The moon is our sun

Description

 A weak vampire who loves sunshine but is confined to his room because only a few minutes of if could kill him. A vampire who is gentle, cheerful and loves to take care of others and a human who lives at night and sleeps during daytime, a human who is strong, a fighter someone who lives by his own rules and a string of fate connecting both of them.

Foreword

This is going to be my first fanfiction ever. I’ve never written a story in English, so there are probably lots of grammar and spelling mistakes in it. I won’t update regularly and I don’t know how long this story is going to be since I’m not done writing yet.

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whitecheonsa
#1
Chapter 11: I'm so hooked with the plot of this story. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. ^__^
strangeneko
#2
Chapter 11: Seems like they hv to go according jaejoong's plan, so hope the best for jongup and daejae to meet the hunters ><
Lol you brought junsu's chihuahua, kiyeowooo :3

A normal convo with yongguk after a raging himchan, seems like it's the only med that himchan need X)

Thanks for the update! ♥
strangeneko
#3
Chapter 10: I think you don't hv to put any new character again for now..this is alrd good and simple and i love it :))))
But, it's all up to you author-nim if adding the guests will help you build the story :)

And himchan really should listen to daejae bcs everyone worry about him huhu
babiegel #4
Chapter 10: yay you updated :) I wouldn't mind if there was a few more guest appearances (like who's trying to kill Himchan, or who could be his allies or who was the hunter who recognized Yoochun, if he's not dead yet) I hope they manage to convince Himchan to at least listen & think really hard on what Jaejoong has to say to him.

It's interesting how everyone wants to either save Himchan or would rather have him dead. I also like that even though Youngjae, Daehyun & Jongup are suppose to listen to every command he has, they're willing to do whatever it takes to keep him alive even if it looks like they're betraying him.

Also I hope Zelo is able to help Himchan, even if it's just to help him calm down or just for someone to listen to Himchan's worries.
nonamereader01
#5
Chapter 10: Thanks for the update ^_^
Love it
xooxoox #6
Chapter 10: Akh! You updated~ I'm so happy~ it's very interesting~ can't wait for the next
KAZEYAMaruBis #7
Chapter 9: Ohhh shoot cliffhanger !!
Update soon !! Your story is really great I love it!!!
strangeneko
#8
Chapter 9: Ohmygod thanks daejae and jyj arrived on time !!!
But
But
But
Himchan were you totally hungry so you bite him, or you just protect guk bcs well yongguk is a human and the jyj seems dangerous for guk ?

Himlo ♥
TaketheFluff
#9
Chapter 9: I love the bond between Himchan and Zelo ^^
mishmush
#10
Chapter 9: omg it had already good plot and the story got even better!! I guess its a tvxq and jyj confrontation right?))) and all hail to okd vampire stories yay! (whishper your story-telling is good, but ive noticed few minor grammar mistakes,maybe you need yo seek for beta to make this story perfect)