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⟪ Misaki TAKEDA ⟫ by Bloomish
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Three
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Nam Jihyun 
⟪ love interest ⟫ Goo Junhwe (ikon)

⟪ status ⟫ Accepted

Hello! Thank you so much for being the first to apply for QUXXN. For Misaki's personality, it's well balanced but could you add more flaws to it? Adding more flaws will give your character more depth. I really like her background! It was nice and simple + you described how her parent met, which I thought, was really cute hehe. I heard you were confused with the no kpop friends part? The reason why I said the members couldn't have friends that are kpop idols is Quxxn is a japanese group and has done promoting in Japan only. The girls wouldn't have time to make friends with Korean idols. That's why when Quxxn comes over to Korea, they would be meeting those Idols for the first time. I'm sorry that was an horrible explanation but that was the best why I could. With that being said can you remove the kpop idol friends you have please? Back to the review, I like the fact that Misaki has a rival/ enemy. It would be very interesting to incorporate that in the story. I enjoyed reading Junhwe's personality I found it quite funny. I like how their relationship isn't like others how the couple would have a lovey dovey relationship, brownie points to you! For the other section, Can you please write a conclusion there. Once again thank you so much for applying. Your applicant is good! i hope I didn't sound too mean :( Please fix those mistakes.  Thank you for fixing those mistakes, your application is now accpeted

⟪ TOTAL APPLICANTS ⟫ 07
⟪ LAST UPDATED ⟫ 4/10

⟪ PLOTLINE ⋮ 001 ⟫ 02
⟪ PLOTLINE ⋮ 003 ⟫ 01
⟪ PLOTLINE ⋮ 004 ⟫ 02
⟪ PLOTLINE ⋮ 005 ⟫ 02

 
 
 
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⟪ eri suzuki ⟫ by jennaynay
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Five
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Jiyeon
⟪ love interest ⟫ Jeon Jungkook (BTS)

⟪ status ⟫ Accepted

Hey jennaynay thanks for applying! I'm so glad you chose Jiyeon as Eri's face claim! I'm glad you listed future year on Eri's timeline. I can already see the type of reaction from fans in Japan if she debuted as a solo artist in Korea first. For Eri's personality can you expand more on it and could you add more flaws too? What you have so far is great but please add a little more. Even though Eri's background is short, it gave off the information that I needed to know, like how she got into AVEX. I looked at your scene request and I really like them, especially one in particular (I'm pretty sure you know the one that I'm refering to ;)  ) Besides the personality, I didn't find anything else wrong. Please fix those mistakes.  Thank you fo fixing the mistake, your application is now accepted!

 
 
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⟪ Sae Kazuyoshi ⟫ KoLi-Song
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Four
⟪ face-claim ⟫ CL
⟪ love interest ⟫ Kim Jusu

⟪ status ⟫ Accepted

Hey KoLi-song! I've read over your application and it's really good! As I read applications I have the chosen plotline your picked and the must haves your applicantion has to have, and your character is missing some (You probably have all the things I'm about to list but I'm too stupid for not seeing them xD ). Please have the following in your applicantion: State that Sae has a close friendship with the original members, Being upset that a member won't be joining QUXXN for their Korean debut, and Fluent in Korean. Please fix those :) Thank you for fixing the mistakes :)

I really like how creative the application is. I wasn't expecting Sae's father to be a worker under nitendo^.^I can see a lot of drama surrounded by Sae. She has her crazy mother who would try anything to get her daugher to act on stage, Sae's ex boyfriend being in Korea at the same time she is, then there's onew, and lastly, Junsu ( <-- bae) and Sae having clashing personalites. WOW. Sae will be really fun to write about! I didn't find anymore mistakes except for the ones I stated above, thats good. Great application^^ 

 

 
 
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⟪ Takahashi AIKO⟫ by AmazonaZafrina
⟪ Plotline ⟫ four
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Gain
⟪ love interest ⟫ Nam Taehyun (Winner)

⟪ STATUS ⟫ Accepted

 

Thank you for applying AmazonaZafrina! First lets start with the questions you had. 1. for her personality...you'll see what i think of it later in the review haha. 2. No I normally listen to jpop. There are a few songs that I like but I wouldn't call myself a jpop fan^^. I read your timeline and saw the wgm with jokwon, we can always pretend he wasn't on the show haha. Answering your question about her personality now I LOVE IT. It's different from the other applications that I have read before. I don't think you should make her spoiled at all. I like the fact that she doesn't act like she is from a high class family. Her personality would make people think otherwise and back shocked to find out about her class status. I adore the relationship Aiko has with taehyun it's so cute, I ship <3. The only mistake/ thing you need to add is just put in parentheses fluent after the explantion for how she knows Korean. Your application is accepted! I won't put as your status mistakes because you just have something so simple to add to the languages. Great job :)  

 
 
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⟪ Min Aeri ⟫ by NanaKirae
⟪ Plotline ⟫ One
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Sohee
⟪ love interest ⟫ Giriboy

⟪ status ⟫ Accepted

Before I start the review I just want to say sorry about having your review be so late.I like the fact that her background story ties well with who she is. I like how the relationship is with Aeri and Giriboy. I like that they are both laid back and comfortable with each other. I do like the faceclaim it defiantly fits well. Two things though, can you elaborate the relationship Aeri and G-dragon have now? And since Aeri had a solo career, can you just state the songs she has done. Please fix those mistakes please^^ Thank you for fixing the mistakes^^

 
 
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⟪ Sasazuka moa ⟫ by Obeliaa
⟪ Plotline ⟫ Five
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Reina
⟪ love interest ⟫ Kang Seung Yoon 

⟪ status ⟫ Accpeted

Before I start this review I just want to say sorry about having this review be SO late AND for messing up with the names xD Let's start off with your face claim. In my opinion your face claim doesn't really match the face/style of the group. i like how you followed plotline Five having a baby face but could you find someone else please. Someone that has a lot of pictures to choose from. That was only thing that thought you should fix. I love the trivia section, it allowed me to know more about her^^ I like the fact that Moa (omg is that her name? did I miss it up again?!) has a love rival! I can defiently see some drama stiring up^^ I enjoyed reading her personality, she's a mix of everything and I like that; Unique personality. Please fix the face claim :)  Thank you for changing to face claim^^

 
 
 
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⟪ Kim Haneul ⟫ by _Hooray
⟪ Plotline ⟫ One
⟪ face-claim ⟫ Soyu 
⟪ love interest ⟫ None

⟪ status ⟫ Accepted

Thank you so much for applying! i really like your face claim. The face claim really fits with the personality of the character. But could you add another flaw to your character. A flaw that would clash with the 2nd plotline. The trait could be something like Haneul being stubborn. For Haneul's background I abosolutly LOVE it! It's different from the others that I've read before and it's very creative! I would have never thought that would be the cause of her scandal. Brownie Points for you^^ I like the fact that Haneul doesn't have a love interest, Instead she wants to work on her relationship with her brother. I didn't find anything else wrong with your application. Please fix what needs to be fix. Good Job! Thank you for fixing the mistake

 
 
 
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liltaytay45
#1
Chapter 26: Go Yuri! Although part of me feels bad for Hanuel. I can't wait to see what happen with Karina
AmazonaZafrina
#2
Chapter 26: At least Eriis seeing the light of the situation. I hope Yuri and the other girls start to open up to Haneul.
Poor Karina.
Update soon~
_hooray
#3
Chapter 26: eriii <3 hehe
waah whats actually happen between karen and the ceo?
jennaynay
#4
Chapter 3: Yay! Welcome back, I'll look forward to part 2
_hooray
#5
Chapter 3: Oh yay! Im looking forward to it!! : D
liltaytay45
#6
Chapter 3: You know you can always message me if your stuck in ideas . I usually have good ones hahah. Your doing a good job though
_hooray
#7
Chapter 25: i actually dont mind with everything you write :> you own haneul now!
it'll be cool to be all nice and cute to each other on camera but hate each other off camera. maybe slowly get along, and slowly help each and soon turn into a solid team? its up to you tbh ;;
you can even make haneul as y as you want cx im serious
AmazonaZafrina
#8
Chapter 25: You updated~
Well,to be honest, I want them to get along,but in order to do that,there must be a conflict,then the girls will need to get over their differences and solve their conflict if they want to success in the Kpop industry.
A little bit of conflict it's not bad,it's kind of necessary for the story's plot right? For the girls to open up and develop a stronger relationship as a members and friends.
Update soon~