Chapter 3

So many questions But never an answer
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Moving day   it's time you and sehun are going to live in one house , you were really nervous cause you had to share a bed with him well that's what you thought until ... Sehun : " get out and go to the guest room ! " Mae : " wae? " Sehun : " you heard me , I was just in front of our parents nice to you " Mae : " what do you mean ? " Sehun : " listen you may be pretty but you're like all the other girls , stupid and selfish the only thing you care is money and we both know that I am rich so don't deny it " Mae : " what ?! how dumb are you ?!! I didn't even ask to marry a jerk like you ! So .. "   SLAP!!!   He hit you straight to your face " don't you dare to raise your voice to me ! Now get OUT!! " You run and went to the bathroom and locked it starting to cry on the cold floor you didn't care if it was cold you wanted to die so you were free of that hell .   after an hour of crying you stood up and washed your face , you were looking in the mirror and could see that your eyes were puffed up  * what should I do he's ruining my whole life * you thought  " Yah stupid get out! I need to take a shower . "  * there he is * you sighed and opened the door not even looking at him you went out    He kinda feld bad about what he did to you , he was thinking apologize to you but didn't dare to do that .   At night   You went to the guest room that it is now you're bedroom and changed in pyjama's laying on your bed looking at the ceiling * well at least I don't sleep with that jerk in the same bed * you thought before you closed you're eyes and
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uglytruths #1
Chapter 7: This is really good, but you should punctuate your dialogue with a comma inside the closing quotation marks like:
"Hello," he said.
Also, begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes; otherwise, it can be kind of confusing ^^
luhanluhan123 #2
Chapter 6: This is so good!!!! Update soon authornim~
---SEHUNYEHET--- #3
Chapter 3: KEEP IT COOL =^..^=
SehunEmmaOh94 #4
Chapter 5: Can u post two today
yujingugue #5
Chapter 5: Why?Your story is good!!!Pls don't.
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yujingugue #6
Chapter 4: Update Soon!!!
yujingugue #7
Chapter 3: Update Soon!!!
caterinechizen #8
Hi, please update the first cap please, I'll give you some tips for better, because I really like your stories:
a chapter should consist of at least 1000 words, u can count it using Microsotf Word or any other program that counts words. To write stories, you should use the narrative, the story is not only to dialogues, but about the colors, smells, people, objects, weather, you have to describe things that are in the scene or about the characters to readers see the story, to feel it. To write the dialogues, is used the novel format this consisting of writing sentences between dashes, then these, you write who said it or what was doing while was saying it. I'll give an example: -Shut up , I do not want to hear you-, whispered the girl with black hair while some tears were sliding down her cheeks.
You understand? This way is more aesthetic and easier to read. Also you should note that paragraphs should consist of a minimum of 5 lines and a maximum of 10 non stun readers. I say this because I've read some of your stories, and I think you should improve on these aspects, as you have lots of potential and lots and lots of creativity, I loved the plot of your story and I think you should keep writing to keep improving every time more. I hope you take my advice into consideration, and I hope also soon to read the first chapter of this story. Sorry for my bad english.
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