His name was Kai

Description

When Kyungsoo wakes up, everything is fuzzy. He can't remember anything. Who is he? Why is he stuck lying in an unfamiliar bed?

He realises that he is in hopsital, and that nobody can see him. People walk through him as if he doesn't exist. Is he dead?

A boy, probably the only person around that can see him, approaches him, and they talk, and make friends. Time passed (for the love of life, Kyungsoo could never figure out how long they were together), and the two slowly, hesitantly begin to develop deeper, forbidden feelings for each other. Kyungsoo finally admits that he might have a crush on the boy.

His name was Kai.

Kai tells Kyungsoo that he is dead, and that the only reason why Kai can see him is because he's psychic. But Kai's eyes become shifty when he says that, and Kyungsoo isn't sure Kai's telling him the whole truth.

What is Kai hiding?

 

 

Foreword

"Tap. Tap. Tappa tap.

Kyungsoo looked to his right, eyes sweeping from the floor to the top of the closet that stood in the corner, searching for the source of the noise.

It was a boy lying on his side on top of the piece of furniture, wedged in the space between the smooth wood of the top of the closet and the ceiling, tapping his fingers on the wood to some music Kyungsoo couldn't hear. And he was looking right at him.

After being looked through, and unheard by everyone he'd met so far, Kyungsoo felt a warm rush of relief. Maybe this guy could tell him what in the world was happening to him, fill in some of the blank spaces in his mind that clouded his thoughts like static that made radio broadcasts all crackly and unintelligible.

'Hello?' Kyungsoo tried, not daring to hope too much. The boy's eyebrows twitched in response to his voice.

The boy swung off the closet. Kyungsoo leapt up from lying in a dejected, crumpled heap on the floor, half in excitement that someone could see he existed, half in fright that the only person who acknowledged his prescence had gone crazy and was trying to kill himself. The boy landed nimbly on his feet, and Kyungsoo let out a sigh of relief.

'Hi, my name is Kai.' The boy gave a sudden smile, and Kyungsoo watched almost in awe as his eyes crinkled up into two happy crescents.

'I'm Kyungsoo.' Kyungsoo offered, still staring.

'I know.' "

 

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This is my entry for a writing contest,  Happily Ever After Annual Writing Contest of 2013 [feat. EXO] (https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/531935/happily-ever-after-annual-writing-contest-of-2013-feat-exo-contest-writing-writingcontest-exo-prizes), and my quote is "And just before we say goodbye, he takes me up in his arms and then... I wake up."

 

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I'll get this done either tonight or tmr night! Sorry guys!!!

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justaweirdisho #1
Chapter 6: I'll be waiting for your updates.
critiz_ #2
i have a lot of guess & cant decide which suit the most ;n;
omg srs in dying here to know the ending... like imma
go murder someone just to release the stress o~o
justaweirdisho #3
Chapter 5: Lied about what ?!
Kyungsoo not being dead, Kai being a patient in the hospital, something completely different, which is probably more likely.
Thanks for the chapter.
GalitaMiina
#4
Chapter 5: Kyungsoo: what?? What do u mean u lied?? Explain it to me now or i will kill all you love including your puddles!!

I think the ghost is Kai n Kyung is in his comatose state.. But why on earth the ghost could touch a shirt n wore it?

Naaahhh.. I always curious evrytime i read each chapts..
His name was Kai, so his real name is Jongin??

Authornim 빨리 update 주세요...!!!!!
ㅠ.ㅠ
HELENee #5
Chapter 5: Aish I'm so behind.. but in this moment I have no homework and it's sunday.. so I'm gonna read all chapters now :D
God this is so confusing.. don't make me use my brain on a sunday ;_;
I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO THINK. Everyone else have great ideas of what is happening.. i'm like: http://weknowmemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/wat-wat-wat-meme.jpg


But once again you amaze me with all the chapters! They are well written and I love that this fanfic is sligtly different and uniqe. I also love the relationship between Kai and Kyungsoo!
hyohiime
#6
Chapter 5: I've been waiting for an update for so long but I thought it was rude to urge for one; then finally.. *screams* I can't stop thinking about the answer >.<
justaweirdisho #7
Chapter 4: I guess the shirt Kai put on is Kyungsoo's which probaly means hes alive, but he can't see his body, unless he can't see it because it is his body. Kai coud've asked to be in the same room as Kyungsoo if they we lovers and they were in the same accident but he isn't hurt.
Thanks for updating
GalitaMiina
#8
Oh wait, according to the quote im pretty sure Kyung is coma n his soul is wandering n meets Kai.. Bcoz Kyung think Kai'll discharged so he want to say gdbye but instead he wake up from his comatose..
Maybe, KaiSoo are lovers n Kyungsoo need a heart donor so Kai will give him his heart thats why Kai's card name also still attach to his bed..
He lied to Kyungsoo when he said he got car crashed..

Am i wrong?? Okay then i will wait your answer patiently..
*sits at the corner of my room*
:D
GalitaMiina
#9
Uggghhh.. So many options in my head but i just cme up with this guess:
Kyung was in coma, thats why his name's card still on the bed.. Maybe Kai involved in their car crashed n he was the caused of it..
But i think Kai is dead.. But why his name's card is also attach on his bed??
Ggyaaaah molla -_-
N why was kai could touch kyung again?
Oh why im asking too many quest when i should came up with guesses?
OMFG Authornim, im curious to death.LOL..
:D
hyohiime
#10
Chapter 4: I can't stop guessing what it's like but then again, I'd rather you, author-nim update so that I'll get a shock like "OH MY GOD SO ITS LIKE THIS" instead of guessing but not getting an answer. Arghh I really can't wait for the "answer"'!!!