Chapter 2

So many questions But never an answer
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You arrived and both of you got out of the car and went to his house it was really big  from the outside and the inside he told you to follow him and you did . You were in the living room and saw you're parents and also Sehun's parents .   Mom : "Hello honey we were waiting for you " Mae : " mom dad what are you doing here and is it true the marriage ? " Dad : "yes we want you two to marry" Mae : "what? Why?! I am 16 years old , I am too young to marry!" Mom : " honey we know, but we have no other choice " Mae : "Oh !really!?? " Dad : "Yes! It what your grandfather's wish before he died!" Mae : " oh... okay "   You looked down and you apologized to Mrs and Mr Oh about you're behave  Again another answer you will never know you thought and sighed   Mrs Oh : " It's okay I know how you feel but give it a time and maybe you even love it to marry a boy like him " She said and winked and you blushed and Sehun was blushing too  After a long conversation about the marriage it was time for you to go home .    At your room   You were you laying on your bed and stared at the ceiling . Yr Thought's : * Always me ! why ? Did I do something wrong? Did God want me to be punished and I have to marry someone who doesn't like me  But I need to say he is handsome and there are a lot of girls who like to have a husband like him , I mean look at those lips so beautiful and that hair of him is .. wait a second what am I thinking ? * Yo
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uglytruths #1
Chapter 7: This is really good, but you should punctuate your dialogue with a comma inside the closing quotation marks like:
"Hello," he said.
Also, begin a new paragraph when the speaker changes; otherwise, it can be kind of confusing ^^
luhanluhan123 #2
Chapter 6: This is so good!!!! Update soon authornim~
---SEHUNYEHET--- #3
Chapter 3: KEEP IT COOL =^..^=
SehunEmmaOh94 #4
Chapter 5: Can u post two today
yujingugue #5
Chapter 5: Why?Your story is good!!!Pls don't.
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yujingugue #6
Chapter 4: Update Soon!!!
yujingugue #7
Chapter 3: Update Soon!!!
caterinechizen #8
Hi, please update the first cap please, I'll give you some tips for better, because I really like your stories:
a chapter should consist of at least 1000 words, u can count it using Microsotf Word or any other program that counts words. To write stories, you should use the narrative, the story is not only to dialogues, but about the colors, smells, people, objects, weather, you have to describe things that are in the scene or about the characters to readers see the story, to feel it. To write the dialogues, is used the novel format this consisting of writing sentences between dashes, then these, you write who said it or what was doing while was saying it. I'll give an example: -Shut up , I do not want to hear you-, whispered the girl with black hair while some tears were sliding down her cheeks.
You understand? This way is more aesthetic and easier to read. Also you should note that paragraphs should consist of a minimum of 5 lines and a maximum of 10 non stun readers. I say this because I've read some of your stories, and I think you should improve on these aspects, as you have lots of potential and lots and lots of creativity, I loved the plot of your story and I think you should keep writing to keep improving every time more. I hope you take my advice into consideration, and I hope also soon to read the first chapter of this story. Sorry for my bad english.
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