Chapter 6

Forsaken Dreamscape
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  I open my eyes and the first thing that greets me from my sleep is a woman’s face. She smiles and I see the way her fine lines creased her rather old face. I glare as I slowly sit up straight. The woman hums beside me and continues sewing.

  “Where am I?” I ask after a while because I don’t know if I should be asking this.

  “My dear, you’re at home.” she answers calmly without looking up from her work. “Now go down and eat your breakfast. Your sister’s waiting for you.” that’s strange. Who was she supposed to be?

  “W-who are you?” I hold my head between my hands. I feel awful, like my head’s filled with water. I’m drowning but I don’t look like it.

  “Well, aren’t you a joker. Hurry up and go down, already.” she inserts the needle into the cloth she’s holding and she looks like she’s enjoying it.

  “I’m not joking. Who are you?” I scrunch my nose and stare at her. She stops and looks up at me. Her face darkens slightly, kind of menacing and she doesn’t smile. She speaks but something blocks her words and the only thing I heard from her was, bleeeep this isn’t funny, go downstairs, bleeeep.

  It’s like those in televisions wherein a character says an offensive word and for the sake of viewers who were still children, they censor it and stuff. I raise an eyebrow and I wonder if it really is an offensive word. But it doesn’t look like it.

  She doesn’t return to sewing but she continues to stare at me with a stern look. She points to the door with her bony finger and I quickly leave the room without another word. I walk down the stairs but once in a while I take a look at the door and I see a quarter of her face from the

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prod_GLEE
#1
Chapter 14: there's an author's note chapter looking at the comment and i would die to know what was there TvT
mystery/ thriller is seriously scarce in this community it's sad OTL
Iceprincess610 #2
Chapter 14: wot the heck
yeongie96
#3
Chapter 14: Heol this is so ertly psycho it's sooo damn good!
feelingkimchi
#4
I want to read this (i love psych fics so much) but it says horror in the tags. :(((( is it really scary?
feversend1112 #5
Chapter 15: OMG! I just found your story few days ago and BANG!

I love it!
I love everything in this story!

Gosh, I do in love with psychology and stuffs.

You're the best!

love from Indonesian reader
Fan_of_Karma
#6
Chapter 14: I loved how deep Taehyung's character was! Despite what he did, we kind of can sympathize with him, and I actually feel really sorry for him... I got reminded of Kill Me Heal Me a bit (not sure if you've watched it)... really great story! :)
openminds #7
Love that this was posted on my wall!
damnationSUruck
#8
Chapter 15: Man, I'm always looking for some good psychological reads, and I must say, this was a nice treat I stumbled across.
The A/N here in fact helped me understand and put together a lot of loose ends! So thank you for taking the time to explain all those hidden, otherwise vague details :)
I very much enjoyed the scenarios V was in. Wow, it must have taken a lot of creativity from you, but the hard work was seriously worth it. I could imagine everything with incredibly vividness, and was super surprised to find out they all had some connection with his murdered family members at the end! Not sure if this was intended, but I can finally see the purpose of the siren, which was most likely the form his mother took in his dream-like state. The axe-killing, I can see as his sister. And the hanging form that make an appearance somewhere in the early chapters makes for an interesting father figure! Never would have imagined these things at all until reaching the end, waaah ; v ;

All in all though, really, really good job writing this fan fiction. Stephan King is one heck of an inspiration, haha, so well done! One thing I've been constantly reminded of while reading this as well is the video game 'The Evil Within', which is also a heavy psychological-based storyline and plot. :) But otherwise, this was very innovative.
hellomylova
#9
Chapter 1: Hey, just started reading. It's interesting!