Adamant; End Note

Beautiful Flower Withers Too
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The beads of summer scent that we inhaled on that clear afternoon of

late March are not enough to make you fall in love, but you did, just not to me. 

 

 

It's been almost more than a month for me, stalling this story in the deepest pit of my laptop.I have nothing to reason out any excuses but the least thing I could do is to ask for your kindness and understanding for the long wait, this fact somehow scares me if what i had presented fell short of everyone's expectation and not worth of the time you guys spent for waiting (and reading).

this story is kinda draggy yet still underdeveloped, and for me i could never quench my own thirst to write like a good writer, it was a quite ambitious project when i started this (esp with the thought giving this to a friend that I cherish a lot, as my very first festive gift to her), so i can't help but to feel that this story is lacking somewhere. anyway, my journey with 'perfect' nam woohyun and flawed oc will not end here as long as somone read their story.

last but not least, thank you for spending your precious time, reading, commenting and loving (me :3) till

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herzlichen gluckwunsch zum Geburtstag, ich habe dich lieb, /german's hard, there supposed to be two dots on the u ㅠ.ㅠ/

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Pistachio
#1
Chapter 9: That's why I find people scary at times because they hide so many things.
The characters here are all so unique and distinct. You wrote their imperfections really well I'm crying. The characterisations are just asdwhsnhcian. I can't find any word to explain myself but you probably get my gist hahahaha. This whole story is like you're reading my mind and putting my inner thoughts into words.
I haven't read The Great Gatsby before but I've seen references to it in stories so maybe I'll read it.
And have I said how beautiful the title is. /cries
Pistachio
#2
Chapter 4: I'm commenting because Woohyun here is so broken
But very real.
And I totally get where both of them are coming from.
This story is what I need right now.
tofudimsum #3
asjkhdjkkahflkhflkdhjdlf i am so happy for you, too <3333333
ArabianQueen
#4
By the way, that's a delicious looking picture of Woohyun...=P
ArabianQueen
#5
I just read the forward so far and I thought it was beautiful.
tofudimsum #6
Chapter 9: Ong absjbdkansosjdjshbdjsbdkdbibfgtodnxkbdkdbdjbsjs hfhsknsks i just shiabiabkxbslxnaks

Love you. And I'm proud of you. And I'm happy and I had a good day and nothing's gonna stop my happiness. I love you thanks. <3333
tofudimsum #7
Chapter 8: Just no man. Just no. I swear you should write a full story one day. Without angst or with angst. Doesn't matter. And the Gatsby part omg. My heart cracks open reading that part. I just ahdkanlsja. I mean. In a way, it's not nice to compare people with either Gatsby or Daisy because they both are pitiful but gosh, still beautiful.
And the last omg. I just abxibaksnalsoaks

I have no words anymore. Seriously, I just wanna hug you and say that everything's alright. Wanna hug you and thank you for this beautiful story. SiandokalajalajHsuhsks
tofudimsum #8
Chapter 7: The comparison with home is great. Even when talking to you, I've realized you have a thing for metaphors and they are good. Some are overused (but I'm like that too ) and some are new and awesome. And I just absksnka. WIth the news of WooKey and this now and argjjld. Woohyun ;;
And I like the last part a lot. It was really good omg. And I don't know but I wanna love Woohyun now. He needs my love. ;;
tofudimsum #9
Chapter 6: OKAY I FREAKING ALMOST CRIED OKAY. HAD TEARS ALL OVER MY EYES AND IM IN THE FRICKEN TRAIN YOU A-HOLE!

I don't know what's wrong with me? In some ways, the plot isn't what I usually like, you know. The Girl-likes-best-friend-He-rejects-her-She-meets-another-guy-who-seems-perfect-besides-the-fact-that-he-is-broken. I don't necessarily prefer them. Not at all. But I STILL HAD FRECKIJG TEARS IN MY EYES AHDJOAJSNAL
I don't know why actually. It was sad. How Woohyun hurts himself. But what cracked my heart open was when she said, "You're worth more than that." Because how many people don't hear that? How many? I think in my life I've only heard it twice or something but that only because I told them about my failures and sadness. We should hear this more often from people. Just randomly. We are all so much worth. We are human beings. We are precious. Everyone of us.
(I should start a campagne or something)
So wow, you made me cry. Are you happy now? Because I'm not!!!

(Still love ya <3)