Original Characters Review Shop

About the shop: After a long consideration I decided to open this shop and see how it goes. I intend to make each review personal and tailored for each story individually so there is no rubric. All reviews will be nongraded. However, if you want a graded review just let me know and I will give you grades (I prefer not to, though). The main areas I will concentrate on the most are the title, plot, flow, characters and grammar in general. I won't be giving grammar tips because I am not a native English speaker, but I will point some obvious repetitive mistakes. What I will concentrate on the most are the plot and characters so if you want tips in that area, that's what you will get.

I am not a y person in general, but I can be blunt. However, my purpose here is not to insult anyone but give support. I will try to be as supportive & encouraging as possible. That's why I would like to receive requests only from those who want to improve & get some constructive feedback about their stories. Those who collect reviews in their description for show off, maybe this place is not the right place for you guys. The unbiased part means that I will try to be as neutral as possible and keep my own personal opinions in check. So even if I dislike your story I won't give you a bad review just because I dislike it, I will still review it just like any story out there (and even if I like your story I will still be blunt no matter what).

My review is not some final verdict, but just my thoughts on how you could develop as a writer. Don't take what I say here personally or too seriously, my purpose is to make you think and to help you help yourself. I will give you pointers and ideas, take what you think is helpful and ignore the rest. I tend to concentrate on the problems and leave out the praises. So even if I don't point out many good things, it doesn't mean your story or that you as an author. It just means that I tell you what I think needs to be improved, that's all. I will bring out one or two examples from your story to emphasize my thoughts, but I won't point out every single mistake you make. I will just give you an idea of what to concentrate on and I hope that you will continue from there yourself.

The first batch will be 10 stories in the requested order. 

Guidelines

No idol fiction accepted. You can have idols as your main characters but as in "original characters". That is not EXO as a band working at SM or whatever but, for example, a high school, office, gang settings etc. Otherwise, all genres are accepted except pwp & girl x girl fics. Can be ongoing, completed or oneshot. Rated stories accepted as well.

Subscription is optional, but also the only way to get updates.

To request just post a link to your story in the comment section. 

Please comment when you have received your review so I know you have seen it.

You are encouraged to discuss the review if you think it's unfair or if you think I misunderstood something. However, let's not fight. 

You don't have to credit me back because this review is only meant for you. But you can credit me back if you want to.

If you are satisfied with the review an upvote would be a nice thank you gift, but that's optional.

I might be slow and even if you rush me I won't work faster.