Walking Away

Walking Away

"urgghhh....... Where's the umbrella?'' *checking it in your bag*

A guy WITH AN UMBRELLA walk towards you and asked, "Do you need any help?"

Oh my god! His eyes...... but wait. You never saw him before. Oh yes. The new student. Same age with you but he's in the upper class.

"No, thanks. I don't need any help.'' * give the brightest smile you can give at the moment*

"I'm sure you need an umbrella now. Urmm... I have one. You can share it with me. Just nice for the two of us. You live in the lightgreen coloured terrace house at the roadside, aren't you?"

Hmm.... that's true. Your house was near to the school. Just pass the three old builings in front it and that's it!

"Oh, okay. Thank you so much."

"Nevermind. Err... Shall we?" *walking side by side, under his umbrella, heading to your home*

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dorky88
Aaaaa..... sorry for my not interesting story.

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meryljill
#1
Chapter 9: update soon!!!
MerAngel88 #2
Update soon!
meryljill
#3
Chapter 7: update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
meryljill
#4
Chapter 5: is it Suho???
Exoismypeterpan #5
I can see you improve from the first chapter till 7chap....make it something that surprise reader so ....yup I love reading your story! Work harder!:)
PianoExoWolfGang #6
Chapter 5: This time is better. Good job, dorky88! :) Umm…Please update? I really love it! Daebak! :)
PianoExoWolfGang #7
Chapter 4: Hey, dorky88! Hope you update soon! :) Your story is…lacking of something. Put much effort okay? If God wills it, you can be a good writer. Don't make your story too boring, but make it a supertastic story that can wow everyone. So, that's all. :) Sincerely, PianoExoWolfGang. P. S: Reply my comment.