[OC] Dawn of the Worlds by ReaLiknownot
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Dawn of the Worlds
Author(s) : ReaLiknownot
Status : Completed
Tag(s) : adventure fantasy originalcharacter exo lay yixing mamaverse
Character(s) : Lay, OC, EXO
Chapter(s) : 57 (1 prologue + 30 main + 1 epilogue + 25 bonuses)
Artist(s) : EXO
Description/Foreword/Summary :
A dying Tree of Life.
Twelve men sworn to serve and protect it.
A girl trapped in the middle of it all.
Opinion about the story :
In my opinion, the story is well-written. There are probably some grammar mistakes, but I don't think that would be a problem when reading the story. At least to me, it's not. I still can understand how the story goes. I don't really realize or focus that there's a mistake at all. That's why I think it's well-written.
The plot is unique. Because the concept or theme of this story is MAMA verse, of course, there will be a tree of life and EXO's power. But what makes this story more special is that there are messages in it. I like how the author conveys that messages through this story. Messages about the worlds, its nature, and humans who are often take everything from it for granted.
I like how the author narrates or describes the story. How she makes another world, a parallel universe that is so different ftom the world that we know. There's romance, alright, but it's not really the main focus, and I like it. I also like the little details about this different world that the author makes. The pace of this story is good too. It's not rushed. Everything just seems perfect and not out of proportion.
All the characters are amazing. Iola is so cute. I don't know how to explain it, but I get a feeling that she's cute. I love how compassionate and selfless she is. For Yixing, well, like most stories with him in it, Yixing is a kind-hearted man. It's a good thing. And it's cute when I see him being protective or jealous because he is always well-mannered. The other guardians are special. They all have different characteristic and I love all of them. The Teimans are good people. I love all the five of them. Their characters are really different from each other. I like it. And let's not forget about the spirits. All of them are the ones who make the story more unique. I love all of their characters and their power/energy. The point is each of the characters in this story is awesome.
For character development, I don't know. I think there's a development of Iola's character. I just think that she becomes more mature. The guardians too. They can learn to put aside their dislike or hate of Teimans people, to prioritize things that are more important than that. I just love how all of them try to work together in the end.
For relationship development, I love how Iola interacts with the guardians (EXO members). Though she can be a potential lover, I see her more like a sister to them (of course, except Yixing). With Yixing, I love their interaction and their conversation when they are alone, without the others. It seems intimate and their little gestures with each other are so cute. With EXO, I especially like how Iola treat Tao like a sibling, real sibling. I also like her interaction with the Teimans, especially with Alik and Zeev. Don't forget with the spirits. I really like every time she's with the spirit and has a conversation with them. Also, I like how she can connect with nature with the help of the threads. The point is I really love all of their relationship with each other.
Overall, it's a really good story. A wonderful and inspiring story.
Note from me :
I love the story. It's unusual for me to read a story with Yixing as the main lead, but I decided to give it a try and I don't regret it at all. I really enjoy reading this story.
This story is unique with Mama verse as a theme or concept and also a parallel universe.
I can say that this story is simple and not heavy, but there are important messages in it that we can't ignore. I hope if you decide to read this story, you can understand what this story wants to convey.
Yixing maybe is not your bias and/or you don't really like him, but please give this story a try. I think you'll love her interaction with the others (and probably ship her with one of those characters XD).
Oh! The Teimans in this story are inspired by Big Bang members. If you already watched Fantastic Baby MV, I think you'll know who is who. Just want to let you know. ;)
*can't find the poster for this story.
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