November 24th

This is All That I Can Say

Early in the morning, the managers and CEO go to the hospital. When the managers return to dorm a few hours later, Sungyeol, his eyes wide and unashamedly demanding, is upon them almost immediately.

            “When’s Dongwoo coming back?” he asks, looking down at them from his height as the other members join him, their faces asking the same question.

“What’s going on?” Sunggyu, their leader, the last to arrive but his visage set and deliberate, asks.

            The managers wave their hands at the members crowded in the front hallway, dismissing them.

            “Go practice.”

            The tight-pressed lips of the managers say everything and nothing. Hoya constantly pulls out his phone, feeling phantom vibrations in his pocket, until, near the end of the day, he writes a message of his own. His thumb hovers over Donwoo’s name on his screen, but then He slowly slips the phone back into his pocket. He’ll wait, this one last time. Perhaps no news was good news.

            Hoya practices late into the night. The other members peel off, alone and in pairs, until it’s only him left, dancing in the middle of the room. His movements strike out at the space around him, trying to burn the images of his poses into the mirror. Just as quickly as he strikes them, though, the images fade, until their faint remnants are only left in his memory.

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ItsWompy
#1
Chapter 25: summary: I cried twice
daeyeolli #2
Chapter 25: Whenever I read a great story; I get a feeling of thanking the authour. But this was so REAL. I can say I felt every words and sentences. I wondered while reading "Has this authour experienced such a situation? This is so REAL." I don't know how to thank you but I will really be greatful if you continue writing and share the reasult of your skillful writng with us. Should I read it again? And again? I wish I could write as you. I think I've forgotten how to write. Thank you and hope you and all the talented authours don't hesitate to share their emotions with us.
suhoya #3
I'm very grateful you decided to share your story with us. I am very picky with fanfics and style, so when I found yours I was very very happy to get such a good story from my favourite pairing. I loved everything about it, from -obviously- how you portrayed Hoya and Dongwoo's friendship, to its progression, the narration, the metaphors and your writing style in general. It was very novelesque and, even though it has quite a good number of chapters, I wish it were longer. That's the feeling when you deeply enjoy what you're reading, right? You want more. So thank you again, and I hope this beautiful story may wake up your writing senses again and you will give us more Yadong in the future. Best of luck for your remaining years at college. It's a tiring experience but worth it, try to enjoy your time there as much as possible! :)
Dazza328
#4
Chapter 25: I've never cried for a story before, but I actually had to take breaks halfway through the last two chapter just so I could see straight. This story is amazing and so very well written. Even though I knew how it was going to end, it still hurt. You were able to bring me in to the story and that is a very hard thing to do. I just want to say thank you. Thank you for writing this. It is by far one of my favorite stories I have read in the past few years.
abusedmember #5
Chapter 24: Okay, I can't believe this, I wrote two comments in a day on the same story. Author-nim, all I can say is thank you. Thank you for making me tear up in the morning. I actually stumble upon this story last night and straight up reading half way through it. I don't even know what to write anymore since I'm still emotional over this story, but one thing for sure, you wrap it up pretty nicely.

Thank you
abusedmember #6
I'm blown away! Too many emotions to comprehend. I seriously love this kind of real life situation story but the fact that it's so sad really conflicts with my excitement on reading this. This is beautifully made, I can't wait for future updates. >w<
InfiniteWoonique
#7
Chapter 22: Dongwoo oppa!!! This is just breaking my heart!!! I love this story, the way you write it is good, too
AjBa13
#8
Chapter 21: :'( waaaaah dongwoo be strong!!
Dazza328
#9
I really like your writing style. The way you describe everything makes me picture it and I feel as if I'm watching it rather than reading it. I really hope you write more stories and/or go in to writing professionally. This story is amazing so far.
AjBa13
#10
Chapter 5: woooaaaah *0* in this chapter you captured just the way i see dongwoo's and hoya's dance :3 so diferrent yet so unique on their own. Personally i like dongwoo's dancing more i like the way he flows just as you describe it thanks alot!!