The Beggining Of The End

Give Me A Sign

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"Ok,Yoonseo don't be anxious!It's your first time,just show them what you got!" Umma kissed my forehead and then left.

I was so anxious to be honest.It was my first time to my swimming class and I wanted to be really good.

"Oh,so you're Yoonseo?Our new team member?" Suddenly a really pretty lady appeared smiling at me.I nodded.

"I am your coach,Lee Hyori." She stepped back and five kids appeared."Annyong,Yoonseo!" One of the two girls said smiling.

"I am Jinkyung,the team's leader!This is Seohyun,Taemin,Jonghyun and Minho!" She intoduced the rest of the team to me.

My eyes stopped at Minho.He was really sweet and cute and the tallest in the team.He was also gazing at me smiling.

I smiled shyly and then turned my gaze away in embarrassment."Ok,time for workout.Get on the footboards everyone!"

I was getting more and more anxious as we were about to begin.I turned my head around and saw Minho looking at me.

He got startled by my action and turned his gaze away,bitting his lips.I chuckled and got back in my position.

"Since it's your first time Yoonseo,I won't be harsh on you." The coach said smiling and grabbed her whistle."Dive!"

Everyone dived in the pool and so did I.I was doing exactly what the rest of the kids were,trying to catch up with them.

"I wont be harsh on you...that's what she said.." I mumbled to myself trying to catch my breath.

"Don't mind coach.She just wants our team to be perfect!" Suddenly Minho appeared smiling."Come,I'll help you~"

He held my hand and began swimming.He was really helping me keeping up with the others.

"Looks like my son has already fallen for your daughter!"

"Seems so!But...perhaps he shouldn't..."

 

As the days were passing,I was getting better and better at swimming,thanks to Minho's help and private lessons of course.

My team was like my second family,I loved all of them.Minho had also introduced me to the rest of his friends,Key and Onew.

I was really close to them as well.But my life was not as nice as it looked like.Not at all.

I began failing,failing everywhere.At the competitions I would get only 2nd and 3rd place,never 1st like I used to.

My grades at school were also falling vertically,I was failing at almost every exam.My mother was not satisfied at all.

The arguements between us were getting worse and worse,there were times I would sleep at Minho's place due to our arguements.

She was giving me chances to return to my lost self,but there was no success at all.

Then,10 years later when I was 16,it was my last and final chance to unwind.My very final chance.

If I was to lose at my final competition,my mother would send me back to my father back at Greece.I couldn't leave.

 

One day before my big competition and I had swimming class.I couldn't keep up with the others,though.

I was just sitting at the other side of the pool with my head and arms on the tiles around the pool,crying.

Minho couldn't keep up as well,he kept looking at me worried.He couldn't take it anymore,so he approached me.

"Yoonie?" He murmured.His voice made me cry even more,but I was trying to keep quiet."Yoonie,what's wrong?" He asked.

I was just bitting my lips,silent."Yah,why won't you--" He touched my shoulder and stopped talking."W-Why are you crying?"

He asked worried."M-Minho.." I mumbled crying."I...might be leaving." His expression immediatly changed.He had frozen.

"Leave?T-To w-where?" he asked."Back at Greece...If I lose at this competition,I'm leaving.." I explained quietly.

"Y-You can't leave!You can't leave our team,you can't leave school,you can't leave your dreams,you can't...leave me.." he cried out.

"Minho,It wasn't my choise--" His action made me pause.He had wrapped his arms around my waist,back hugging me tightly.

He had his head against my back,rubbing himself on me.I could feel him crying.He was crying a lot and that was killing me.

 

"Aniyo,Yoonseo...You can't leave...I won't be able to bear living without you..." He was crying silently."J-Jebal..."

I took a deep breath."Minho..." I whispered his name."Did you forget our promises,Yoonseo?" He asked out of the blue.

 

"Promise one,never forget each other!"

"Promise two,never leave each other!"

 

"Did you forget our last promise,Minho?" I asked,breathing heavily."If one of us was to leave,the other woud search everywhere to find that one and once we were together again,we would never let go.Never.We would live and die together." I reminded Minho.

I turned around to face him."Minho..." I whispered."Promise me you'll come and find me..." I begged crying.

"I swear on my life,I will search everywhere for you and once I'll find you,I will marry you so that nobody can tear us apart again."

He was caressing my cheeks as he was crying as well.I wrapped my arms around his neck and embraced him tightly.

I just didn't want to let go.I couldn't leave the only one I ever loved behind...I couldn't...

 

"Those two grew up together...they fell in love with each other...just why do they have to seperate..."

 

 


I freaking HAD to write this (  o_o) I am so freaking happy I had this dream! Not only it gave me an awsome idea for a story but my friend also told me that according to my dream,tears are a good sign and that when I become about 15-16 i will meet somebody who will make me reaaaaally happy *OMFG PLEASE 16TH BDAY COME QUICKLY*

I.AM.SO.DESPERATE. (  τ__τ)

 

PLEASE don't be a silent reader! I really badly madly want to know what you think about this story!!! GOMAWO <3

FIGHTING! AND please wish me luck since tomorrow I have Iliad exams *and it's quite hard (  >_>)*

shutting up now...and I'm going to sleep cuz I need it :3 byeeeeeeeeeeeee^^

 

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LittleSushi
#1
Chapter 10: Kya yay~~~~~ ^^ more chapters OwO WAAAH MINHO YOU BAD KID! YOU ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO DO THAT! haha at leats he is forgiven now ^^ Kya~ Listening to Hello Venus 's What are you doing tonight? get's me on good mood and this great chap too ^^ but It could have been.... hmmm, more detailed? I mean, about the Minho thing. And, the strangeguy thing reminds me of Reply 1997, drama that I just finished and there's a scene like that XD but there the main guy (Seo In Guk :Q__ he's so y)saved the main girl.... well oh well, I'm so tired -~-' I had a long day with my school band... well, that's all ^^ update soon^^
LittleSushi
#2
Chapter 8: Uh~~~~ What about minho?? ~.~ anyways, I just realised two things! 1st: well, it's like out of the blue the story is more about teen top than about shinee; and Minho is not appearing a lot in the chaps, right? Uh, well, so you should fix the tags:3
2nd: It's something about the languaje, uh, you know, when you say ***-shi is like formal languaje, and I don't get why does she talk informal to everyone and forlmal sometimes with L.Joe.... well, forget it. Please forgive my broken english in this comment, maybe you did not understand a thing but I'm having a hard time writting this kekeke I don't know why but maybe because I'm not thinking properly when it's about talking. ok weird but well ooh well bye~
LittleSushi
#3
Chapter 6: 1st: YOU CAN'T START SOMETHING AND THEN DEIDE TO END IT SO SOON BECAUSE YOU DO NOT HAVE INSPIRATION! Ok, I know I should not be like this -.- but it really pisses me off… if you are not sure about the story then just not post it, just write it in your computer or something and if it goes ok, great, post it. If not, don't. You dissapointed me u-u I really liked the idea of this story… 2nd: in something happier… MINHO FOUND HER? SHE LIKES LJOE~ WHAT IS SHE GONNA DO? O_O hhahhhhahahah well… I thinks that's all? please don't get mad at me for scolding u, but as your unnie, I'm supossed to do this, ain't I? happy unicorns and rainbows flying around, littlesushi rolls out!
LittleSushi
#4
Chapter 3: uwaaah T T waeyo? He's so sad now TT TT kya>< well, at least is an update, isn't it? okay Have to go to shool band now T T last practice today! on sunday we have a desfile(??) and then It's over untill next semester… gah. Well bye!^^
i-m-still-alive
#5
Chapter 1: wah great one dongsaeng *-* sounds like a cool dreamm
do update moooooore<3
LittleSushi
#6
Chapter 1: waaa~ sounds cool! but everything happened so fast >< anyways, update soon! and good luck with your exams ^^ today i had an english test, but the teacher forgot to finish the exams and we have to do it tomorrow… even though i dont need to study, i'm happy xD and plus a physics exam tomorrow… about the sound… gah, i dont need much study for that.-. yeah I'm like a nerd, except I don't study much… still, i think I'm the first in my class this semester… hehe. well, good luck and bye!