I recently wrote my first request and oc fic!! I've never done an oc because I've personally never read an oc fic and thought that if I haven't even read one that writing one would be absurd but it happened.  A sweet user posted on my wall requesting a Suga from BTS fic with the an oc named Lee Jieun.  I'd really appreciate if you would read it and give me some feed back.  I've only gotten one comment on any of my stories so of you could leave one and give me some things I could work on it would be much appreciated!! I'm a new writer so I need as much constructive criticism as possible.  Thank you in advance if you read it and if you don't thanks for just reading this blog ^_^