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LostHeaven
#1
Chapter 3: It's okay authornim! ^^
We will patiently wait for any future updates regarding Ethereal (^ω^)
I hope all of your exams went on smoothly and that you will have good grades and enter a very good college ^^
I look forward to what the next Ethereal chapters will bring into the table beacsue all the previous chapters were beyond amazing and I absolutely adored them and I also think that you're improving immensely!
guisukigwi
#2
Chapter 3: hellooo Lena issok!!
I hope you’re doing well and no worries,,I’m kinda busy as well so I understand what you’re going through. And I don’t understand why you’re not fond of your writing, I personally love your writing so much and I find nothing wrong with it!! I wish you the best of luck with whatever you’re going through ^^ i’ll patiently anticipate the next chapter <3
guisukigwi
#3
Chapter 18: Aaaaahh im so soft for sejeong and saeron's interactions uwu ♡♡ im gonna ship it and let it fly ~ the 2sae couple ♡♡

Woooow jangmi's acting skills is showing here :"D hehe. I love the concept of soulmates tbh, despite not understanding the scientic explanation meilin said ahaa. Meilin keeps denying but i think deep down in her heart she knows that its trueee :D and ahahaha kyulbin's soulmate is food xD very true though :'D

Idol olympics!! Are you gonna have ethereal participate? ouo
Omg oh nooo kyulbin ;;; my tiny bby. And whos that monsta x member who bumped into her? I need to talk
Aww here comes the hiatus. I can't waaait ^^
This is an awesome chapter roseus!! Thank u for updating <3
guisukigwi
#4
Chapter 17: Hooraaay ethereal officially debuted!! Im so haaaappy ♡♡

Jangmi saeron and kyulbin seemed pretty relaxed. And i cant help but notice that before meilin starts speaking she seemed nervous, her lips, hesitantly, uneasy smile. I hope that meilin's okay..

Meilin, a rookie who starred in a drama with ji chang wook. Legends only.

Can i just say how much i love that ethereal did a boygroup concept? Thats so cool asjdhshs i love love love it <3

Great chapter as always authornim!! You did good you should give yourself a pat in the back ^^

And uuhh can we get a stray kids x ethereal interaction?? :"D it would be cool to see the 00 and 99 liners from each group interact with each other ouo
guisukigwi
#5
Chapter 2: Omg I just realized that there are new love interests (young k!!! aaahhh) and wow the new profiles look amazing
-flamingsun
#6
Chapter 18: Great update like always authornim
I'm looking forward to what Ethereal will offer next. I hope Kyulbin will get well soon ;;
LostHeaven
#7
Chapter 18: ETHEREAL HAS BEEN UPDATED ONCE MORE ;; I missed this story so much, thank you for updating authornim!
I ship Sejeong and Saeron so hard at the moment that I don't think it can be considered healthy, god I can just picture the two of them together in my mind and they just look so good together and I'm excited to see this ship sailing especially in a industry that's still very close minded towards topics such as same relationships.
I couldn't help but feel sad when Somi was mentioned TT They went through so much together aka Sixteen and Produce 101 but in the end Somi ended up betraying the girl that did nothing but love her
I hope Jangmi and Meilin will eventually warm up to the maknae that at the moment needs a lot of reassurance she isn't a bother
I LOVE JANGMI'S PART TBH Her persistency towards the idea that her and Meilin are soulmates is beyond amazing because Meilin is not used to people being so affectionate towards her because she also isn't. The relationship between these two is strong I love it with all my heart. Also, the way Jangmi explained to Saeron what soulmates are omg the uwu jumped out! AND OMG SAERON SAINGG THAT SEJEONG IS HER SOULMATE OMG MY HEART
MY BABEEEE KYULBINNIEEE! DON'T WORRY BABY, DAJUNG WILL MAKE SURE YOU REST A LOT OR SHE'S SUING
I like the way you talked about Kyulbin's injury much more now, it seems more realistic than her simply tripping. I have also bumped into people in the stairs and I always ended up losing my balance and hurting myself because I'm a weakling. I'm super curious to know who the MONSTA X member is tbh, perhaps Kihyun? Cause he just seems like the type of guy to worry a lot when seeing a girl get hurt.
And the hiatus has begun! I'm excited to see what Ethereal will be doing considering it will be longer than the original hiatus almost two months longer if I'm not incorrect!
Also those Taeyeon gifs omg THE UWU JUMPED OUT! <3
guisukigwi
#8
Chapter 16: I wonder what hazelnut cappucino will taste like :^D
Also what is doctor crush and maomao?? Ehee sorry for asking too much T^T
I like the way you write, the beginning seemed really realistic and somehow beautifully written so good job ^^
Wow meilin :0 is she really human bcs only sleeping two hours a day,,,thats uhealthy my heart is crying for meilin ;_;
Meilin's bluntness is hilarious at times -- i keep imagining her saying it with a flat face and scientific facts ahaha xD
Meilin's fashion is sooo my style -- except i would not be wearing ripped jeans
Hooraaay ethereal finally debuted!! And yaaay kyulbin's family are gonna come support i ♡
Aw i hope jangmi meilin dajung and saeron's family will come and support too
LostHeaven
#9
Chapter 17: Ethereal has officially finished their debut showcase! Yayyy!
I know you might not like this chapter but I liked it. It was different, but different doesn't always mean its bad ^^
ONTO THE PERFORMANCE YOU PICKED
That magic trick on Mr. Potter, I never understood how they actually did it hahaha, its really interesting. Shooting Love and Liar Liar are such good songs, thanks for reminding me of that authornim <3 So glad Oh My Girl finally got their 1st win with Secret Garden ;;
I agree with the fans hahaa, No Oh Oh lyrics are weird but the performances of the song are always so gooooood, the only thing that irks me is how only male fans are cheering, it always scares me because its so deep!
Fingertips made me tear up cause I thought about how by babe Eunwoo didn't make it to I.O.I but dayum Chungha is so y ;;
ALL THOSE SPECIAL PERFORMANCES THO OMG
THAT GROWL PERFORMANCE STILL MESSES MY UALITY UP TBH OMG THEY ARE LIKE NOT TRYING TO BE HOT BUT THAT MAKES THEM EVEN HOTTER BECAUSE THEY ARE SO FIERCE?? AND HER, ETHEREAL'S LESBIAN ANTHEM
The fanchants on that Russian Roulette performance ;; They made me tear up, Russian Roulette was Red Velvet's breakthrough in my opinion, it was when Korea really opened their eyes to their amazingness (too bad Wendy decided to ruin that by being a disgusting piece of racist turd -_-)
Looking forward to future updates!

ALSO YES! Stray Kids will be the next BTS and LOONA in the sense that there will be countless theories to every MV they ever release!
LostHeaven
#10
Chapter 16: ANOTHER UPDATE OH YEES
ETHEREAL HAS OFFICIALY DEBUTED AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO FREAKING FEEL AUTHORNIM
First of all, I just really want to say that I love the titles that you give to the sub-parts of each chapter, I love how they are sometimes words that are included in the actual chapter rather than something random.
Second of all, Dajungie is precious too precious for this world and all that she deserves is love and respect! (JUST WAIT FOR YOUNGK HE'LL GIVE HER THAT AND MORE) AND ALSO YEAH, GET THAT EDUCATION 99 LINERS AND SHOW THE KPOP INDUSTRY THAT YOU CAN PULL OFF BEING AN IDOL AND A STUDENT AT THE SAME TIME AND SLAY BOTH OF EM
Third of all, Kyulbin yeah I want her to marry Dajung because roommates for two years damn! I SHIP DAKYU! YOU SHIP DAKYU! WE SHIP DAKYU (sing this in 'We Like' by Pristin melody please). I like how Kyulbin always keeps her family in a special place in her heart ;; it's beyond cute tbh
That Lucky Girl performance tho, I always loved it especially because of the satin(?) pink tops, like the clothes are super simple but they still look amazing on the girls? Like it just fits the song tho I do prefer the denim costumes they wore at MNET.
I look forward to see the continuation of the girls' debut showcase ^^
guisukigwi
#11
Chapter 15: I LOVEE THE COVEEEEEER ITS SO AESTHETIC ;_;
"we'll be together even if its across the milkyway" ASDFGHJKL
oh also,,,please correct me if im wrong (the color coded lyrics)
rose --> pink
louise --> peach/orange
kenna --> blue
skye --> purple
kyulbin --> green
asfhjkl i think i got it mixed up --
guisukigwi
#12
Chapter 14: i love all of tape one's songs (and im so happy i know all of em <3)
@ savagetroller ,, pls kindly exit before i go hulk mode on you
@ theloofisnotonfiyah ... correction *BEST album of the year ;)
guisukigwi
#13
Chapter 13: yeeehaaa im living
i love love love russian roulette <3
guisukigwi
#14
Chapter 12: SAEEROOON omgg
@ squirtlesejeong ,,, ily thank u T^T indeed all members look beautiful <3
and wow that motorola handphone gave me flashbacks
guisukigwi
#15
Chapter 11: these editts aare no joke wow
lend me your skills pls
guisukigwi
#16
Chapter 10: first of all i am so sorry for being inactive
and i love the new poster + layout ,,,,also is saeron's fc nancy? wow i <3 momoland my soul jumped out of my heart when i saw the foreword >.< also im loving the new stage names + love interests,,,,but a question : who is hwang byeol's fc, if i may know? im not sure if im mistaken or not but i think he was the producer or something that told meilin what is love?

seriously i wanna punch the idiot sandwich called jyp for letting go a very talented girl. i love the way you portray the ioi members. the white hearted child -- it suits saeron very much!! just a suggestion but it would be cool to have some ethereal x ioi interactions :") (again, you dont have to do this!). also another question : can you please explain to me (like how you would explain to a five years old) why exactly did saeron leave jyp? im sorry im really slow in processing things T^T
wow saeron, earning millions in her young age while me, doing nothing productive. im such a mega Disappointment wow :"D
saeron to be compared as bae suji and im yoona's title,,, saeron is not a white hearted child,,,shes a white hearted queen goddess

oh nooo ;_; i feel like i wanna save saeron from the awkwardness --- it must've been hard for saeron not to be fully welcomed warmly,,, and wow theres lots of metaphors? i <3 u lena thank you for blessing me with your writing. jangmi is so brave to rebel and literally talk back to her ceo....i want jangmi's bravery ;_; wow the butterfly effect sounds cool. the flapping of a butterfly's wings somewhere caused me to come back from the dead and be blessed with these awesome updates.

wow omg i love the small fluffy interactions between taeyong and saeron!! tbh its normal for jangmi to be jealous,,,but idk why in my mind i see taeyong being motherly and big brother-ly towards saeron??? like i cant see him go lovey dovey or flirty on saeron. so dont you worry jangmi, taeyong is all yours!! ~ but darn taeyong i get that you're happy to see saeron but dont ignore jangmi :^(

YEEAASH OMG thanks for the update authornim ^^ dont worry, i totally understand your situation (we're both in the same grade, btw!) so issok. i do hope you're having enough rest and not over working yourself!
asdghjkl am i the only one who doesnt really focus on the dates? rip,,,me..a fake fan
METAPHORS i have a few questions (bcs my brain doesnt have enough iq to digest metaphors) ;
- a wolf pack that started living inside her brain --> is wolf pack symbolizing negative thoughts??
- sea of roses,,,does it mean like what you see on screen is different in real life??
that is all,,,im sorry for troubling you with my questions...i've lost count how many i've asked
yaaaay ethereal is finally debuting <3
YAAAS I LOVE BAD BOY SO MUCH OMG will ethereal do it too? *inserst meme eyes*
YAAS LOONA OMG MY GURLS I CANT BELIEVE ITS BEEN LIKE,,,ALMOST 2 YEARS SINCE HEEJIN'S MV CAME OUT!! im in tears
LostHeaven
#17
Chapter 12: I think Louise is more of platinum visual than anything (she's pretty, sings well, dances well, raps well, acts well, could be a model, could be a serial killer and remain a mystery like Jack the Ripper, could be the next Einstein haha)
I can't actually believe that Ethereal is re-debuting, I'm curious to see what more changes you have to come considering you moved their debut by almost two months ^^
LostHeaven
#18
Chapter 11: OH MY THIS IS ACTUALLY HAPPENING!
ETHEREAL IS FINALLY DEBUTING


AliceMadHatter, cash me outside how about dah???
LostHeaven
#19
Chapter 10: OH MY GOD! ETHEREAL HAS BEEN UPDATED AGAIN ;; I MISSED THI STORY SO MUCH
I liked this chapter so much, from beginning to end but damn there was something about Saeron's pov that just made my heart freaking ache, its sad knowing that despite all her hardwork and only good intentions to the outside world were completely ignored and people just tried to desroy everything she did.
Jangmi's pov was also amazing, especially the part she talked with Taeyong, it was so realistic in my opinion because the thing is not all couple tell everything to each other and I'm happy that you're including that despite them being relationship goals
Also, I loved Dajung in this chapter ^^ Girl is so oblivious to love, no wonder she's still single hahaha

Red Velvet looks so good ;; Too bad Yeri is sick and is YET AGAIN getting hate from netizens, and yes LOONA is almost complete! What did you think of GoWon's revealing? I liked her solo song but her duet with Chuu ft. Kimberly Lippington was superior in all levels!
Looking forward to future updates <3
Sica_Sicachu
#20
Chapter 9: Like always you're putting out amazing content. This story is getting so much more interesting than it used to be, which is a good thing! I think rebooting it was the greatest thing you could have done!