Chapter 18: SAVE YOURSELVES EXO!!!!!! AND WOW, THIS IS ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE PLUS ANGST PLUS GORE PLUS ROMANCE PLUS COMEDY PLUS SCI FI WOW. WOW!!!!!!!!!!! ALL MY FAVOURITE GENRES IN ONE FANFIC!!!!! MY LIFE IS PERFECT!!!!! OH AND ACTION TOO!!!!
Chapter 3: And on dialogue , it best is you can mentioned who is talking, said by who or describe clearly on what the character look like such as for luhan, every reader will know if you mentioned said by the sparkly deer eyes guys. The plot is interesting, its just that the problem on arrangement of it and doesn't exactly nid a preview.
Chapter 5: I think it is quite confusing. I tink you nid to arrange your scene properly and don't just simply write out a random scene. if you want random scene then maybe you can describe the character,and the surrounding of the character currently in clearly.
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