One Chance?..

The Angel In You

Kim Daeun's POV

What Jae saw wasn't the truth.. That guy was my ex.. How can he do that to me.. Me and Jackson aren't dating.. How could he.. I.. 

Me: Jae

Jaejoong <3 : What?

Me: Jackson is my ex.. Not my Beyonce..

Jaejoong <3 : How do i know that it's not another lie?

Me: Ask everyone i know... Jackson isn't my Beyonce he's my Ex.. 

jaejoong <3 : . . . . 

Me; Jae meet me tommorow near the river banks where we met before..

Jaejoong <3 : Okay?

- I went offline - 

I needed to tell him the truth.. Jackson is my Ex.. 

***

I arrived near the river baks and Jae was there sitting looking sad.. 

"Jae.. Bae.. Listen.. Jackson is not my Beyonce.. I never cheated on you.. I love you.. Thats the truth.." I explained

". . ." Jaejoong stood silently..

"Jae please.. Just one more... One more chance.." I said and held his hand...

"But you promise you will never hurt me ever again okay?" Jae said with his eyes filled with hope

"I promise.." We stared at each other deeply..

We stared for 5 minuets.. We got closer.. We put our hand on each other's faces.. Then.. We un conciounsly kissed.. I felt Jaejoong's soft hand brush behind my neck..

"I love you" I told Jae

"I.. Love you to Dae" He said and smiled..

[DIFFRENT LAYOUT TELL ME IF YOU LIKE THIS ONE BETTER OR THE OLD ONE.. (The dialogues are easier to spot) AND TELL ME IF IT'S TO SHORT..]

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faridpraderago #1
Chapter 8: thanks dear...you've made this one for me *hug*
faridpraderago #2
Chapter 7: can you please make it longer by adding some description or plot,how their life going on..or another one?
I felt this story is kinda lack of despcription,only stuck on jae and dae relationship...
Well,that's only my opinion after all,sorry dear\^.^/
faridpraderago #3
Chapter 6: i didn't expect this -_-
faridpraderago #4
Chapter 5: oh my god -_-
why didn't she listen to him?? I feel sad for jae,
oh,authornim..this is kinda short,would you make it a bit longer? XD
christian_DO
#5
Chapter 4: OOOh.so sad.I feel Jaejoong hurt.Update tomorrow or whenever you have time.
vagxwmf #6
UPDATEEEE plssss