Walking Away

Description

That evening was raining heavily. You are at school, because of helping the teachers for 'Farewell Celebration' for a retire teacher.

It was 5.15pm.

And now, you want to go home, but.....

Foreword

So, yeah. I've just started writing a story. Feel free to comment! I also want to know what people think about my story. With the comments, hopely I can improve my writing in the next fanfic. (Sorry for my not-so-good English)

Enjoy reading!

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meryljill #1 Jun 12, 2014 21:12:12

Chapter 9: update soon!!!

MerAngel88 #2 Apr 9, 2014 05:31:16

Update soon!

meryljill #3 Mar 26, 2014 04:00:12

Chapter 7: update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

meryljill #4 Mar 26, 2014 03:55:07

Chapter 5: is it Suho???

Exoismypeterpan #5 Mar 25, 2014 08:00:16

I can see you improve from the first chapter till 7chap....make it something that surprise reader so ....yup I love reading your story! Work harder!:)

PianoExoWolfGang #6 Dec 29, 2013 21:40:57

Chapter 5: This time is better. Good job, dorky88! :) Umm…Please update? I really love it! Daebak! :)

PianoExoWolfGang #7 Dec 24, 2013 00:05:23

Chapter 4: Hey, dorky88! Hope you update soon! :) Your story is…lacking of something. Put much effort okay? If God wills it, you can be a good writer. Don't make your story too boring, but make it a supertastic story that can wow everyone. So, that's all. :) Sincerely, PianoExoWolfGang. P. S: Reply my comment.