If I Just Lay Here (would you lie with me and just forget the world?)

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As M and K seek to exterminate each other in a game of deadly politics, forbidden love struggles to survive. And in the darkness something sinister lurks, intent on destroying all life.

Or rather, a novel length story in which Kai and Luhan selfishly fall in love, D.O. and Xiumin are their long suffering friends, Kris and Suho are rivals, Chanyeol and Baekhyun are three second away from running off to elope, Lay and Sehun are simply along for the ride, and Chen and Tao may very well end up killing each other. Oh, and they’re supposed to save the world. With their teamwork. In theory, at least.

 

 

 


 

“Guys!” Baekhyun shouted. “Focus. And get ready.”

D.O. had to jump back as Chanyeol burst into flames, his phoenix manifesting before their eyes and shooting up into the air. “Oh, I’m more than ready.”

The best thing about the lot of them, maybe more than any other group of people D.O. had ever worked with, was that they were a single, cohesive unit when they fought. They moved in perfect synch, sensing the actions of each other, and to a scary degree, they were flawless.

“I’m the bait!” Chanyeol shouted, and then he was raging even hotter than ever before, singeing some of the baby hairs along D.O.’s arm.

“Got it!” D.O. ralleyed back, stamping his foot to the ground as hard as he could. He could feel it respond immediately to him, rolling them all into new positions. Fiercely concentrating, D.O. braced a hand down on the ground for better control, grinning as Baekhyun was flung up an off his feet with a surprised shout.

But Kai was there a second later, teleporting to his side, hooking an arm around Baekhyun’s waist and pulling him free from the shadow that had reared up into a somewhat solid form taller than the both of them.

“Chanyeol!” D.O. shouted, catching sight of movement from the fissure from the corner of his eye. “To your left!”

In a matter of seconds they were surrounded by tall, semisolid forms of blackness.

“Don’t let them touch you!” Kai said, dropping Baekhyun off near Chanyeol’s side.

“Wasn’t planning on it!” D.O. replied.

Chanyeol, as far as D.O. could tell, was absolutely magnificent. He was in his element, flinging fire and brimstone at their attackers. His phoenix soared around, sweeping down in low arcs to cut through the shadow forms with a screech.

And the moment that Chanyeol and Baekhyun begun working together, boosting each other, using their abilities in tandem, the destruction was twice as effective. D.O. have never quite seen anything like it.

“Head’s up!” Kai said, pulling D.O. roughly to the side and teleporting them over fifty feet away. Where he’d been standing D.O. could see a shadow folding in on the spot. “Pay attention!”

“I’m fine,” D.O. shot back, a little embarrassed at losing his focus for a second. He reached down for his ability once more, bringing up a wall of dirt and ground to block the next shadow that attacked them.

Foreword

Before anyone who's intending to read this story goes any further, and with my hope that someone is actually looking at the foreword,  I want to let casual readers know that this may not be the story for them. This story took around three months to write, is filled with my blood, sweat and tears, and is much longer than an average novel. While chapters will go up at a steady pace as not to overwhelm anyone, the content is dense, and I wrote this will a focus on characters over plot. That's not to say that this doesn't have a plot, but the characters are the central focus. Who they are, how they react to each other, and so on and so forth. Romance is just as important as friendship, if not more. If you aren't prepared to invest a lot into these characters, you may want to find something shorter and less complex to read.

 

Now that all that is out of the way, a little backstory. I ended up seeing, while I was brand new to kpop in January and pretty much convinced that Shinee was the only group that was worth my time, Exo's MAMA video on a whim. I think I clicked on it on accident. But the moment I saw it, I knew I had to write something about it. I know there are other MAMA centric stories out there, but the ones I've come across have read as more focused on the plot, and as a character development kind of author, they never hit the sweet spot for me. So since I couldn't find what I wanted, I decided to write it myself. Problem solved.

 

Anyway, I truly was consumed by this story for several months while writing it, so if I haven't scared everyone off, please read it and enjoy!

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agsk98 #1
Excellent fanfic! Always nice to re-read... thanks for sharing!
blahblahpok #2
Chapter 26: This is my second time reading this monster of a story as you so aptly put it, and I hope it shows you how much I enjoyed it :)
It completely boggles my mind how people are able to come up with such intricate storylines, weave them together into a coherent piece, all while making us feel for the characters and see things from their perspective.
Thank you for writing and finishing this story, sharing it with us, and I'll see you again when I come back for a third read! :p
Whisper27 #3
Chapter 26: I'm so glad I found this story! I absolutely loved how much detail went into fleshing out all of the characters. The setting and plotlines were so captivating as well. Thank you so much for writing such an amazing fic!
XiaoShixun #4
Chapter 26: Finally they are together
XiaoShixun #5
Chapter 22: Oh no!!!
XiaoShixun #6
Chapter 14: Oh Sehun.poor you
XiaoShixun #7
Chapter 13: Hahaha brat sehun always for luhan
XiaoShixun #8
Chapter 10: Sehun is so young. but poor Luhan and Kai.
XiaoShixun #9
Chapter 8: go stick to luhan like a glue sehun! but i bet kai wont be happy
XiaoShixun #10
Chapter 7: Kai go and save your love! or it might be the other way around seeing how strong Luhan is