Chapter 6

So many questions But never an answer
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*It's been two days that Myungsoo is staying here with us when is he leaving?* thought Sehun, he was not happy that Mae and he weren't hanging out together...Like...alone...

He wanted to take Mae out for a date but he couldn't cause her cousin was there. Sehun was at his own thoughts until Mae said "I'm going to miss you oppa I thought you would stay a bit longer" she pouted and that made Myungsoo smile "sorry Mae but I have to go to my friend I said to him that I would visit him if I came back to Korea, a promise is a promise you know" he said and ruffled Mae's hair.

Sehun looked at the two of them with no expretion but we all know from the inside he is happy like a maniac! "so you're leaving?" asked Sehun and Myungsoo nodded and then answered "Sehun I want to tell you something from men to men" and you eyed Mae if it was okay to go and she smiled at you and went to your room that both of you shared.

"What do you want tell me?" Sehun asked "you know you don't have to be jealous she is only my cousin" Myungsoo said and Sehun looked shocked at him "me...jealous? W-what a-are saying? I'm not jealous in fact I'm happy her cousin is here to spend time with her" Sehun protested and Myungsoo laughed "okay I believe you."

"So was this the men conversation?" asked Sehun and Myungsoo shook his head "No... I want to tell you that Mae is really sensetive with her feelings you need to be really carefull, one mistake and you will regr

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uglytruths #1
Chapter 7: This is really good, but you should punctuate your dialogue with a comma inside the closing quotation marks like:
"Hello," he said.
Also, begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes; otherwise, it can be kind of confusing ^^
luhanluhan123 #2
Chapter 6: This is so good!!!! Update soon authornim~
---SEHUNYEHET--- #3
Chapter 3: KEEP IT COOL =^..^=
SehunEmmaOh94 #4
Chapter 5: Can u post two today
yujingugue #5
Chapter 5: Why?Your story is good!!!Pls don't.
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yujingugue #6
Chapter 4: Update Soon!!!
yujingugue #7
Chapter 3: Update Soon!!!
caterinechizen #8
Hi, please update the first cap please, I'll give you some tips for better, because I really like your stories:
a chapter should consist of at least 1000 words, u can count it using Microsotf Word or any other program that counts words. To write stories, you should use the narrative, the story is not only to dialogues, but about the colors, smells, people, objects, weather, you have to describe things that are in the scene or about the characters to readers see the story, to feel it. To write the dialogues, is used the novel format this consisting of writing sentences between dashes, then these, you write who said it or what was doing while was saying it. I'll give an example: -Shut up , I do not want to hear you-, whispered the girl with black hair while some tears were sliding down her cheeks.
You understand? This way is more aesthetic and easier to read. Also you should note that paragraphs should consist of a minimum of 5 lines and a maximum of 10 non stun readers. I say this because I've read some of your stories, and I think you should improve on these aspects, as you have lots of potential and lots and lots of creativity, I loved the plot of your story and I think you should keep writing to keep improving every time more. I hope you take my advice into consideration, and I hope also soon to read the first chapter of this story. Sorry for my bad english.
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