Sweets and Everything Nice

Description

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The cake looked sad and pitiful; it had to look like me.

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birthday; /ˈbəːθdeɪ/

Syllabification: (birth·day)

noun

the anniversary of the day on which a person was born,

typically treated as an occasion for celebration and the giving of gifts

alternative meaning;

the day of a girl learns how to fall in love

but never get the chance to celebrate it

Foreword

to those whose birthday are not rejoiced

to those who yearn for a simple wish

to those who crave for a reminder of being alive every year

to those who struggle with the same worry

you're not yet forgotten

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a/n

i've been too used of receiving loves and gifts from this miracle, /that came into my life in a form of a human when i know she's an angel in disguise/ to my miracle, my favourite person who always pick me up when i fell, to my darling who's like a sister i never had, patiently mend my wounds when i scrapped my skin, to this lovely person who admires Hoaegi, Gyujiji and Namgrease more than a tub of ice cream, a queen that cares for Infinite more than her own throne but never neglect me, a small girl whom inspires me in comfort than letting me indulge in fear of having no dream, my food, my fried chickens and my favourite yogurt drink, i don't know if she will ever read this, but i love you dubu. to the moon and back. this one-shot is also dedicated to you ♥

ps: euw, im being mushy again.

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Cassiopeia501 #1 Dec 23, 2013 16:31:23

Chapter 2: wow definitely not the ending i expected

tofudimsum #2 Dec 18, 2013 16:03:25

One huge part hoped for Howon to appear at the end LOL, don't ask me why, but I think the small, maybe predictable (well, not for me. I predited the other type of twist. The My-best-friend-surprisingly-loves-me-too type) works that way. It displays the overall loneliness and how quick one's happiness could vanish like this. It's one of the things I learned. Once you are so happy, it seems like God's just playing with you, toying you so you won't predict the downfall. And then it happens. Like a crash. Or a thunder. Or the unpredictable rain. And when you're so happy and used to something, you'll get greedy, it's true.

Man, I have this hate/love relationship with angsty stories. I hate writing them, sometimes. But sometimes, I feel like only angsty stories can teach people on life. Man, I have no idea.

Anyways, thanks baby, my love, beautiful (lol)
Haha. I bet you read this while singing Namu's song in your head. If not, I'll allow you to slap me haha

I'll be looking forward to your other one-shots. (maybe with one of my biases lol)
I'm eager to read them all. (Catch'em all!)

<33333

/end of rant

tofudimsum #3 Dec 18, 2013 15:56:35

I hate you so so so much. Okay, here's my take on this one shot:
I could strangle you for making me tear up like an emotional idiot while I was sitting in the train (you must know, I've read it this morning already, but wanted to comment when I was more clear in my mind). How embarrassing, sitting there while reading your a/n on my phone, my tears welling up in my eyes. I always thought you were exaggerating whenever you said you cried because I dedicated a story for you. Now I actually understand you. I almost cried too. (I was on the brink of crying, man. One shut of my eyes and the tears would have fallen!)
Really, there are no words to describe my feelings. I am so sad because you had to feel this loneliness that you have described in this one shot. I am truly sad you had to endure all this. I am so sorry for not having been there for you. I am so sorry for not living near you. Or else, I'd have given you a really tight hug.
God, what should I say? Of course, I'm so happy because of your a/n, but then the greatest sadness overtakes me when I think of all the hardships you had to overcome by yourself. That's why I'm even happier that you have your family right now.
You say I'm an angel, but I'm not. It's a beautiful comparison, but to me, it's more like we are two lost souls who have found one another, two awake people in a world full of sleeping ones (okay, I have to note this sentence down. Could used it in my later one shots LOL! And look, commenting here inspires me to write stuff. So it's like you inspire me haha)
Gosh, I still have no idea what to say. I'm just so damn happy and I think I've screenshot the a/n early this morning. As a reminder.
So rewrite my earlier wall post to you. It's more like you trippled today's happiness with this one-shot.

To say something to the story itself (so I'm not only talking about us LOL):
I like the narrator's voice. I don't know why but I just like it. Of course, I hated how it turned out in the end,

purplevixen #4 Dec 17, 2013 08:55:23

Chapter 1: thumbs up, author-nim

_Like_A_Star_ #5 Dec 16, 2013 14:25:16

Chapter 1: Nice story really. Good job authornim :)