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Twelve Meters and Closer
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Hayi walked slowly as she struggled to carry groceries, dinner, and her work bag towards their building. It was drizzling, and the sky made the early evening look a little bit later than it should on a summer day. To Hayi, it was even a surprise that she was off from work this early, that she didn't mind the rain at all.

 

Her mother called to tell her that both she and her father were to dine out for a client meeting. She tasked her to pick up dinner for herself, and, remembering Chaerin, called her up to take her order too.

 

"Quesadillas, baby sister. Thank you!! I'll be home in an hour." Chaerin said gratefully into the phone. Hayi knew just how hard at work Chaerin is in the next city, so it was a small thing to buy her a treat once in a while.

 

She nodded to the guard who opened the door for her, and smiled graciously when he also proceeded to press the elevator button for her. She waited until the car pinged to her floor, and eased herself out.

 

She opened the door to their apartment and the lights. She was exhausted to the bone. Still, she sighed, I'm home earlier today. That, in itself, is a joyful thing for her.

 

Half an hour later, all cleaned up and dressed in comfy jogging pants and sweater, she grabbed her dinner from the table and the TV in their living room. She drew the curtains open, reveling in the pretty lights of the city. She loved seeing the lights from the window, and since she was small, she loved to look over the city at night.

"Hayi-ah, do you see those lights down at the street? And in the cars...and down there at your favorite bread store?" Chaerin asked tenderly as she combed Hayi's hair. At age twelve, Chaerin loved being the baby sitter to Hayi. She loved how Hayi hung on to her every word, her eyes shining in anticipation for what her big sister will say next. She loved making Hayi's hopeful eyes shine.

"You know, those lights," she paused, allowing Hayi to turn to her in quiet excitement, "Those lights are very pretty, but you know what? They're even prettier when you think of people who are in them, people staying with them."

"For me, when I see a light on, I feel warmth. I think, 'Oh, someone alive is in that car, or in that house or store.' I feel somehow, that person's heart is beating. And it makes me happy to s

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Aida_Rusdi
#1
Chapter 11: How irony that i read this after hanbin leaving ikon and can't help to point out some similarities between this story line with the real life situation right now. Like how this jiwon got involved with drug and it's the freaking thing people accused hanbin with. Like how hayi said "welcome back, hanbin-ah" and that's how i want it to happen so much since hayi is having her comeback around but it feels so much emptiness without hanbin as her best friend to fill his singing parts. Despite this one very thing happened, it still manages to hurt me beyond words. And i shouldn't ponder about it often for now as I'm sitting for my final exam till 1st july. I need to stay focus, yet we know it's still futile to put aside the thing that matter to us. Let's just hope everything will go back the way it was, better and greater.
Midnight-Rose
#2
re-reading again and again, cuz this is an amazing masterpiece
Midnight-Rose
#3
Chapter 10: this was so beautiful and heartwarming <3
i really loved how you balanced between the angst and the fluff, well done!
cinnamonspunk #4
Chapter 10: Thank you for taking the time to write this!
cinnamonspunk #5
Chapter 8: Bravo! Hanbin’s speech to Jiwon was well written!
cinnamonspunk #6
Chapter 7: I love the line, “My comfort pales in comparison.” It just rolled off the tongue nicely!
I also thought of the line where Lee Hi says it doesn’t matter if you know what you want to do or not, as long as you look forward. There’s depth to it, and I agree with her. People are always saying you have to follow your dreams, but dreams don’t make good leaders. You can give up things that you’d like to do for the best things.
cinnamonspunk #7
Chapter 6: I love the verse you put in the beginning. “Love is the great reversal.”

And these two are so sweet!
cinnamonspunk #8
Chapter 4: Okay so he didn’t commit suicide. Death is really an awful thing. But it can be overcome.

You capture emotions well!
cinnamonspunk #9
Chapter 3: Oh no, he committed suicide! It’s such an awful thing ): I wish people knew that they have hope in a living God so that they won’t just throw away their lives.
cinnamonspunk #10
Chapter 1: I think the way you describe details is lovely, and when you started talking about lights and warmth, I immediately thought of this, “God is light and in Him there is no darkness at all.”