Chapter 5

So many questions But never an answer
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Sehun hugged you tightly " shhht calm down I ensure that everything is going to be okay "

You looked up at him " Promise ? "

He smiled and said " Promise " and then he kissed your lips and your eyes widened but you didn't push him away you just kissed him back 

after a couple of minutes both stopped kissing and were panting " what was that for ? " you asked but he didn't answer you he just hugged you 

you sighed and stayed there while he was hugging you " I'm used to that of not getting answers " you said and he looked at you with a sad face and asked " What do you mean ? " 

" nothing just forget it " you told him and was about to leave but he hold your wrist and said " I love you Mae " your eyes widened and looked at him he pulled you into a deep passionate kiss 

then your phone called you both pulled back " go get it " said Sehun to you and smiled " okay " you said and went to pick your phone " hello with Mae " you said 

" Yah! Did you erase me from your contacts ? " said a familiar voice " Myungsoo oppa ? " you asked with a shocked expresion " yeah it's me I have good news I am going to come back to Korea isn't that great ? " he said and you answered " Yes absolutely " 

 

While you were busy talking to Myungsoo your cousin was Sehun kinda jealous he doesn't know that he is your cousin and the fact you are calling him oppa isn't fun either he got up took his jacked and went out you even didn't pay attetion that he left you were busy with Myungsoo until he asked you about love and there it was " Omo ! I forgot  ! Oppa I call you later back okay ? " you said and he told you that it's fine 

 

you hung up and went to look where Sehun was but you didn't found him you called him 6 times and texted him 15 times but nothing * Where is he ? Why did he go ? Does he think that Myungsoo is sort of a boyfriend to me ? * " aaaaaaaah ! " you screamed out loud and you sat on the ground and cried * everything is ruined, I hate my life * you cried and cried until you fell asleep on the cold floor.

 

 

In Sehun's car 

 

* stupid that I am she has a boyfriend ofcourse I thought she would be innocent but No little beauty has a boyfriend *

ring ring ... ring ring ... ring ring

Sehun l

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uglytruths #1
Chapter 7: This is really good, but you should punctuate your dialogue with a comma inside the closing quotation marks like:
"Hello," he said.
Also, begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes; otherwise, it can be kind of confusing ^^
luhanluhan123 #2
Chapter 6: This is so good!!!! Update soon authornim~
---SEHUNYEHET--- #3
Chapter 3: KEEP IT COOL =^..^=
SehunEmmaOh94 #4
Chapter 5: Can u post two today
yujingugue #5
Chapter 5: Why?Your story is good!!!Pls don't.
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yujingugue #6
Chapter 4: Update Soon!!!
yujingugue #7
Chapter 3: Update Soon!!!
caterinechizen #8
Hi, please update the first cap please, I'll give you some tips for better, because I really like your stories:
a chapter should consist of at least 1000 words, u can count it using Microsotf Word or any other program that counts words. To write stories, you should use the narrative, the story is not only to dialogues, but about the colors, smells, people, objects, weather, you have to describe things that are in the scene or about the characters to readers see the story, to feel it. To write the dialogues, is used the novel format this consisting of writing sentences between dashes, then these, you write who said it or what was doing while was saying it. I'll give an example: -Shut up , I do not want to hear you-, whispered the girl with black hair while some tears were sliding down her cheeks.
You understand? This way is more aesthetic and easier to read. Also you should note that paragraphs should consist of a minimum of 5 lines and a maximum of 10 non stun readers. I say this because I've read some of your stories, and I think you should improve on these aspects, as you have lots of potential and lots and lots of creativity, I loved the plot of your story and I think you should keep writing to keep improving every time more. I hope you take my advice into consideration, and I hope also soon to read the first chapter of this story. Sorry for my bad english.
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