How could you lose him!.

Tell Me Goodbye
A/n
Haha and another one xDD
I am Happy to introduce another made-up girl.
"Melody Shin" :) she was created by Twinkie
everybody give thanks to her please :)

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(*Star commenter: _Mimi! :) She commented the most so far!) Thank you for all your hard work commenting lol and of course to the others and silent readers...for just reading lol xD

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Tell me goodbye
Chapter Twenty
How could you lose him!.

[GD’S POV]

I sat in my office drinking some of my liquor as Su-Min walked in, she went over to me and sat on my lap, she gave me a kiss on the lips and I returned it. I smiled through the kiss and pulled away to look at her.
“Haha…what was that for” I smiled.

“Because I love you” She smiled.

“Wellll…I love you too” I laughed. So did she.
I heard the door open and then Taeyang and Mimi walk in. it was raining so they were wet, They both walked over to me and Su-Min who was still sitting on my lap. Taeyang looked at me with a expression on his face that spelt disaster.

“What? What’s wrong?” I asked him.

“They caught Daesung and Hyung-Jun a couple of hours ago” He said.

“Okay. Isn’t that good.” I said to him.

“yeah it is but…” Mimi started.

“But what?” I asked.

“They broke out about 30 minutes ago they killed several officers, wounded a few and they also shot Seungri.” Taeyang answered.
I just froze.

“Are…Are you serious?!” I said looking there way, Su-Min got off of my lap she went to the door and locked it.
I stood up.
“Are…Are they on their way here?” I asked. “I don’t know.” Taeyang said looking away.
“But when we went out we were able to get some money from some people” Taeyang added.

“How much” I asked, my mind wasn’t focusing now.

“about $270” Mimi answered.

“So we only need a hundred now?” I said to them.
They both nodded.
“Okay. Well put it with the rest and we can go out tomorrow for the rest, I wanna go see Seungri.” I muttered.
Taeyang nodded and placed the money on the desk.
I looked at Mimi “You stay here with Su-Min okay” I said looking at her, I placed my hand on her face.
“Thank you for all your help so far” I said softly and kissed her on her forehead.

“Your welcome” she softly said to me.
A second later Taeyang and I were out the front door.

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[TAEYANG’S POV]

Me and Jiyong ran over to wherever the police station was at and saw people being pulled out by medical people, some were dead and some were just unconscious. We looked around for Seungri.
“Jiyong go ask the guys over there if they seen Seungri” he nodded and went off. I looked around, then I saw a very familiar girl sitting on the sidewalk she was bleeding from someplace I couldn’t tell she was covered in the blood, a medical person was talking to her.
I went over there and then realized it was melody
“Melody!” I yelled

[*Note: Taeyang has never mentioned her in the story before until now, there was a reason why he didn’t. But this is Taeyang’s already Girlfriend, they kept it low because of the age difference] Melody looked over at me, she looked confused and hurt.
“Bae” she said softly. She stood up but lost her balance and fell back down, I caught her and slowly placed her down.
“Are you okay?! Were in that building during the shooting!” I said worried.
She only nodded.
“Why?!!” I said loudly to her.

“I needed to talk to talk to somebody.” She said she was moving side to side, she was really dizzy and kept falling in and out of consciousness.

“Melody!” I yelled I placed my hands on her shoulders. “can you hear me!” I yelled. Jiyong looked over at me.
“Melody!” the medical guy placed a hand on me.

“let me take care of her now, She will be at the hospital, you can see her later, but right now she needs emergency attention” the guy said.
I looked at him and then at Melody. Two other medical guys came and took her. I looked back at the guy.

“What happened to her.” I asked him.

“She was one of those were shot by the two gunman.” the medical guy answered.

“Will she be okay” I asked.

“yes” answered the guy.

‘Thank God’ I thought.
I bowed to the guy and walked over to Jiyong.

“Who was that?” He asked.

“who was what?” I asked him.

“that girl” he said referring to the one I was trying to wake up.

“Oh her…I’ll tell you later” I said softly. “Did you find out where Seungri is at?” I asked. Jiyong nodded.

“Yeah…they already took him to the hospital.” Jiyong said to me.

“Well lets go then” I said as I headed for the hospital with Jiyong following behind.

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[SEUNGRI’S POV]

I woke up and my vision was blurry. I saw lights above me and I had some breathing mask on. I looked around, I didn’t know where I was. I was shirtless. Was I in a hospital? I couldn’t remember what had happened.
Or what I was doing. All I remember were the words ‘I’m sorry…I didn’t want to do this’. But who…who said that.

I shook my head slightly and then looked to the side to find a woman standing next to me…
“Seungri! You’re awake! Thank goodness!” She said in a happy tone.
I just looked at her.
“Seungri don’t you know who I am?” She asked getting worried.

“Joo Chan…” I said softly and slowly.
She then smiled.

“Yep that’s me” she said tears coming down her face.

“What…happened” I asked slowly.

“Those two that you caught earlier today escape, but they shot and killed a lot of people on their way out and wounded a lot of others. You were one of those wounded” She explained to me.

I just looked at her and nodded slowly.
I looked to the side now and at the door where two men were standing there now.
They walked over and the girl looked at them. “How could you lose them!!!” Taeyang said looking at me with an angry face.

“Lose who” I said in a soft voice. I felt really droopy and my mind was fuzzy.

“Daesung and Hyung-Jun! They escaped and almost killed Melody!” He yelled at me.
Jiyong just stood there looking at him.

“Now I have to worry if they will come to my house and kill Su-Min and I” Jiyong then said to me.
I just looked at them.

“I’m sorry. I don’t know how they got out. I was…on the phone…in another room” I slowly said to them I was getting my memory a little back.

They just looked at me.
“So! You should have kept a better watch on them! If Melody dies…I will kill you my-self and then Daesung and Hyung-Jun!” Taeyang, Joo Chan ran out of the room to get other medical people to help get Jiyong and Taeyang out of the room. The guys grabbed the two and started to pull the out.
Taeyang kept yelling.

I just looked up at the ceiling.
He was right…
How could I lose them both.

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seoulsunshine
#1
Chapter 92: Interesting. ..subscribe and read it after final
BigBangAngel
#2
Chapter 95: This was a a great fic!
Sesshura #3
Chapter 95: please let there be a sequel i loved this story
babybubblevcrack
#4
finally reach the end until the sequel =")

I almost cry DX I think everything will end up tragically, but somehow, It turns. Glad to know there's happy ending X"3

The moment of the war, gaaah ;~~~; soooo saaaaaad gaaaaaah

I really happy to know Daesung and Haewon are back and so do Jiyong, even there's a suprise, that's fine, really out of what I predict.

overall, I really like this story <3
*speechless*
babybubblevcrack
#5
I just read until chap 66 and this story is really well-designed ><
The story flow slowly but sure and gaah I really easy to understand what they feel •u• Simple but detail, yep ^^

I think I'm gonna' know what will happen the next from reading about story that Daesung read, it really look like a spolier X3

I can't comment too much for now because I want to continue it first, this story is almost like a novel, ahahaha XD
hielooo #6
^__________^
lovis89 #7
T_T seunghyun is dead
but su-min and jiyong are back together
daesung & cl ran away thanks to youngbae stopping seungri from firing.
haewon and daesung are back
lovis89 #8
this is so depressing. TOP is dying.
daesung is badly wounded + coughing blood
sun mi crying
hae won crying
CL is hurt
Taeyang and seungri are yelling
Bom ...
lovis89 #9
IS SEUNGHYUN GONNA DIE???
OMG SU MIN PLEASE!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA REUNITE SU MIN & JIYONG!!!!!
lovis89 #10
PLEASE LET JIYONG FOUND SU MIN!!!!