My Identity

The Angel In You

As usual.. Me and Dae were walking together.. When.. For some reason.. I felt something brush behind my leg.. and my neck.. “You can’t love” It whispered.. “Who are you?!” I exclaimed.. “Uh? Jae you feeling okay?” Daeun asked.. “Oh what? Yeah yea I’m fine..”.. “I’ve been doing some school work about Devils and Angels around the world.. I found the Devil blood line…” Daeun stopped and stared deeply into my eyes.. “Your name was there.. Jaejoong.. You’re a devil” She said.. She walked backwards.. “Daeun.. I know I am but-“ , “I cannot fall for such a creation”.. Daeun said and walked away.. “But.. Dae.. I.. I’m different..” I said..

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I arrived.. “I thought you said that my feeling was strong.. My feeling for her was strong enough to make her love me!!” I exclaimed.. “No I did not say that.. I cannot control her feeling Jae.. Sorry..” The all mighty said and left.. “WHY? WHY HAVE YOU GOT TO MAKE MY DESTINY THIS I NEVER WANTED TO BE A DEVIL NO ONE WANTS TO” I screamed at the all mighty.. “I shall give you one more chance.. I’ll try my best.. But.. I may create her I can take her soul but that doesn’t mean I can control her.. She has her own mind” The all mighty said and left.. “Thank you” I replied and left..

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faridpraderago #1
Chapter 8: thanks dear...you've made this one for me *hug*
faridpraderago #2
Chapter 7: can you please make it longer by adding some description or plot,how their life going on..or another one?
I felt this story is kinda lack of despcription,only stuck on jae and dae relationship...
Well,that's only my opinion after all,sorry dear\^.^/
faridpraderago #3
Chapter 6: i didn't expect this -_-
faridpraderago #4
Chapter 5: oh my god -_-
why didn't she listen to him?? I feel sad for jae,
oh,authornim..this is kinda short,would you make it a bit longer? XD
christian_DO
#5
Chapter 4: OOOh.so sad.I feel Jaejoong hurt.Update tomorrow or whenever you have time.
vagxwmf #6
UPDATEEEE plssss