Fourth Step

The Sound of Falling In Love

Unable to pinpoint where Joonmyun is pointing, Kyungsoo remained in the same position until he heard the familiar voice behind him.

“Hey.” The calming smell of jasmine rushed over him again. But instead of calming him, it did the opposite.

Kyungsoo turned around in excitement. He could have easily recognized him with merely his body scent, “Hi.” he said in response, trying to hold back the content in his voice.

“Are you feeling better now?”the boy asked with audible concern.

Kyungsoo felt himself blushing, probably due to embarrassment. “Yeah, thanks for asking.”

“That’s good, I just wanted to make sure that you are alright. I was really worried because you just kind of broke down just right there and… yeah, glad you are okay. Anyways, nice to meet you, my name is Jongin.”

“Kyungsoo, nice to meet you too,” Kyungsoo flashed a smile, “And thank you for … for comforting me and helping me. I owe you one.”

Jongin chuckled, “no problem, I’m glad I did help. Sorry for just randomly pulling into a hug without your permission. I have no idea how to comfort people but I can’t just stand there and do nothing so that’s the best idea I came up with. ”

“Your hug really did help, although it did shock me a little.”

“Sorry,” he giggled, “next time I’ll give you a warning before hand.”

Kyungsoo felt his cheeks warming up again recalling the warmth he felt in Jongin’s embrace. Think about something else Kyungsoo, why are you even blushing. He told himself repeatedly while smiling at Jongin.

“Why don’t you guys grab a seat and watch the show, Luhan is doing push up with Sehun sitting on top of him.” Chanyeol shouted. “It’s hilarious with Luhan constantly failing and Sehun shooting glares at me.”

Kyungsoo laughed in return, feeling sorry for Luhan's embarrassment in front of everyone (although he has no idea who he is) but deep down, he wished that he could have seen the scene for himself instead of having someone describing it for him. Although he have a vivid imagination but it’s still hard when he have no idea what everyone looks like.

“Hey, sit down and watch.” Jongin said after dragging two chairs over.

“I… thanks Jongin.” But I can’t see…. Kyungsoo added in his head.

Naturally, Kyungsoo wouldn’t mind about telling people his disability because he never really minded it in the first place. But he just can’t gather the courage to tell Jongin this time. He felt insecure for the first time and wished that he was normal like everyone else. Something deep down tells him that his imperfection will drive him away and cause him to lose a friend. And Jongin is someone who he doesn’t want to lose as a friend, for no particular reason. It’s odd how he feels this much affection towards a boy he just meet hours ago, just what makes Kyungsoo feel this way about him. He couldn’t understand. Subconsciously, Kyungsoo frowned as he pondered over this.

Jongin, who noticed the boy who sat beside him with such interesting yet concerning facial expression, turned to examine him without the latter realizing.

Kyungsoo has indescribably big eyes and cute heart-shaped lips topped up with bangs that curl to the left. His skin is rather nice too, really soft-looking and squishy. But those lips, those cute lips. Jongin made a mental note to himself that next time Kyungsoo smiles, he need to look at his lips as he examined the rest of Kyungsoo’s face.

They stayed like this for awhile, Kyungsoo buried to deep in his thoughts and Jongin who can’t seem to take his eyes of Kyungsoo before a loud cheer disrupted them. “What’s going on?” Kyungsoo asked.

“I have no idea, I got distracted by something and yeah..” Jongin replied.

“How can you two miss it,” Chanyeol shouted, “we blind folded Sehun while he’s still dizzy from the previous dare and he crashed on top of Luhan after tripping on a chair.”

“Shut up Park Chanyeol!” Sehun yelled with embarrassment.

“It’s your fault for having bad luck.” Chanyeol retorted.

“Why did I even join this stupid game…”

“Come on children, no more fighting, let’s go for dinner.” Joonmyun said while ushering Kyungsoo and everyone else to the entrance.

“I need to fetch my wallet thou-.” Kyungsoo brushed pass by Joonmyun but was stopped by latter who pulled on his arm.

“Come on, it’s my treat.” Joonmyun gave Kyungsoo a light push on the arm.

“Yeah, who needs money when have our sugar daddy.” Chanyeol teased from behind, “In case you didn’t know, Joonmyun is extremely rich; he buys us dinner and lunches a lot. He's like our sugar daddy.”

“Also known as their debit card.” Joonmyun added.

“Are you sure?” Kyungsoo asked feeling like he had taken advantage of someone. “I feel like I owe you, though.”

“Don’t worry about it, just your thought is enough,” Joonmyun hugged Kyungsoo. “Oh yeah, and before we go, this is Luhan, the poor guy Sehun was sitting on.”

“Hi, nice to meet you.” Luhan chirped.

“Nice to meet you too, my name is Kyungsoo.” Kyungsoo flashed a quick smile.

“By the way, does your friend want to tag along?” Chanyeol nudged him from the behind.

“Me?” Jongin asked.

“Yes, you. Are you in or not?” Luhan inquired teasingly.

“Sure, who would say no to free dinner, unless you guys are planning on to drug me and then sell me to some creep old woman that is in need of a slave.” Jongin said jokingly.

“Okay, I guess this guy is hungry for some rich old woman.” Chanyeol commented.

“I’m not ‘this guy’, I’m Jongin, and I am absolutely not hungry for old ladies but for food.” Jongin said while he punched Chanyeol on the arm (or was it somewhere else, Kyungsoo couldn’t tell).

 “Oh, you have a name.” Joonmyun teased, “you came in asking to see Kyungsoo and you disappeared right off without even telling me who you are.”

“Haha, sorry, I was in the washroom. And nice to meet you all.” Jongin ruffled his hair.

“Now come on, I am starving sugar daddy.” Luhan whined while pushing everyone out of the door.

 

/AN:

My deares, I am absolutely sorry for being a lazy and not updating. I was busy cause the 23rd was my bday and then I had parties to go to and then there is boxing day and then I had to start researching for uni and scholarships and ugh.... Anyhow, how have you guys been? have fun enjoying your winter break btw ^^

I tried to be funny again for this new chapter and idek, I dont think this is angst anymore... but oh wells, I can end this any way i want so w.e. But yeah, I lack so much inspiration cause of school and I just wanna sleep or dance all day but ugh, ing school. Sorry for this ty chapter otl. And i got some sad new for you guys, I have midterms and finals in January so I won't be updating at all for January. T_T my body is not ready for diplomas and . 

Thanks for you patience my beloved readers <3

Merry Christmas and happy new year

xoxo, 

Squid

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chanyeolunicorn
#1
Chapter 1: Glad I found it <3
HaneulD #2
Chapter 4: This story is painfully beautiful I fell in love with it sooooooooo much it's just so interesting please update soon ☹
arthemysia
#3
Chapter 3: no way!!!! it's been a while since ur cliffhanger ~ and now, omg~
please have mercy on me, my heart~ ugh *sobs
anyway,glad u updated~ xoxo
harukatheyandere #4
Chapter 1: What happened
spicastellar
#5
Chapter 4: Even Kyungsoo who happened to be the most tolerant and patient people on Earth got tired and bored because there was nothing new.
Even me who happened to be the most tolerant and patient people on Earth got tired and bored because there was nothing new, author-niiiiiiim!
where's that long-awaited Jongin???
waeeeeeee
*dying*
*okay dont kill me I'll be patient promise... if you get me Jongin here ^^
Midnight-B2UTY
#6
Chapter 1: Since it's the first chapter, I'm obviously not able to tell D.O.'s personality, but I see him as someone who's selfless and easily guilty; he doesn't like burdening others, and the feeling of being so dependent/weak makes him guilty. He seems to be kind and understanding, forgiving even.
But I feel like the usage of blind characters is too cliche. It's not unique anymore to see fanfics with someone blind or deaf or mute. But there's nothing wrong with cliche; it can be exactly what a person needs, and enjoyable even, depending on the author's writing style.

Personally, I don't find much unique about your style in particular. It's not too bland and dull, nor is it that beautiful and detailed. I feel like I can't exactly connect with Kyungsoo's feelings due to the lack of descriptive words in the sentences, but I know I'll come to understand him as the story actually progesses since this is--after all--only the first chapter.

What I recommend, though, is that you should try explaining things indirectly rather than directly. You say stuff that's so blunt like, "But he will still miss his hometown..." I think you should elaborate more on his feelings, or use more descriptive words--maybe even add some comparisons.
Rather than the typical "Kyungsoo felt dizzy and drowsy..." that has the same, direct adjectives every other author uses, try using similes; try comparing his feelings to actual things most normal people experience, or can imagine easily (e.g., how dizzy a person might feel after getting off a roller coaster). Try to use comparisons; they make it easier for the reader to understand the characters' thoughts/feelings/actions.

And I'm sorry for the criticizing and long comment. I used to be a reviewer, so I sometimes get too technical--even though this is a story I'm supposed to be reading for personal enjoyment. xD Haha, but I loved this chapter despite the flaws I pointed out. Thanks for taking time to write this. c: And I'm so excited to meet Jongin! >_<
Midnight-B2UTY
#7
This story sounds pretty interesting. It's okay. Haha. I don't like it when authors give away the whole plot in the description/foreword. :) Yay for Kaisoo! <3
I skimmed the beginning of your first chappie, and--just a word of advice--I don't think you have to double space between paragraphs like that. It makes it a little hard to read since I read on my phone and I have to constantly keep scrolling.^^;;; But it's okay. I'm excited to read this, though it will be a while till I start since I'm busy. ;D
spicastellar
#8
Chapter 3: I'm actually craving for Jongin appearance..
inasoong
#9
Chapter 2: omg! cant wait for the next chapter!! :D :D
spicastellar
#10
Chapter 2: who is that guy?
who is it who is it?
omg I wonder how is it, have to use all your senses other then sight?
And on top of that you know no one! :(
Kyungie is bright but I myself feel sad for him :(
*sigh*

oh I'm sorry I just do comment again, I just read like 20 updated fics xD
omg I'm so happy, best day on aff lol xD
and my long-waited-fav-fic is double updated xD


“In case you didn’t know, Joonmyun is extremely rich; he buys us dinner and lunches a lot. He was like our sugar daddy.” Luhan commented.
“Also known as their debit card.” Joonmyun added.

ahahahahaha xD rich a$$ gramp!
I love you gramp xD