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Hi guys, I have a HUGE writer's block on this fic, and I NEED suggestions! Please drop suggestions in the comment box below, and whoever has the most original idea will receive 20 karma points (I have no idea what they're for, but people seem to want them, so I guess they'll do), and an upvote to their fics! Do you like the idea? I hope so! Thank you for supporting this fic, writing to me is as important as breathing (seriously, I really want to be a writer. I sent my script to a screenwriting competition)! I <3 my fans!

~ Bibi

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infiniteology #1
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_cyantears_ #2
Chapter 5: Omg L is still not over Sunggyu keke :)) Eunnam's worse than Woohyun!
cutieale #3
Chapter 4: You have a good plot but I think you are writing it ib thd wrong way, its counfusing because of timeline you explain in the first chapter doesbt look related it to the one in this chapter. And you are traybg to explain to much in chaptter like for example their past. The story seems to rush for me. Its good you have subscriber and that you are trying to writte a good story. But for a fic to be it has to bring to thinks; expectations and reality. The reader most feel that the story its developing in a timeline that feel real and the feellings and emotions you are trying to portrait most feel like you want to obvious bit not to much. For example when sungkyu pass out woohyin look concern but it doesnt make sense because not long ago woohyun yell at him like theres no tomorrow or at least that what I get when you say "he flip the bird at me". Dont take this in the wrong way or that trying to insult your work. It just I had been a fanfic reviewr for a lo g time and I had read all type writting styles soooo I cant hel myself too see the good things abd bad things in every fic. I think you got potential to improve I have seens a lot writter here that improve a lot and had become incredible writters so I have faith :). Good luck with this fics. You have a good plot work on it :). Greetings oooh and sorry for my mistakes Im currently in a car right know abd English its not my first lenguage.
SeventeenCarrot #4
Chapter 4: I don't like eunnam at all... >:0
SeventeenCarrot #5
Chapter 3: Bedding... Is that another word for lmao? I hope you feel better, getting shocked is scary. And woohyun' wife is scary. Thanks for updating!
monkeyboydongwoo #6
Chapter 2: great work! :)
SeventeenCarrot #7
Chapter 2: Woo looking forward to more sunggyu teaching woohyun a lesson on MANNERS
chillaxbro #8
OMG I LOVE ELYSIUM! I also like the fanfic style!! Can't wait for WooGyu!
shineewol #9
xute title
ifntku #10
"On the other hand, woohyun fought his life...." you mean sunggyu, right?
This sounds interesting! Looking forward for the first chapter!
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