Remnants of You

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My mind has already erased you, Suzy. My heart scrubbed you away countless times, but I could never get rid of the essence of you. The harder I scrubbed, the deeper you embedded yourself in me. The more I tried to forget you, the more vividly the memory of you envelops me.

I've emptied you out a million times already.

But you keep coming back.

Foreword

Entered in this contest: Shoes of a Unicorn Writing Contest (Edit: Holy crap guys, I won first place!)

I used the prompt, "The spot where you've left is full of sadness,"  but the story was also inspired by the song, Memory, by Younha and Tablo. I cannot even begin to tell you how much I love that song.

If you want, check it out here.

As always, please leave a comment. I treasure each and every one of them.

Edit: As advised by daydreamerr, I've decided to make this a drabble collection instead. Enjoy the angst! I don't exactly know where I'll be going with this, but I suppose it'll be like a disconnected story you readers will have to piece together yourselves. Updates will be done sporadically and I will mark this complete again once I run out of ideas.

Author's Thoughts
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[Remnants of You] As advised by daydreamerr, I've decided to make this a drabble collection instead. Enjoy the angst!
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Dropebaek #1
Chapter 3: It is short but has a deep meaning and emotions. I love how you pick the words to describe how myungsoo feels <3 It is really beautiful. The number is how long suzy has gone, right? I wonder why she's leave myungsoo.
This story is the winner of the contest, right? Congratulation! This story is really deserved to be the first place! Sorry for my awkward grammar :D
byeollie #2
Chapter 3: i love your imageries and metaphors. at times it simple nonetheless heavy and rich in tones and emotions. update more. :)
suzyloover #3
Chapter 1: beautiful.
daydreamerr #4
Chapter 1: Mehhhh that was just flawless! A short letter type one shot that made my stomach churn ...ahh bitter sweet love...I hope you would create some sort of sequel for this ...like suzy didn't die or their past maybe? xD
kumi-ho #5
Chapter 1: oh God... I love it.
kimyunseo #6
Chapter 1: is suzy died? the contents of the letter is very touching. Sweet and beautifuly. I love it!!! Good Job!
xdreammerx #7
Chapter 1: Your writing, the way you describe things, is really beautiful (': This drabble may be short but it's enough to make me feel things inside - a bittersweet feeling ;_;
The song you recommended is indeed nice. I listened to it right before reading this and maybe that's what made it even more heartbreaking.
PastaChaeng #8
Chapter 1: Where did suzy go?
But this is a nice story. Sweet but sad :")
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