EXO: Red Skys and Royal Cards
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Red Skys and Royal Cards ★
Author: Wynter
Genre: fantasy, supernatural
Characters: OC, EXO
Status: Ongoing
Chapters: 114+
Description:
What happens when you are thrown into a world and a war you never knew existed?
The world isn't the same as it once was. The blue sky I used to look up at with the fluffy white clouds floating past has vanished and was replaced with a sky so red, it looks like a sea of blood floating above our heads.
The people aren't the same either. Our way of life has changed so much, but only know that if you are one of the few who knows why it has changed. I used to be blissfully unaware of how much things have changed; my parents still don't even know the extent of the changes like most of the population.
If you are curious as to how I was exposed to all this, I would have to tell you it's a long story. So long that the people I tried to tell it to in the past would just brush me off and leave.
But if you want to know what really happened to the world and what so many are so oblivious to, I ask that you hear my whole story through and not just brush me off as some crazy person.
My story will shatter your views of the world and I apologize in advance but everyone should know of the war that is happening right in front of them even if they can't see it.
I will tell you how I was shoved into this war without even knowing I was part of it.
A world of secrets and magic. A world of Cards.
Lovi's opinion:
❝ Oh I have so much to tell about this story but I'll refrain myself because I'm afraid it will come out as a neative opinion and I'm definitely not aiming for that.
Pros first:
- Interesting plot. It's not the first time I encounter a fanfic related to magical cards but I must say I like how this one is developed
- The main lead is somwhat like the average girl out there but there are still times when the author attempts to make her flaws look like strengths and that's a bit of turn off for me.
- It's looooooong. I love long fics c:
Cons (please don't hate me for this):
- First of all, typos. There are a lot of them. While some can be ignored others may be a little annoying.
- Too many POVs. This is more a personal preference though. I'm not a fan of frequent POVs changes and I feel like the abondance of POVs slows down the pace of the story.
- Another aspect related to the POVs, I wished that using different prospectives showcased more every character's individuality instead I've noticed that if the authour didn't specify who's narrating at the beginning of the chapter (other than the main lead) I had no idea whose thoughts I'm reading.❞
Plot originality: 4/5
Grammar / writing errors: 2.5/5
Pace: irregular; sometimes fast and other times slow
Character development: fast paced
Update status: regular, frequent
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