Sorry babe :(

Chapter 3: chapter 3:
this part is so sad.. i almost cry

Chapter 6: Sorry for such a late comment >< but here it is now~
It was quite good :) i enjoyed reading your story though the ending was sad. But I was kind of confused while reading >< all the writing and dialogue bunched up into large paragraphs makes it harder to read and understand. But overall I liked it^^ maybe next time you could make a new paragraph for every new dialogue by a different person? >< Well you don't have to hehe

Chapter 5: omg you should make a sequel :) i cried so bad omfg.
you should make a sequel & make it longer. ahh just a suggestion(:
favorite one shot-ish story<3

Chapter 5: I don't feel the angst and I dun understand the ending.... :/
but it's nice to read Niel's story coz there's just few at AFF..n

Chapter 5: Oh~ I forgot it's genre is angst~

But... great job author-nim!! I like it ^^

Fighting~ please make a sequel for this, and it can be a happy ending (Of course, if you want)

Guys, please leave comments and suggestions. :'( :)) I really need it,

Chapter 2: Update soon! ^^