Chapter 12: Barcelona - take me with you Meilin T.T
I guess thats the effect of Meilin. When she's there and being her blunt cold self, everyone is not too fond of it. But when she's not there, suddenly the world is empty as if the girls lost the meaning of life XD. Oohh does Meilin know it was Jangmi who accepted the offer? Welps if Meilin found out then...goodbye Jangmi, you'll have to start preparing your funeral. Ohoo yes another Mark and Dajung. That last line though - "im not busy, im never busy when it comes to you" :3 its cheesy but why am i melting?
:") Dajung T_T I - my feelings :" its so realistic, the way you portray Dajung with references and all. That shes simply a mere human, and then there's Mark. Oh boy what to do with you. I hope Dajung accepts his love? Lets see in the future
Great chapter roseus!! Thank you for updating ♡♡♡
Chapter 13: Oh my glob, this was beautiful.
It's true about pre-debut releases, theyre either a hit or miss tbh. But recently, newer groups are doing well with their pre-releases so hopefully Ethereal is added to the list.
The way that Jangmi and Meilin's friendship is portrayed is really realistic. Not all friends live in the unicorn land with rainbows and lollipops. It's sad that they both mentioned each other's biggest fears "only a pretty face" "only kai's little sister"
but that ending was truly beautiful.
good job as always bro x
Chapter 13: After 84 years I'm commenting on this chapter omg
I can't stress how good this chapter is I just can't even right now authornim, like this is realistic! Groups fight A LOT and a lot of applyfics don't seem to write about that side very often because they believe that everyone is close when often times they only really talk with their members because their company obligates them
"we can always rebel against shinhwa company" i laughed way too much, haven't even debuted and they already want to rebel against their own company
It might seem weird but Meilin and Jangmi are friendship goals, they are like those cool friends that have nothign to do with each other and have pretty bad fights but always make up in the end (almost wrote make out ffs)
Btw, is Seojun me? Coffee, yes, black tea, yes, cheap energy drinks everyday ILLUMINATU CNFE
Thanks for updating author nim, I hope you also have a good day ^^
Chapter 12: First of all, this chapters new layout is so much prettier than the previous one
I don't have much to say other than since you've been re-writing certain chapters you have been showing more sides of Ethereal's relationship as a four-member girl group I hope you in the future then show how Ethereal's relationship evolves when they become a five-member girl group.
Chapter 11: This chapter omg this chapter is so much better now!
I always felt like the moments between Jinho and Meilin were unecessary, I'm glad you deleted them tbh (they were well written, they just felt like too out of place? same with meilin falling in love with ji changwook)
Also loving the scenes focusing on'The K2' you gave a much more detailed explanation of it, and it is realistic. I wonder if you kept Jangmi being the one that accepted the offer for Meilin???
Either way, I'm so glad you're back and I'm highly enjoying the idea of re writing certain chapters authornim
Good luck ^^
Chapter 33: the album cover is dope! again, you overdid yourself roseus :') i hope tape two will increase in sales considering that this album was kind of self-produced. why are you so extra omg <3
Chapter 32: all the members participated in the album? ethereal is full off talents i tell ya omg thank you for giving other girls a chance to create and participate in making a song..this is a good way to make all of the members talents improve and not only one member's abilities will improve..as to say, they all would have equal talents in writing producing and composing department. but of course some member are more gifted on this area and that is understandable
Chapter 31: I AM AN ESPIRIT YES and ooh french coughssaeronmighthavechosethenamecoughs amaranthine omg xD ahaha day6stanthem needs to shut its FUGLY mouth pls like back off. on another note, bts rapmon thanks alaska! omg do i see a fan war between army(s) and espirits? :o
Chapter 30: i was fudging on my phone and reading this chapter when i realized..OMG YOU EDITED THEIR TEASERS IM FLABBERGASTED you are so extra and full of talents holy sushi thank you :') how are you able to edit it so good omygash how? ;_; seriously another standing ovation to you roseus..on another note,hoooray teasers are out!! one of these nights i am h!y!p!e!d!
Chapter 29: new year's eve heeeeck yeeaah! \^o^/ ouo ohh damn it hit hits me like a pang...ethereal will have future interactions with other girlgroups i presume :"D but reading this part..it seems very realistic that it scares me (in a good way). will ethereal stand a chance in this entertainment? and wow right after some warm interactions..meilin left :'( its okay, i understand her job. and finally wow...yoongi and meilin..some fluff and ouch moments...but..waah i am speechless..i hope to see more meilin x bts some day, and maybe ethereal x bts or meilin could bring along someone from ethereal to accompany her xD
Chapter 29: yaaas dajung eat that noodle up pleaase ;_; omg ship/couples names are already out..i am stanning all! i hope there could be a MeiBin/KyuLin, MeiRon/SaeLin, and SaeJung/DaRon in the future! ahahaa but i cant at dakyu xD the couple you weren't planning to ship but you right in xD relatable omg :'D again why does it seem like meilin prefers candy crush over interacting with her fans? its quite alright tbh but i am concerned that some fans might've got hurt by her attitude and mistakes her attitude as something negative..its understandable that meilin was doing this out of her will but i hope she will put on more efforts in the future? but whoever has the right to send meilin hate? thats not nice. sure meilin seems like a cold person and socializing is not her thing, and she did not look..too enthusiastic in the vlive but at least she's trying..i was surprised when meilin showed emotion..deep down she's affected/effected. i thought she would shrug it off and robotically smile stiffly or something like that... like back off from meilin please? #MeilinProtectionSquad. but her smile...it twists my heart that its a fake one..i feel like the journey is still far to go for meilin to freely interact and be happy in her vlive and smile genuinely..yet i am not losing hope! fingers crossed, i know that one day, meilin's going to be like what i dream her to be..and not only meilin, but i hope one day, ethereal will be unbreakable, and that they are the ethereal of my dreams. okay i literally need to stop blabbering. second vlive comes to an end woohoo! <3
Chapter 29: way to break the silence kyulbin xD but yees another vlive! <3 now that i think about it, i dwell a little on meilin. why did she agreed to become an idol? i feel slightly uneasy when reading their debut showcase a few chapters back because meilin was the only one who wasn't too..sure of her career. i really dont want meilin to have second thoughts and do desicions that might...cause heart breaks T_T i am used to ethereal being ot5 so please meilin..stay. i wonder if there is going to be a chapter where meilin's social anxiety comes up but instead of fainting due to a lot amount of people, her members will hold her steady and be there for her, calming her down and distracting her mind, effectively calming meilin down and toning down her social anxiety a bit eventhough she might've been freaking out on the inside. again a standing ovation to the small hidden yet key details you write in each chapter...you have a very high awareness? and im not sure how to say it because i myself am a horrible reader in finding clues and linking everything but you have a genius way of writing! its very emotional and versatile too, literally while reading this chapter there is a storm of emotions going on in my mind :')
Chapter 29: a walk in itaewon opens up with the maknae being cute :3 idk why but i feel off when reading the part where saeron was left behind..why didn't ethereal wait for her :0 for all they know saeron could've been kidnapped by aliens and then ethereal will lose their precious maknae..#ineedtoshutup okay moving on. "and Kyulbin is caught in the middle of everything. Always trying to communicate and create a small friendship that will hopefully bloom in the future with every single member." oh my lord so precious ;_; right now ethereal is becoming closer to each other day by day but i feel like there is still a huge gap between..certain members towards a specific member. i never knew meilin liked art :0 they ran away oh my xD although i am also panicking like the girls i am happy that at least one person knew of ethereal's existence..it makes me proud :') again about the noodles part i feel off..its natural tbh and it makes sense but a small voice in my heart wonders why some of the members didn't bought noodles for kyulbin and jangmi...
Chapter 29: reading on...oh no dajung ;-; i hope she's okay. meilin's the first to know..i like how she helps dajung from her burdens by keeping her secret. and it reminds me about some secrets that the girls have been keeping away some secrets from each other like jangmi's breakup, meilin's social anxiety, saeron's past, kyulbin's real in-depth feelings...its heartwarming and i am truly overjoyed that ethereal is bonding more closer than before but after realizing this...they still have a long way to go before letting out secrets to each other. i still am curious of each of the girls' past, and ethereal seems not like your everyday girlgoup. here they seem more..human. it terrifies me in a good way, it makes me wake up and realize that the life of idols is not what i normally think is like..and that some secrets are meant to be secrets. i wonder if dajung would tell her members about her condition? but anyways wow..this is an eventful chapter..*thumbs up*
Chapter 29: dajung's birthday i am hyped! and the beautiful holiday called christmas ahahaa i dont know whether that is pure genuine or simply sarcasm xD ahahaa i salute jangmi's intentions though i can relate to jangmi..she cant boil water bwahaaa oh my :'D seeing jangmi and meilin's interactions makes me think that they are an old married couple xD ohnoo a sore spot *gently pats jangmi's back* i wonder if jangmi is ever going to tell meilin about her and taeyong no longer together? ah a momentarily drama and down vibe but its gone as quickly as it arrives. I wanna hug the ice queen right now, and i do not mind getting pricked by icicles if it means having a chance to hug her :") i hope Meilin's alright...about the part where Jangmi clapped her hands and says "kids lets go to bed" the part after that says worrying kyulbin and meilin to their room? im sorry im confused here..anyways oohh a sweet midnight interaction between dajung and other members. they are doing a movie marathon ouo can i join? ouo ahaha xD *gets kicked out* the sudden skinship of DaRon (yaas new ship!) got me melting..but on another note hmm Kyulbin..there's something off about her? i wonder what is going on inside her...its genius how you portray kyulbin and how she actually has depths and layers below her bubbly happy maknae surface, and now we get to see a more subdued, dark kyulbin. my fave part is hands down ---> Eating until they are filled was their current goal, at least it was most of them goal. i second this so badly ;_; referencing from a few chapters back, all of the girls are underweight. they really need to eat more and they are making my poor heart jump out :(
Chapter 32: "All the ing aesthetics omg, hands down best music video of the year, they better get it at mamas or im suing" i laughed
Lisaechef better tone it down or she gon catch these hands
Btw, all the songs that are part of the album are all very good and I like them a lot especially Europa and Hug U, they are just undeniably cute I can't even-
also, MY LOVELY GIRL OMG YEAAS! I really would like to see the girls reacting to it and Jangmi being all shy about it
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