Chapter 4

So many questions But never an answer
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Heeeeeeyyy!!! Warning! : Do not read if you can't handle the pain, blood or anything simular and do not and I repeat do NOT try this at home or anywhere else ! 

 

 

 

Living room   You were alone at home Sehun was out with his friends like he always do ,  you were looking at the clock and sighed * I don't deserve a life like this * and there it was when it hits you * what if I wasn't born ? What if I die ? * there you got it you were thinking of killing yourself " at least I can try right ? "    " Who are you talking to ? " You startled and turned to see Sehun looking at you with a confused look on his face  " oh nobody , euhm I gotta go b-bye " 

 

You stood up and run to your room * Pabo pabo pabo! I am so stupid ! * you thought and paused when your eye cached something the scissors * No no no I am not going to do that * but then again you were thinking and went and grabbed the scissors and held it to your wrist before you knew it the blood came out  Your eyes widened and let the scissors fall on the ground and you panicked * Omo omo omo omo ! What have I just done? * you thought and calmed down " It is not bad I feel a little reliefed now cause I feel the pain from the outside and not the inside " you said with a weak smile   

 

 

The next morning    You went down to the kitchen and saw Sehun  Both of you were quiet but then something cached Sehun's eyes  " what is that ? " he pointed to your wrist that you cut yesterday  Your eyes widened and quickly hid it  " It i-is n-n-nothing j-just a little c-cut " you said and stuttered like a maniac and
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uglytruths #1
Chapter 7: This is really good, but you should punctuate your dialogue with a comma inside the closing quotation marks like:
"Hello," he said.
Also, begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes; otherwise, it can be kind of confusing ^^
luhanluhan123 #2
Chapter 6: This is so good!!!! Update soon authornim~
---SEHUNYEHET--- #3
Chapter 3: KEEP IT COOL =^..^=
SehunEmmaOh94 #4
Chapter 5: Can u post two today
yujingugue #5
Chapter 5: Why?Your story is good!!!Pls don't.
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yujingugue #6
Chapter 4: Update Soon!!!
yujingugue #7
Chapter 3: Update Soon!!!
caterinechizen #8
Hi, please update the first cap please, I'll give you some tips for better, because I really like your stories:
a chapter should consist of at least 1000 words, u can count it using Microsotf Word or any other program that counts words. To write stories, you should use the narrative, the story is not only to dialogues, but about the colors, smells, people, objects, weather, you have to describe things that are in the scene or about the characters to readers see the story, to feel it. To write the dialogues, is used the novel format this consisting of writing sentences between dashes, then these, you write who said it or what was doing while was saying it. I'll give an example: -Shut up , I do not want to hear you-, whispered the girl with black hair while some tears were sliding down her cheeks.
You understand? This way is more aesthetic and easier to read. Also you should note that paragraphs should consist of a minimum of 5 lines and a maximum of 10 non stun readers. I say this because I've read some of your stories, and I think you should improve on these aspects, as you have lots of potential and lots and lots of creativity, I loved the plot of your story and I think you should keep writing to keep improving every time more. I hope you take my advice into consideration, and I hope also soon to read the first chapter of this story. Sorry for my bad english.
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