So many questions But never an answer

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You cried every night and died inside that was your life

You came from school and went into your room you sat on your bed and looked out the window suddenly you saw the scissors on the edge of your bed

 

and you got an idea and that was to cut yourself would you dare?

 

you stretched yourself and grabbed the scissor you did your sleeve up and put the scissor on your wrist and you wanted to cut yourself but you did not know if you could do that or if you wanted to do that 

You sat there on that position ...

Foreword

Oh Sehun

a bit selfish but still with a good heart he likes Kim Mae but doesn't know for sure ...

 

Kim Mae ( You )

a smart and kind girl but sometimes she does do stupid things like doing herself pain for sehun because she loves him :/

This is a sad and romantic story about Mae and Sehun 

Warning! Don't read if you can't handle any pain or sadness !!!

i hope you like it :)

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I make all the posters! + the background

(from chapter 6 is everything written better)

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uglytruths #1
Chapter 7: This is really good, but you should punctuate your dialogue with a comma inside the closing quotation marks like:
"Hello," he said.
Also, begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes; otherwise, it can be kind of confusing ^^
luhanluhan123 #2
Chapter 6: This is so good!!!! Update soon authornim~
---SEHUNYEHET--- #3
Chapter 3: KEEP IT COOL =^..^=
SehunEmmaOh94 #4
Chapter 5: Can u post two today
yujingugue #5
Chapter 5: Why?Your story is good!!!Pls don't.
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yujingugue #6
Chapter 4: Update Soon!!!
yujingugue #7
Chapter 3: Update Soon!!!
caterinechizen #8
Hi, please update the first cap please, I'll give you some tips for better, because I really like your stories:
a chapter should consist of at least 1000 words, u can count it using Microsotf Word or any other program that counts words. To write stories, you should use the narrative, the story is not only to dialogues, but about the colors, smells, people, objects, weather, you have to describe things that are in the scene or about the characters to readers see the story, to feel it. To write the dialogues, is used the novel format this consisting of writing sentences between dashes, then these, you write who said it or what was doing while was saying it. I'll give an example: -Shut up , I do not want to hear you-, whispered the girl with black hair while some tears were sliding down her cheeks.
You understand? This way is more aesthetic and easier to read. Also you should note that paragraphs should consist of a minimum of 5 lines and a maximum of 10 non stun readers. I say this because I've read some of your stories, and I think you should improve on these aspects, as you have lots of potential and lots and lots of creativity, I loved the plot of your story and I think you should keep writing to keep improving every time more. I hope you take my advice into consideration, and I hope also soon to read the first chapter of this story. Sorry for my bad english.
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