Chapter 11

Forsaken Dreamscape
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   I open my eyes when I see bright lights flickering above me. I blink repeatedly, trying to clear the blurriness from my eyes. The light blinds me instead so I look to the side and I see a monochrome silhouette of a human being. I blink again and try to focus so I can finally see who it is.

   “You’re awake, V.” he says in a deep voice and taps on the monitor beside him that continuously beeps since wires from it are attached to me. I realize it’s my heart beat monitor.

   Once the image clarifies, I let my mouth wide open because the doctor looks very familiar and fear engulfs me. What’s there to fear? The fear of knowing nothing, but the dread lingers and I suddenly wish to disappear soon because this guy scares me.

   I dig my nails through the gurney I’m currently lying down on. “Let me go.” I say lowly and I honestly wish I said it with authority instead of it being weak and helpless.

   “You were honestly a hard patient to deal with.” he confesses and clears his throat, “But not impossible. I dare not to say such ridiculous thing.” he shakes his head and puts a hand on my forehead. “Do you remember?”

   I spit at his face and glare at him, “Let me go, mother er.”

   He wipes the spit from his face with the back of his hand before slapping me accross the face, “Is that how you repay someone who fixed you?”

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prod_GLEE
#1
Chapter 14: there's an author's note chapter looking at the comment and i would die to know what was there TvT
mystery/ thriller is seriously scarce in this community it's sad OTL
Iceprincess610 #2
Chapter 14: wot the heck
yeongie96
#3
Chapter 14: Heol this is so ertly psycho it's sooo damn good!
feelingkimchi
#4
I want to read this (i love psych fics so much) but it says horror in the tags. :(((( is it really scary?
feversend1112 #5
Chapter 15: OMG! I just found your story few days ago and BANG!

I love it!
I love everything in this story!

Gosh, I do in love with psychology and stuffs.

You're the best!

love from Indonesian reader
Fan_of_Karma
#6
Chapter 14: I loved how deep Taehyung's character was! Despite what he did, we kind of can sympathize with him, and I actually feel really sorry for him... I got reminded of Kill Me Heal Me a bit (not sure if you've watched it)... really great story! :)
openminds #7
Love that this was posted on my wall!
damnationSUruck
#8
Chapter 15: Man, I'm always looking for some good psychological reads, and I must say, this was a nice treat I stumbled across.
The A/N here in fact helped me understand and put together a lot of loose ends! So thank you for taking the time to explain all those hidden, otherwise vague details :)
I very much enjoyed the scenarios V was in. Wow, it must have taken a lot of creativity from you, but the hard work was seriously worth it. I could imagine everything with incredibly vividness, and was super surprised to find out they all had some connection with his murdered family members at the end! Not sure if this was intended, but I can finally see the purpose of the siren, which was most likely the form his mother took in his dream-like state. The axe-killing, I can see as his sister. And the hanging form that make an appearance somewhere in the early chapters makes for an interesting father figure! Never would have imagined these things at all until reaching the end, waaah ; v ;

All in all though, really, really good job writing this fan fiction. Stephan King is one heck of an inspiration, haha, so well done! One thing I've been constantly reminded of while reading this as well is the video game 'The Evil Within', which is also a heavy psychological-based storyline and plot. :) But otherwise, this was very innovative.
hellomylova
#9
Chapter 1: Hey, just started reading. It's interesting!