bae. Love is love, age is a simple factor and Meilin is old enough to make her decisions.

PS. "Are you that short guy" was my favourite part because she clearly could have not said he was short but she said it, was it because that's what her memories contained? Him as a short guy? Nice to see an author that pays attention to details.
guisukigwi
#10
Chapter 10: I was wondering who's the FC for Meilin? Is it Jisoo or Pinky? And is Meilin's love interest will be Jung Jaehyun or Ji Chang Wook? Because I put Pinky's gifs in my app in the relationship section between Kyulbin and Meilin. Should I change it to Jisoo's gifs?
guisukigwi
#11
Chapter 10: This is soo good--We can see a little insight on Meilin's character. I don't mind the love int, Ji Chang Wook is bae af
bebeBaby
#12
Chapter 6: how about writing about the girls' first night of living in one roof and their own struggles of coping up with the new way of living. something like that?
guisukigwi
#13
So hyped for the solo units and team units >▪< fighting snowflakes ! ^^
bebeBaby
#14
Chapter 9: first things first, congratulations to the chosen members and yep i love the way you write the first two teasers and the first chapter. I cant help but to fangirl on kyulbin and the way she mentions zootopia gurl i just finished watching that. Anyways take your time in updating fighting authornim!
guisukigwi
#15
Alsoo the chapter no one was sooo good, I loveee the bedrooms <33
guisukigwi
#16
Whooaa omagaaash thank you so so much for choosing adorkable kyulbin >u< hope you enjoy yourself with her
About your review, I don't mind about the lateness, just take it easy ^^ and yep I agree, Yebin is such underrated art like...and anyways haha I cannot wait for the scenes between Meilin and Kyulbin xD I trust in your writing, and I'll believe Kyulbin will bloom wonderfully by your hands. And I don't really know who sings In The Rain...if you're talking about Rain then its deff Taeyeon, but other than that I don't know, sorry T_T wohoo thanks to Meilin for being Kyulbin's survival partner, Kyulbin literally cannot survive on her own xD and your welcome, I enjoyed applying to Ethereal ^^
LostHeaven
#17
Chapter 8: OMG! THEIR DORM IS GOALS, I LEGIT WANT TO LIVE THERE AUTHORNIM!
I really liked this chapter by the way and I'm already curious to see chapter 2 because of the preview you showed us authornim, I'll patiently wait until you post the next chapter ^^
LostHeaven
#18
Chapter 7: Thanks so much for choosing Dajung, I wasn't really expecting it <3
Congratulations to other girls as well ^^
I believe that this is going to be amazing
say_the_name
#19
Chapter 8: Omg the girls are actually so cute.
it's refreshing to see them kind of shy and hesitant
Since usually girl groups are hyper and crazy after finding about their debut
I'm Jangmi will be a great leader so I hope she doesnt worry too much
I think you did a great job on this chapter so dont worry xx