chapter 11

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Niel was surprised when a day he woke up to find byunghun looking down at him. He jumped and sat up, almost grabbing his stick he prepared under his bed in order to protect himself.

“idiot!! Don’t startle me like that!!”  niel yelled, wondering how byunghun even been able to get into his room without him noticing. Niel usually have senses when someone tried to get into his room, so the fact that byunghun was able get through it without him knowing was beyond him.

Byunghun leaned back and played with his fingers. “sorry, but I think I need someone to talk to”

Niel sighed and scooted back to lean against the bedhead behind him. “about what?”

Byunghun bite the bottom of his lip before he continue. “about the dream”

Niel sighed in relief. “finally u talk”

“I had this dream..about a man, from my origin place”

Niel straightened up. “so u know where did u came from? what happened in your dream? Who is that guy?”

Byunghun shook his head. “I don’t know. I have no idea where it could be. I saw only snow surrounding me. it was cold, so cold…and I saw him standing in front of me”

“do u know him?” niel asked, concerned can be heard from his voice.

“I don’t..either. he told me I am working for him and he was my master. Not just that, he said we are lovers and I gave him my soul. I do anything for him and..and..” byunghun started to cry “I saw blood…all around me…they were my family. He said I’m the one who killed them…and I saw….m-mother, father and u...all of u were killed in front of me” this time byunghun couldn’t control his emotion as he cried so hard like there was no tomorrow for him.

Looking at the pitiful boy, niel felt the sense of responsibility to sooth the boy. With gentle arms, he pulled the boy into his embrace. “don’t cry

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byungtokki #1
Chapter 14: o_o does that mean shori already knows of byunghun's existence and identity before he was reborn? ahich means seunghyun also knows who byunghun is before he adopted the child am I right?
WHY THAT CLIFFHANGER WHY
omg I am so excited for the spar.
chunjixbyungie
#2
Chapter 14: Gasps * oh my
I feel so sorry for Chanhee ಥ_ಥ
No one deserves such heartache .
I mean .. If the matter was just memory loss , restoring it would fix everything .. But to hear that Byunghun would never love him again in that way no matter what .. That has got to hurt too bad ..

That aside , I LOVE the ending paragraph ! " Show me that you are my best opponent " and " this was no spar this was niel's fight to get Byubghun back " O(≧∇≦)O
chunjixbyungie
#3
Chapter 13: @.@ ... jeez im confused .. so chanhee .. what's his position ? like .. he ain't related to Niel or seunghyun ?
But waiit T.T if Byunghun's future lover is niel then what about chanhee ?
But God it must have felt too bad to see Jiyong kissing and maniplating Byunghun :(
byungtokki #4
Chapter 12: The fight scene was really well written I could visualize the whole fight.
am excited for your fresh new idea!!! can't wait to see how the story unfolds.
does this mean Dr Ahn already knew Byunghun from waaay back then? Before the boy was reborn?
chunjixbyungie
#5
Chapter 12: Blinks ............. EH ????? SO CHANHEE AND NIEL ARE SIBLINGS ??? or wait what ..is jiyong chanhee's father ??

Man .. For a second i thought it was Byunghun who protected chanhee * sighs in relief *

Thank you so much for updating !
I have to say the whole chapter ( fight scenes ) were so vivid and well written.
Thumbs up *
evangelia-kpop13 #6
Chapter 11: Don't you DARE quit writing! I love your story!
P_frog10 #7
Chapter 11: no no no don't stop writing pleaseeeee this is so good T^T
Fyrindotaero #8
Chapter 11: Update more><.... I want chunjoe ㅠㅠ
Angel_Ahn
#9
Chapter 11: Go NielJoe !! ^^