Chapter 1

Forsaken Dreamscape
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   “Please tell me everything from the start.” the man in white smiles as he folds his hands under his chin. “I’m here to listen.” and I swear, a sudden sense of deja vu hits me when he said that.

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   “V,”

   It is time, is what I would like to say after hearing her voice. My salvation has come to take me away from this wretched place. I look at her. Was it hope, sadness or anger in her eyes the moment I looked? Or was it… Nothing?

   I shake the thoughts off my mind. Anyway, I wouldn’t see her again after this, it isn’t a disappointment, really. But, I guess there’s this feeling that it’ll take time for me to adjust not seeing her everyday.

   She motions for me to follow her after pushing the barred doors that divided me from my freedom. I take a step forward from my study table on the far left corner and then another until I am no longer inside my prison walls. Finally, I’m out.

   She turns away from me and leads me out from all these prisoners. I am different from them is what I’ve been told. I wasn’t sick like them. I look down. How pathetic. The nurse slightly shifts to the left, allowing me to enter through the white door. I look back at the prisoners, just to give myself a boost of confidence that I am not going to see them ever again and I’ll never be like them.

   As soon as I enter the corridor, the nurse closes the door behind me and walks to the left wing. I follow her without saying anything. I don’t know where she’s going to take me and even if I ask, she wouldn’t answer me. I only sigh and let her lead me the way. The walls are white and there are several paintings hanging on the wall, each depicting great doctors and founders of this hospital. We turn to the left and enter a room. This one is different from the rest of the rooms we passed by, it gives off a weird aura that I can’t seem to ignore.

   And I hate it.

   The nurse stops by the bedside and smiles at me, “V, sit here.” then she goes out of the room without another word. The bed fascinates me, what are they about to do to me? Are they going to operate on me? Tear my flesh and-

   Before I could scare myself, the door swings open and a man i

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prod_GLEE
#1
Chapter 14: there's an author's note chapter looking at the comment and i would die to know what was there TvT
mystery/ thriller is seriously scarce in this community it's sad OTL
Iceprincess610 #2
Chapter 14: wot the heck
yeongie96
#3
Chapter 14: Heol this is so ertly psycho it's sooo damn good!
feelingkimchi
#4
I want to read this (i love psych fics so much) but it says horror in the tags. :(((( is it really scary?
feversend1112 #5
Chapter 15: OMG! I just found your story few days ago and BANG!

I love it!
I love everything in this story!

Gosh, I do in love with psychology and stuffs.

You're the best!

love from Indonesian reader
Fan_of_Karma
#6
Chapter 14: I loved how deep Taehyung's character was! Despite what he did, we kind of can sympathize with him, and I actually feel really sorry for him... I got reminded of Kill Me Heal Me a bit (not sure if you've watched it)... really great story! :)
openminds #7
Love that this was posted on my wall!
damnationSUruck
#8
Chapter 15: Man, I'm always looking for some good psychological reads, and I must say, this was a nice treat I stumbled across.
The A/N here in fact helped me understand and put together a lot of loose ends! So thank you for taking the time to explain all those hidden, otherwise vague details :)
I very much enjoyed the scenarios V was in. Wow, it must have taken a lot of creativity from you, but the hard work was seriously worth it. I could imagine everything with incredibly vividness, and was super surprised to find out they all had some connection with his murdered family members at the end! Not sure if this was intended, but I can finally see the purpose of the siren, which was most likely the form his mother took in his dream-like state. The axe-killing, I can see as his sister. And the hanging form that make an appearance somewhere in the early chapters makes for an interesting father figure! Never would have imagined these things at all until reaching the end, waaah ; v ;

All in all though, really, really good job writing this fan fiction. Stephan King is one heck of an inspiration, haha, so well done! One thing I've been constantly reminded of while reading this as well is the video game 'The Evil Within', which is also a heavy psychological-based storyline and plot. :) But otherwise, this was very innovative.
hellomylova
#9
Chapter 1: Hey, just started reading. It's interesting!