There's ALWAYS an END for Everything

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This is my frist story here! HAHAHA. I'll just post some chapters. Please leave comments about my story. With your comments I can improve. :)) Hope you like it Sorry for my poor english. :)

Foreword

L.joe loves Niel more than anything in this world. He wants to be with him till the end of time. He doesn't want to hurt him or anything that will make the boy upset but what if Niel will be engaged soon with a girl he doesn't know well. What will he do? Will he fight for his love and stop the engagement or will he let him be happy with her and let them be. This is an angsty fic everyone. This is a story based on my imagination so if there's another fic like this or story like this I swear it's a coincidence. :)

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Kyubum54321 #1
Sorry babe :(
rizzmore #2
Chapter 3: chapter 3:
this part is so sad.. i almost cry
Seungseobnim #3
Chapter 6: Sorry for such a late comment >< but here it is now~
It was quite good :) i enjoyed reading your story though the ending was sad. But I was kind of confused while reading >< all the writing and dialogue bunched up into large paragraphs makes it harder to read and understand. But overall I liked it^^ maybe next time you could make a new paragraph for every new dialogue by a different person? >< Well you don't have to hehe
theperksofbeingsarah #4
Chapter 5: omg you should make a sequel :) i cried so bad omfg.
you should make a sequel & make it longer. ahh just a suggestion(:
favorite one shot-ish story<3
P_frog10 #5
Chapter 5: I don't feel the angst and I dun understand the ending.... :/
but it's nice to read Niel's story coz there's just few at AFF..n
KittyShawol23 #6
Chapter 5: Oh~ I forgot it's genre is angst~

But... great job author-nim!! I like it ^^

Fighting~ please make a sequel for this, and it can be a happy ending (Of course, if you want)
Kyubum54321 #7
Guys, please leave comments and suggestions. :'( :)) I really need it,
KittyShawol23 #8
Chapter 2: Update soon! ^^
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