This is so incredibly well done!!!! I just started writing fan fiction myself but I like the way you managed to tell such a complete story in a coherent and succinct manner while also having emotional ups and downs!!! Also a nice twist with the epilogues! Ahhhhh why are you so perfect??????
I love this so much ;; tore my heart into pieces tbh ; A ; but this is so beautifully written and urgh angst is just so ♡♡♡♡ good job! Fanxing is just too precious tbh ;;
Chapter 9: I read the whole chapters this afternoon & i broke down so many time for every chapter. I wish them for a happy ending but i guess life doesnt always give u a happy ending. This is a very good fic, i wouldnt know this is ur first time if u didnt say it lol
Chapter 1: Hello! I absolutely "fell in love with" your story ;;
Can I translate it into Vietnamese then post it to my Wordpress? It will be my pleasure if you allow me to do that. I will take it out with full credit/link and note clearly that I translate it from your fic. If you still worry I can give you my Wordpress link then you can check it =))) Hope to see your reply soon, sorry for bothering you ;_; and thank you so much :">
Chapter 9: hi, I am from the blog you made a submission to! I posted it today and telling you that I have read till chapter 3! Well now, I have read all of it and I have to tell you that I wish there were more stories like this. It's deep, it's emotional and it's creative. I love it! I liked your small message in the last chapter too. Great job, I can't wait to read more things from you! :D
Chapter 9: I knew I was in for something extraordinary from the title of the first chapter. I am completely stunned; from that scale of 1-10. I ended up at content.
Your characterization is so relatable with the sense of hopelessness of being stuck between a rock and a hard place. Those who have gone through that come out scarred and indestructible. I think that's what happened with Yifan and Yixing. Yifan's passing gave Yixing the chance to realize pain in the non-physical sense.
Thank you for writing something so beautiful. Loss and hope goes hand in hand.
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