The Talk

The Black Fear
Chapter 21
The talk
 
"Leave her alone Hakyeon. I got this. "
These words produced an echo in my body, leaving me stunned.
He was there too.
 
N, even in frustration,  withdrew his knife, suddenly abandoning the taking.
I sighed for the second time, seeing his gaze from possession of my challenge.
He would not stop looking at me for even a second.
He continued to do so, although he had risen to his feet.
But do not let myself be overcome,
I showed me strong and determined.
 My eyes radiated power and energy.
In fact, our behavior could translate as a battle.
No one would have commanded me.
 
After a few moments, he got tired, giving me the win,
turned his gaze to the boy who stood beside him,
approached with arrogance.
"now you want to bother me too, huh?" N said
"Do not try to turn you against me.
You know what I can get. "
The boy answered with a long gray coat.
 
Without saying a word, N went away,
moving toward the side of the table where the fruit was faulty.
I saw him grab an apple with deep red color.
Then, he leaned against the wall, starting to bite it aggressively,
as was his habit.
The other boy looked scornful, before taking off his coat.
It seemed to be annoyed by N’s behavior.
 
"Oh, I'm sorry I have not presented myself.
My name is Max Changmin. "
He opened the speech, looking down.
"And he's Hakyeon."
"The one who .." - "yeah,he's him," he interrupted me.
"Why did you save me?" I asked curiously.
"I have not done anything." Retorted, taking a hand of latex gloves.
"You're lying."
"Why should I?" He looked at me for a second, raising his right eyebrow.
"I want you to explain the reason. I'm not going to stay here for much longer.
This room is really disgusting, "I commented annoyed.
At that moment, i felt the attention of Hakyeon on me.
"Enjoy these last moments of life, instead of wasting breath at all"
N said, finishing the last bites.
"I do not care, you bastards"
"Even rude," commented Max, letting out a small laugh.
"So I should die, right?"
To that question, all of a sudden he sat his hands at the table.
"All right. I'm really tired now. "-" You tired? Fine. " I replied soon after he had finished his sentence.
"Okay? What do you want? "He asked, looking down at me.
Until that time he never had ever done it.
"I want answers. I want to understand what's going on. "
"Even if I tell you, the situation would not change."
"Well, at least try." Continued.
"We are not human like you.
We are what we see. We do what we see.
Fears. "
"Wait. Fears. Do you mean that there are more than one? "
"That's right. Even those who have you met previously were. "
He answered as if it were obvious.
"Why did you do it?"
"The name says it all. Fear. "
"OK. Do you rephrase the question that I have made previously.
Why a Fear, should save me? "
"I do not have saved you. You were the one who have defeated that fear.
Who knows, maybe the next one it’s the right one. "He finished quickly.
Soon after, he motioned for the boy to get out.
Hakyeon threw the remains of the apple in the same plate from which he had taken it,
then rose slightly his shirt, revealing a part of his back.
He was so perfect and inviting that for a moment i could not look away.
Immediately, stuck his dagger in his pants, covering it lightly with his shirt.
He began to walk towards the door, staring at me for a few moments.
After a while, he came out, leaving us alone.
 
"Okay. Now the conversation is over. Thank you, but I have more important things to do. "
He said, watching carefully the instruments of torture in the table.
"What?" I asked a little scared.
I saw him get closer and closer, with two knives by hand in different sizes and some other small object.
He crouched in front of me, resting his elbows on his knees.
he sighed a little, showing me a look of pity and understanding towards me,
"What I came here for.
Killing. "
 
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#1
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