Her Dark Light

Author: Velvet_Candy and Kpop_lover4
Genre: drama, romance, supernatural, vampires
Characters: OC, EXO
Status: Ongoing
Chapters: 11

He circled me, looking deep into my eyes with nothing but thirst to kill.

" I'll break you."

As much of a threat that was, I didn't flinch the slightest or show him any signs of fear. I didn't cower.

No, I was much stronger than that.

" ...Then break me." I whispered daringly through tight teeth, glaring back up at him. 

For a second, he froze and looked at me, taken aback at my words. Then he burst out into bitter laughter.

" You try too hard to put up a show, my dear." He sneered, tracing the tip of the knife dangerously close to my neck. " Don't act brave when deep inside you're shaking in fear. Doing so will just might save your little life."

I disgustedly averted my gaze and scoffed. My eyes trailed down to my collarbone.

" I'm not." I answered solidly, eyeing the mark-his mark, that still heavily lingered against the spot. It was my only source of hope.

" Don't lie to yourelf," He growled, growing angry at my stubborness to give in.

" I'm not." I repeated calmly.

The ghost of a smile tugged at my lips and I leaned back into the chair, closing my eyes.

" Because he'll come for me...he's my dark light."

Lovi's Opinion:

❝Why is it so hard to find a Yeol fic? I've been through hundreds of pages and only found a handful of item ;_;
This is one of those lonely souls, but hey, it is a pretty exciting soul I must say.
The writing style is quite mysterious, the plot has a few cliché concepts but their development is interestingly carried.
Technically speaking, the story leans slightly  on being dialogue centered than on descriptions while grammatically I haven't found any spelling error.
I'm really looking forward to the following updates c: ..And Yeol is mysteriously handsome as ever.. *gets slapped*❞

Plot originality: 4/5
Grammar / writing errors: 4.5/5
Pace: steady, fas
Character development: balanced
Update status: meium slow

✉ P.s: I know I have an already big to do list yet I'm here, looking for something else ._. Sorry~ Dx If I have to choose between 'A' and 'B' I alwas end up with 'C' >3<