Chapter 3

Forsaken Dreamscape
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  The weight of my body comes back to me and I feel as if I’ve never breathed in my sleep. I cough as I keep my right eye open, just to look around. Or maybe a part of me thinks it’ll help me fight off something I don’t even know. Is there even someone out there? I’m surrounded with tall green trees… Is there someone living here?

 

  I walk around while hugging myself. I’m afraid and while I don’t remember anything, I still get the feeling someone’s watching me. Is it from the trees? That’s funny, since when do trees have eyes? HOLY .

 

  I stare back at the huge eye in front of me. It isn’t the usual human eye. It is all black and filled with malice. And it’s looking back at me. I don’t move, afraid that if I do, it’ll kill me. I just get the feeling from it.

 

  I try to breathe calmly and avert my eyes from it. Maybe if I’m not looking back, it’ll look away… Fortunately, the tree looks away and I take that as a chance to run away. Why do I feel a sense of deja vu with running? Was I running in my sleep?

 

  I stop when I got to the clearing. Did the tree follow me? I turn back to check. I slow my breathing, just so I could hear well. Nothing… I let out a sigh of relief and drop to my knees. I dip my hands into the water and splash my face with it to somehow wake me up from this nightmare. Just a hopeless thought…

 

  The water stirs and a few ripples form as water drops from my hands. I stare at it until I can see a face emerging out from the once still river. I back away, of course, why wouldn’t I? I stretch my hands in search for something to throw at the penetrator. Anything… Unfortunately, there are no rocks nearby and I quickly got to my feet, ready to run just in case it chases after me.

 

  It turns out to be a woman, skin as white as snow and her hair, as odd as whoever she is, isn’t wet. In fact, it looks alive.

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prod_GLEE
#1
Chapter 14: there's an author's note chapter looking at the comment and i would die to know what was there TvT
mystery/ thriller is seriously scarce in this community it's sad OTL
Iceprincess610 #2
Chapter 14: wot the heck
yeongie96
#3
Chapter 14: Heol this is so ertly psycho it's sooo damn good!
feelingkimchi
#4
I want to read this (i love psych fics so much) but it says horror in the tags. :(((( is it really scary?
feversend1112 #5
Chapter 15: OMG! I just found your story few days ago and BANG!

I love it!
I love everything in this story!

Gosh, I do in love with psychology and stuffs.

You're the best!

love from Indonesian reader
Fan_of_Karma
#6
Chapter 14: I loved how deep Taehyung's character was! Despite what he did, we kind of can sympathize with him, and I actually feel really sorry for him... I got reminded of Kill Me Heal Me a bit (not sure if you've watched it)... really great story! :)
openminds #7
Love that this was posted on my wall!
damnationSUruck
#8
Chapter 15: Man, I'm always looking for some good psychological reads, and I must say, this was a nice treat I stumbled across.
The A/N here in fact helped me understand and put together a lot of loose ends! So thank you for taking the time to explain all those hidden, otherwise vague details :)
I very much enjoyed the scenarios V was in. Wow, it must have taken a lot of creativity from you, but the hard work was seriously worth it. I could imagine everything with incredibly vividness, and was super surprised to find out they all had some connection with his murdered family members at the end! Not sure if this was intended, but I can finally see the purpose of the siren, which was most likely the form his mother took in his dream-like state. The axe-killing, I can see as his sister. And the hanging form that make an appearance somewhere in the early chapters makes for an interesting father figure! Never would have imagined these things at all until reaching the end, waaah ; v ;

All in all though, really, really good job writing this fan fiction. Stephan King is one heck of an inspiration, haha, so well done! One thing I've been constantly reminded of while reading this as well is the video game 'The Evil Within', which is also a heavy psychological-based storyline and plot. :) But otherwise, this was very innovative.
hellomylova
#9
Chapter 1: Hey, just started reading. It's interesting!