Two

Twelve Meters and Closer
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Wow, I didn't really expect people to read this story, but here you guys are. :) For that, thank you very very much!! <3    

They weren't really friends.

  The first time Hayi 'met' Hanbin, he was standing by the window too. He saw her, pointed straight at her...and stuck out his tongue as far as it could go. Hayi cried. They were six years old. Since then, to her, Hanbin was the obnoxious kid from the other unit.   Hayi, even as they grew up, loved to look out the window; only to stop short when she feels somebody watching her. And Hanbin would wave to her from across the street, with a big smile on his face, probably making up for the mehrong he gave her from their childhood. It drove Hayi nuts. And to Hanbin, she was the tiny thing he loved to cross.   Jiwon egged Hanbin on whenever she was in the park, or in the convenience store, or the bread store...when she wasn't behind the windows of their unit.   He always thought that Hayi was cute and pretty, and he'll always tell Hanbin that he's a doofus.

Chaerin arrived half an hour later, and the sisters sat down together in front of the television to have a rare moment to have dinner together.

The rain fell harder as the night wore on, and Chaerin complained of the difficult commute, the sticky feeling of summer rain, and her hunger. Hayi smiled as she listened to her sister, and appropriately nodded at the right moments. But halfway through the meal, Chaerin noticed the drawn living room curtains.   "What happened to the view? Did it go bad while you waited for me?" she teased Hayi. "No, unni. I just...thought it looked cold because of the rain," she said slowly. "The lights should look nice tonight with the droplets of rain on the window; do you mind if I open the curtains?" And she marched to the window, not waiting for Hayi's answer. She pulled the huge curtains apart and opened them wide enough to get a big picturesque view. She admired it for a moment, but Chaerin suddenly paused.   "Hayi, what date is it again today?" "July 10th. Why?" "Ah, now I understand," Chaerin paused. Hayi turned to look at her big sister staring transfixedly at the apartment across theirs. "It's Jiwon's death anniversary." "Oh..." Hayi replied uncertainly. Chaerin sighed. "It's such a shame. I should probably ask Jinhwan how they are."   Hayi fidgeted in her seat. Unlike her, Chaerin had been good friends with the two eldest Kim boys. The eldest brother, Jinhwan, was her classmate in high school, and the second eldest, Jiwon, she had met during college in Hongdae where they hung out.   "Jiwon was a sweet kid," Chaerin mused. "I still can't believe he's gone."   Silence ensued as Chaerin returned to her seat and the girls finished their meal. The older sister kept glancing out the window, sighing.   "The youngest boy," Hayi started hesitantly. "I hadn't seen him for a while." "He moved out after Jiwon died," Chaerin answered. "He took up engineering in a university in Incheon, and stayed in a dorm. Poor kid. Jiwon being gone hit him hardest.I don't know what he does now."   Hayi didn't want to ask any more questions, though her curiosity was burning. How much did one have to feel to have the lights go out of your eyes?   Chaerin suddenly chuckled as she put her phone down. "Jinhwan's bringing us cake." "Eh?" "They al
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Aida_Rusdi
#1
Chapter 11: How irony that i read this after hanbin leaving ikon and can't help to point out some similarities between this story line with the real life situation right now. Like how this jiwon got involved with drug and it's the freaking thing people accused hanbin with. Like how hayi said "welcome back, hanbin-ah" and that's how i want it to happen so much since hayi is having her comeback around but it feels so much emptiness without hanbin as her best friend to fill his singing parts. Despite this one very thing happened, it still manages to hurt me beyond words. And i shouldn't ponder about it often for now as I'm sitting for my final exam till 1st july. I need to stay focus, yet we know it's still futile to put aside the thing that matter to us. Let's just hope everything will go back the way it was, better and greater.
Midnight-Rose
#2
re-reading again and again, cuz this is an amazing masterpiece
Midnight-Rose
#3
Chapter 10: this was so beautiful and heartwarming <3
i really loved how you balanced between the angst and the fluff, well done!
cinnamonspunk #4
Chapter 10: Thank you for taking the time to write this!
cinnamonspunk #5
Chapter 8: Bravo! Hanbin’s speech to Jiwon was well written!
cinnamonspunk #6
Chapter 7: I love the line, “My comfort pales in comparison.” It just rolled off the tongue nicely!
I also thought of the line where Lee Hi says it doesn’t matter if you know what you want to do or not, as long as you look forward. There’s depth to it, and I agree with her. People are always saying you have to follow your dreams, but dreams don’t make good leaders. You can give up things that you’d like to do for the best things.
cinnamonspunk #7
Chapter 6: I love the verse you put in the beginning. “Love is the great reversal.”

And these two are so sweet!
cinnamonspunk #8
Chapter 4: Okay so he didn’t commit suicide. Death is really an awful thing. But it can be overcome.

You capture emotions well!
cinnamonspunk #9
Chapter 3: Oh no, he committed suicide! It’s such an awful thing ): I wish people knew that they have hope in a living God so that they won’t just throw away their lives.
cinnamonspunk #10
Chapter 1: I think the way you describe details is lovely, and when you started talking about lights and warmth, I immediately thought of this, “God is light and in Him there is no darkness at all.”